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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one. Plz pm me when u updt next part.
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hiii frns... Here is the 2nd part of MistakIn dilshad's room..ya allahh aaj jo kuch bi hua vo thik nahi hua...
Me janti hu asad zoya ko pasand karta he fir vo kyun ye qubool nahi karta k vo zoya ko pasand karta he...
In asad's room:...
Ye sab kya ho raha he mere sath.
He was pacing in his room... He just cant accept whatever happened bofore some time... Me and Tanveer...
I kno she is perfect for my family...she has all tahezib... All values that i wanted n my wife... Then y today i m fealing like something is wrong..y ...???
Damn.. Zoya heard everything..he punched his fist on the wall...he was fealing so misrablr..
What the...!!! Y m thinking about zoya... I dont care how she is fealing now..i don't love her. C is misfit.. C is megnat of trouble.. C always interfear in others problemm...i don't love her no I dont.. Den y i cant bear the tears in her eyes... Why wen she laughs i feals soo good.. Whenever she stuck in some problem y i go to rescue her...WHY...WHY..WHY...
He again punch on the wall...
He remember all the moment withzoya..
Wen he 1st time.saw her.. Their innumerable fights..wen he saw her lifeless in jungle...wen she helped him for his ammi... Wen he slid the ring in her finger.. Then the hug.. And today whatever ke said in the hall...
Bang again the punch...
Why he is thinking about zoya...
Why..????
Inzoya's room:..
Tears were flowing down her cheeks... She just can't understand what happened to her...
What's wrong with me allah miya...why m fealing so hurt today...why i'm fealing like i lost something today...
Why m just crying like mad.. This is not the first time that Mr.Khan has told me Misfits then why its hurting me like hell..
I know that all was drama.. The engagment.. The rose which Me.khan had given me today... Then why its hurting me so much...
i need some fresh air... I cant stay here like this...
She went out in the garden and sit on the bench and open her music.
she was just thinking about all moment wen asad helped her wen sje come to know about her father..how he console her... The airport scenes..but he already told her that it was all drama then why it is hurting...
I don't like him.. I don't love him OR I LOVE HIM????..
I have full trust on him that whenever i m in problem or i m falling he will come to me ..If this TRUST Means LOVE.. Then YES I LOVE him.
whenever he is around me my heart skips a bit if it means this is love .. Then YES I LOVE him.
Whenever i saw tear in his eyes..my soul also get hurt.. i felt like i should hud him and take all his pain..if this means to be love..Then YES I LOVE him.
Whenever he is with Tanu i felt so jealous if that jealoust is love..Then YES I LOVE him.
YES..YES..YES..I LOVER.KHAN...NO..
I LOVE ASAD...
she was smiling and hen reality strikes her... His words were ringing in her mind...
I DON'T LLVE ZOYA...I CAN'T MERRY HER...
she started crying... She fell on the ground...
I LOST MY LOVE..TODAY MY TRUST..MY HEART..MY SOLE...ALL ARE BROKED TODAY...HE DON'T LOVE ME..HE HATES ME...
slowly she went in her room.and again startes crying and with that she fell.sleep...
There was one person who was witness of the confession of zoya's love...
next day..
on dinnigtable...
All wer quite.. Dat cat was soo happy dat finaly she is going to marry asad ahemad khan...
Dilshad and najama was all.quite on table wen asad came...
asag: Good morning ammi...
Dilshad: good morning asad..
Dilshad handled the mug to.asad... She didnt said anythink but she can tell that asad hadnt sleep whole night...she wanted to talk to.asad..
Asad was waiting for zoya to come for breakfast but she didn't come...
Dilshad: najma zoya kaha he?? Vo breakfast ke liye nahi Aayi..
Najma:ammi bo me gai thi zpya ke roomme .usne kaha use bhukh nahi he or use kuch kaam he to vo baad me kha legi..
Dilshad: thik he a little she kno y zoya didn't come for breakfast..
Asad was fealing restlessness... He just wanted to go and check to zoya but he sat quit..
Dilshad wents to.asad's room..
Dilshad:asad..
Asad: ji ammi..
D: muje maf kardo asad.. Me bina tumse puche ye aelan kar diya ke me tumhara nikah 10din k.andar karva dungi..c was crying..
Asad: nahi ammi.. Ye apka haq he ammi..mevahi karungajo aap kahengiammi.. Aaj ahamko meri savai hokar rahegi..
D: asad kya tum Tanveer se nikah karne k liye taiyar ho..muje pata.he asad tum zoya ko pasand karte ho fir que inkar kar rahe ho.. Itni badi galti mat karo asad..ki zindgi bar tumhe pachtana pade..ek bar apne dil ki suno asad..plass..
Asad went to dilshad and hug her
Asqd:mene fesla le liya he ammi.. N with that he went to zoya's room..
Asad went in zoya' s room.without nocking...
Asad. Miss faruqui..
zoya wS standing near window..
Asad went to her and saw her pale white face.. Her res swollen eyes..the shine in her eyea werw lost somewhere..
he was fealing so hurted...
asad: i wanted to talk with you miss faruqui...
Zoya just can't stand infront of him so she walked away from tbe room..
Asad got angry and follow zoya to the hall...
Asad: miss faruqui mene kaha muje apse kuch bat karni he..
Zoya: stands there.. I know. Mr khan ..apko mujse kya baat karni he..
Asad:kya?? Aap janti he??
Till that dilshad.najma..anu all came to hall.
Zoya: apko ye ring vapas chahiye na mr.khan for your real sagai.. Me apko ye vapas dene hi wali thi...
Asad shocked...
Zoyatried to remove the ring but it was so tight that it stuck in her finger..
zoya: aahhh.. It was hurting zoya... But not more than her heart was hurted...
Asad cant watch that... It hurting him as well as her..
Asad: miss faruqui dont remove this ring..
Zoya: no mr.khan i dont need this nakli sagai ki anguthi...
Asad: ZOYAAA...
Thats it guys...i hope u all like this..
i vl update next and last part soon...it vl surprise for alll...
Thank u...
s lile and comments if u like this part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg..tat was awesome..pls continue soon.i cant bear this suspence..pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm dear.
plz update it soon nd pm me wen u update it. 😊
Edited by rkbala - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god! Asad and his ego😡
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Love this! Please update soon! And please PM if you do :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx 4 likimg it frnz ... I vl update 3 rd and may b the last part on Monday...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous! Sooo many words! But those words aren't enough! I mean yeah some grammar problems and such but still very good! Amazing! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome!!!!!! please continue...and pm me please
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Part 3...
Asad:zoyaa..
Zoya was now scared she thought wat if mr
Khan told her to leave the house... Asad saw her and close his eyes to calf down
Asad: zoya i wanted to tell u something please listen to...
Ding dong..Ding dong...
Najma open the door..
Najma: aapyaha?? Firse koi problem ho gai he kya sir..??Or please aap under aaiyena..
Mr.bhatavdekar: HELLOOO mr.khan.. And miss
Faruqui..
Asad: mr.b aap yaha?? Any problem ???
Mr.B: no no mr.khan woh me apke or miss faruqui ke signature lene aaya tha kuch zqruri papers par ..for formality..
Asad: ya sure..
Mr.b handed the papers to asad.. He signed on and passed to zoya.. Zoya signed the papers andreturned to mr.b..
Mr.b: by the way congrats Mr. & would be Mrs.khan..
Zoya heard the word MRS.KHAN... OHHH HOW SHE WANTED TO BE CALLED MRS.KHAN..but now every thing is over.. Sshe was feeling like crying again..
Mr.B: miss faruqui.. Aaj aaap bahot chup chup si he koi problem he kya??
Asad noticed that and quickly grabs zoya's hand and entwined with his hand ( as every time zoya did)
Zoya was so shocked about it.and she was staring to asad...
Asad: no no mr.b hatavdekR aesi koi bat nahi he wo kya he na aksar sagai se pahele ladkiya gabra jati he isi liye zoya shayad aese behave kar eahi he..
noe zoya fuming..she tried to get our oh his hand but asad was so quick to hold her hand tightly again.
He was smirksing now and on otber hand zoya was fuming..
Zoya: how dare to hold my hand like after that whatever he told about me...
Mr.b: miss faruqui aap thik he..
Zoya: with fake smile. Ya ya mr.bhatu.. Bhta.. Mr. Dhurandar.. Thank u...
MrB. : wese kab he sagai??
Asad: aaj shamko..
Dilshad: woh kya he na humne ek chota sa hi function rakha he..is liye zyada logo ko invit nahi kiya he..
Mr.B: ohh i understand.. Wese jaldi hi apko apke sare viza papers mil jayeng.. Ach ab me chalta hu.. Asad: thank u sir..
As soon as mr.bhatavdekar left zpya take her hand away and asked asad very angrily..
Zoya: why mr.khan ?? Apne aesa kyun kaha ki aaj shamko hamari sagai he jabke aaj shamko aapki or Tanveer ki sagai he??
Asad can see the hurt in her eyes..
Zoya: anyway mr khan ab apko or juth bholne ki zarurT nHi he.. Phuphi me apse kuch kahena chahti hu..
Dilshad : habeta bolo??
Zoya: phuphi me Newyork wapas jana chahti hu..
Asad was taken a back with her statement... He can't even think to aparting from zoya..
Dilshad: kyun zoya.. Tum kyun jana chahti ho??
Najma: ha zoya please mat jao na .. Abi to mera vacation bi shuru nahi hia he plsss zoya mat jao na..
Zoya: nahi tamater plss aesa mat bolo..wese bi kabina kabi to muje yaha se jana hi hoga na.. I can't stay here forever..
With that she ran in her room.
tanveer: are wahh iske sqtb to meri dono problem solve hogai.. Ab me asad se nimah karungi or zoya bi ye desh chodke chali jayegi..wahh tanu lavta he aaj kismT tuj pe kuch zyada hi maheban he..
Dilshad: jao asad zoya se baat karo isse pahele ki bahot der ho jaye..
asad: ji ammi.. Par tanu??
Dilshad: me usse abi baat karti hu..
Asad noded and went to zoya's room.
Dilshad: tanveer muje tumse kuch baat karni he.. Vo me kahena chahti thi...
Zoya in her room:::..
she was crying badly when she heard he dooe noke she wipe away her tears and open the door.
Zoya: aap...aap yaha kya kar rahe he??
asad: muje aapse kuch baat karni he..
Zoya: acha or kuch bi kahena baki reb gaya he.. Ohh shayad aap muje ye batana bhul gaye k how i'm Misfit for.you..ya shayad aap mujse ye kahene aaye he ki aap bahot khush he k me finally yaha se ja rahi hu..dont worry mr.khan iss bar me nahi rukungi.. Or apko ...
Asad had had enough.. He held her west with onee hand and pulled her and with other hand he kept his finger on her lips.. Zoya was shocked withhis gestures so she mooved away..asad stared walking forward and zoya backword..zoya: mr khan.. Wat are. Uu... Dd..ddoing???. now zoya stuck between asqd and wall.. She was strugling to go from ther but asad put his hand on wall..
Asad remove her locks and tuccked them behind her ear.. Zzoya was feelings goose bumps all around her body.. A
Asad slowly take something from his pocket. And make her wear in her ear..
Zoya just touch the earing..
zoya: ye to meri earing hr jo kho gai thi iska matlab ye apke pas thi?? Apne muje kabhi vapis kyun nahi di..
Asad: ha.. Ye mere pas thi ..mene hi ye apse chupake apne pas rakh di thi.. Me ye tumhe wapse nahi dena chahta tha..
Zoya was only staring at him..
Asad: me hamesha isse apne pas rakhna chahta tha apki nishani k tor pe kyunki aap isse bahot pyar karti he ye apke liye bahot kimati he...
ar ab muje iski koi zarurat nahi..
Zoya: again..again he hurt her.. Wat the hell.. Me janti hu kyun apko iski zarurat nahi kyunki ap kisi miss.misfit ki koi cheez apne pas nahi rakhna chahte..
asad: he keep his finger on her lips and wipe the tears with other hand..
Asad: ha ab muje tumhari koi nishani k zarurat nahi kyunki aab me tumhe kabi khud se dur nahi jane dunga...Ab tu. Hamesha yahi rahogi mere pass mere sath.. MRS.ASAD AHEMAD KHAN baan kar..
Zoya was so shocked that she forget to blink.. Was she dreaming or mr akdu ahemad kahan actually telling her...
Asad: me tumhara vishwas ..tumhara dil kabi nahi todunga zoya.. I will always be by your side.. .zoya started crying noe she push asad..
Zoya: me. Khan u r really emotionally changed.. Itna sqb kahe sakte he par ye nahi kahe sakte k zoya. I Love You...
Asad: zoya I..
Dilshad: ahem ahem...
Asad and zoya wasfeeling so embarrassing..
Dilshad come forward. And hug zoya kya tum.mere bete se nikah karogi..
Zoya slydly blush a d nodded yes.. Dilshad was feeling very happy she hugged both..
..
At evening:
Dilshad tols tanu that asad is getting merry to zoya tanu was v.v.angry..
Asad was egerly waiting for.zoya to come down. He had wore black suit...
Then only zoya come down with najma beautifully dressed in red dress..
asad was just staring zya as he lost somewer in her..
Dilshad: ahem..ahe.
Asad moved his gaze..
Asad slid the ring in zoya' s finger as well as zoya..
Dilshad was so happy that finally asad is getting merried...
Asad wanted to talk to zoya but every one was around her no one was letting him to talk to her..
Zoya was on cloud 9 today..
asad was sitting grumpily on sofa all alone..
Zoya: of hoo
mr.khan aaj aapki sahai hui he thoda to muskuraiye.. U r seriously emotionally challenged.
asad was staring her in disbelief dat he wanted to spend some time with her and here she was lacturing him
Asad: isse to me bad me batauna emotionally challenge kise kahte he..
Every one went to their roo. After the function ..when zoya was going to her room asad dreg her in his room and locked the door..
Zoya: mr khan ?? Aap.. Ye aap kya kar rahe he?? Koi dekh lega to???
Asad.🥱.: achha apko badi fikar he.. Vese kya keh rahi thi aap.. Emotionally challenged?? Hmm ...
Asad pinned her in wall and put his both hand on wall that she cant run away.
Zoya: zoya smile no mr khan vo me.. Actually.. Actually. Vo me ye kah rahi thi k...me...kk
Asad..: k... Aap ..asad was so close to her.. Asad leaned on her and kissed her on her cheek ..and said I LOVE YOU ZOYAA. zoya' s cheeks turned in red tomato colour..
asqd: sooo u r supposed to reply it zoya.. He said in his husky voice
Zoya smile.. I LLOVE YOU ASAD... I LOVE You SOOO MUCH with that they both hug eachother...

THE END....

HOPE YOU LIKE IT...

THANKS FOR READING IT...
MITWAAA ISHQ PEZOR NAHI...

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