AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#1 ~ Link to T#2 Page 1! - Page 98

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

Unres.
Yaaayyy! As much as I was dying for you to update, i'm like the last to read it :(

OMG! The flashback had me in tears, I hate that guy! Deepak is a a-hole and he needs a punch from moi! Grrr!! I cried, so so cruel! My poor Zoya baby! Restraining order? Stalker alert! Loool! Eurghhh!
Your ability to portray emotions, beaaautiful my lovess! So descriptive, I could feel each and every emotion!
Asad and his stupid thoughts, so glad he didn't question her about 'being forward' or else he woulda lost her then and there! Ya Allah, he's some major loser that Deepak, he followed herto India :O
Body builder? Lmfaooo!
And omg how they defensively jumped in front of her was priceless! One thing i love about Asad is his protective nature, even though he had said some hurtful stuff to her making him no different to Deepak, the way he wanted protect her and squeeze the life out of the guy made me go all gaga over him. He really does love her, i'm so glad he stood up for her although he was the one always judging her character! *sighs* Neeeru and Kareena are wonderful friends, I hope they help them out! Zoya's sobs had me crying, I was literally shaking at her state, my poor baby. Yaaayy Asad threw him out wooo! Love my sher!
Zoya all lifeless, why oh why? This was so painful poor thing. I love how he took care of her and omg, their conversation :( if only he trusted her! I cried so much throughout their converstion she should forgive him already although he deserves it... I can't see him in pain. Everything is back to square one again, Asad has to start afresh and win her over.

The whole chapter was wonderfully written, abss loved reading every word. Your descriptions are so beautiful, love love love the way you write. Thank you so much for the monster update!! Loved it. It was wonderful, fantastic, beautiful ermmm and everything else! Sorry for the essay I had to go through it bit by bit!
Please please update sooon lovely! Wanna read moreee! MWAH!! xoxoxoxox

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

I absolutely loved Asad's dialogues in this update 😳 every single word of his was full of emotion and I could literally picture him saying those words 😭

yeh Deepak kahan se aaya I don't know.. but he surely is one hell of an ass 🤬 i don't even wanna say anything about him.. i just wish Asad would have punched him and deformed his face 😡 who does he think he is 🤬 nalayak kahi ke 😡

Zoya ki doston ki jai!! 🤣 Zoya's friends are pretty smart 😆 they see that there's a little something going on between these two.. and I think they should both go all detective mode and try find out what happened.. then they should play cupid and get them back together 😳

I just felt sorry for Zoya in this update.. I had a lump in my throat just by reading this update 😒 she went through hell before she met Asad and after she met Asad she also went through a lot of pain not fair.. bechari Zoya 😔 and this time Asad has to agree that she is bechari 😆

the conversation between Asad and Zoya in the room was beautifully written.. 👏 when I was reading it I was just hoping that Zoya would wake up and hear him apologize to her.. but then BOOM! she listened to everything he had to say, felt the tears of remorse on her hands and still didn't forgive him I know its Asad's fault, but he's saying sorry? Please don't play Gul and make Asad cry like there's no tomorrow.. I cant bear to read an emotional Asad.. makes me wanna cry just as much as I cry when I actually watch him on tv

I like this 6 foot munda all cool 😎 I understand what Zoya is going through.. but she made him cry enough now dont you think? 😃

I know Zoya's aapi, jeeju and Dilshad are trying to get them to be together because they know about their "beintehaa mohabbat ki adoori dastaan" 🤣 🤣 sorry been hanging around with people who talk a lot of hindi these days.. I think you can notice in this comment.. but it wouldn't hurt to get Zoya's friends involved in the plan as well 😉but yeah I just want them to be together already!!!! pleaseee 😃

This was an exceptional update.. absolutely phenomenal 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

IT WAS LOVELY UPDATE

Originally posted by: asulpyaar

amazing friendship :) please update soon

Originally posted by: mochhug

Oh she will don't worry 😉 Indeed she does! Yup yup! Lots of romance New York style coming up 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: webuser7

Great! Can't wait! Najma has been sidelined a lot in the show. Time to give the cutie some role! Haven't been to NYC in months, so looking forward to more sight seeing!😆

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

awww !!such a cute update !
and it was long !
loved it dear !
asad started day dreaming too ! he's gone crazy in his love for zoya LOL
update soon dear !