AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour - Page 15

Originally posted by: NVBGKY

Oh My God I love, love, love your story!!!!!👏

I just stumbled across it this morning, and read all three chapters at one go. You write so well that I could feel the pain that Asad and Zoya both feel and the confusion that they were going through was heart-wrenching...but I loved the small gestures of love that were present also. Of course I love the engraving on the ring, Asad placing the jacket around Zoya and even the part where Asad doesn't want to get engaged under the special light effects done by Zoya.

Bravo, beautiful story... Looking forward to the next chapter.

Would love a PM when you update, thanks.

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

omg tis is such a beautiful piece of work...

the story is really amazing.

just luv the way u potray asad n zoya character it different n unik...

feel so bad fr zoya n asad...

please continue soon n please pm me fr the next update...

just luv it...eagerly waiting fr the next part...👏

Originally posted by: Mojo.

OHGOD. Same here, what was so difficult about saying yes? :| Tanveer is a bitch, she is so annoying. Why does she have to interfere not like she'll ever get to be with Asad :P and he let's her because she is his so called 'bestfriend'. Haha emotionally challenged as Zoya says 😆

*Res. Will read it in a while :)

*edited.

It was a great part Sanaa. I loveddd ittt <3 he gave her the family ring yayyy :D But he is scared of hurting her, can't he see how much he is hurting her by marrying Tanveer? :| Ohgod, that was the best way to confess his feelings wow. So different. Shit he had almost said he didn't want to marry Tanveer but lights? Really Asad? -.- He should just kick Tanveer out of the picture and marry Zoya. :P Last part was really nice, him giving her the jacket and finally Zoya shouting at him. I want to read moreee soon. Waiting to see what happens. Continue soon :D and just one thing, maybe you haven't proof read it, there are some spelling errors :) just informing. Keep up the great work :D

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Oh Asad...whz are zou doing this to yourself and zoya...That TANNUUU...when is her real face is going to come out...That witch...

A beautiful SS...Up-date sooonnn...!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: asulpyaar

just waiting for ur next update !!