Os: Mistak..PART 3.pGE 6..last part..

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hey frnds...i'm divi n this is my 1st evr writing on this forum...
so hop u will.like this.
After seeing tpday's epi i just. Cant control my self to writing this... This is nly running in my headd...
Mistak...
(based on today's precap)
..
Dilshad: bolona beta karte yo na pyar tum zoya se???
Asad jst mooved away nt watching in ammi's eyes
D: bolona asad karoge na nikah tum zoya se???
zoya was standing behind them jst waiting 4 asad's answer..
Her heart was racing so fast. c was stuck in a critical situaetion...
at that time all came in the hall... Najma was just staring at her bhaijan and ammi... Tannu dat cat was just prying dat asad vl tell no ...
D: asad tum kuch javab kyun nahi de rahe ho... Pls asad bolona... Karte ho na tum pyar zoya se???
Zoya was realy numb at that time ...
asad: Nahi... I never mean it ammi... I dont love zoya... I cant marry her...
Dilshad:y asad ?? Y u cant merry her???
asad: because she is.MISFIT for me and our family...
Zoya' just brok down completely she was fealing like some 1 had stabed herheart...she just can't stay ther..
Watevr happened on airport was all drama... C just cant anymor but c cant cry infront of Asad... No... Mr.khan...
Dilshad was so angry and hurt so she told asad dat if he will not merry zoya den he has to merry tanveer As c vl b fit for asad only..
In all this thing asad was not aware that zoya was behind him...
He just can't think properly...
Zoya just run in her room and bang the door so.loudly den wen asad realise that zoya had hear everything but he still not awar of his fealing but he never thought that her ammi vl choose tanveer now he was stuck between his mind and her heart...
. Dilshad told him clearly that by tomorrow evening he has to get engaged with tanveer as little she kno asad vl chang her decision...
So frnz hows this i had 1st time try something... If i get response on this os i vl continue this ... N i swear i vl not break ur hear by aprting ASYA...
So please let me know how was this...
Both positive and negative coments vl b accepted...


PART 1: PG 1
PART2: PG 3
Part 3 last part: pAge 6
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CrazyForAshish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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itz gud re... Bt my heart is beating fast continue it soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
do conitnue + PM :)
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THANK U FRNDS Im gng to continue it ...i vl updat next part soon...
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Please please continue... incase tomorrow turns out to be disappointing this will get me through the weekend :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PM me and please continue it and make it better! Really good though!
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Plz continue
Do pm me too...
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really nice plzz do continue!!!
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i vl updat tomoro or tonight...
N tx all 4 liking my story ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey frnz m back but not with update... Tdy funny thing hapen with me while watching qubool hai...my dad came from behind and suddenly told by pointing to tanveer that "Is she dayan???"ha ha ha lol... Actly c hd playd dayn role in some serial dats y... But c is seriously A Dayan... I vl update tomorrow pakka...

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