AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Beautiful concept :-) can't wait to read more

I hope AsYa don't need to suffer so much

I hope Asad realises his mistake soon

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t1234

@t1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

I stumbled across this accidentally and read all parts!

That was amazing!

You describe everything to a T and as the audience we can feel all their emotions and feel the cold air, see the dull sky, just everything!

This isn't criticism at all because I don't think anyone could fault that, because of the amount of detail that's gone into it, but I personally woudlve loved to have known exactly what his cologne smells like

Is it musky, strong, does it have a cool scent, a hint of mint?

I think it all adds to the character :)

Great work nevertheless and I look forward to reading the next part!

PS - please do PM me when you update!

Edited by t1234 - 12 years ago

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

waiting patiently for the next chapter continue sooonn

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great1980

@great1980

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Plzz pm me the latest part

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Just read all parts. 😛 This is drop dead amazing! Seriously, it's beautifully written and the concept/storyline are wonderful too! 👍🏼 I love everything about this story! ❤️ Especially the "I love you" engraved in the ring! 😳 Really creative. 😊 You express both Zoya and Asad's pain really well, too. 👏 I'm having trouble finding words to describe this! 😉 Lol! 😆 Update this as soon as u can, plz! 😃

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

amazing writing- waiting for an update

btw, can you have an index on the first page? thanks

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t1234

@t1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Awaiting impatiently for the next update!!

Please do update soon!!!

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asma

@Asyadeewani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

This was truly superb awesome amazing and fantastic please please update soon waiting for impatiently and please pm wen u update

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Seriously i cried... thanks plz update soon

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Just read all 3 chapters and absolutely loved it. I feel so bad for Zoya, poor girl is getting her heart broken and Asad so deserves this. Just hope he changes his mind before it's too late. Do PM me when you update the next chapter !!