AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#1 ~ Link to T#2 Page 1!

First Previous

Page

108

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: shabana20
Awesome update..
Yeah it was kind of sad & emotional but loved it.. I didn't think Zoya's friends would be soo understanding & asad was soo honest throughout his explaining..
Asad day dreaming about Zoya..totally Cute!!..
Thanks for the pm..

Aww thanks! So happy you liked it 😃

Quote

mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#982

Amazing update! 👏 👏 👏 Super-sad and emotional, but really beautiful! I love Neeru and Kareena, they r good friends! 👍🏼 I'm glad that Asad is guilty. 😊 Update really quick, sweetie! 🤗
-Fari 😳 ❤️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: ButterflyKisses
Amazing update! 👏 👏 👏 Super-sad and emotional, but really beautiful! I love Neeru and Kareena, they r good friends! 👍🏼 I'm glad that Asad is guilty. 😊 Update really quick, sweetie! 🤗
-Fari 😳 ❤️

You're glad he's guilty? 😆 Well then. Sorry to disappoint in the next few updates 🤣

No but seriously, I'm sooo happy you liked it Now I'll give you a run for your money with cute scenes (not usually my forte, but it's worth a shot 😆)

Hope you'll like it!

Quote

Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#984

First thing that I have to mention is that Zoya has amaziiing friends 😃 I just loved how Neeru & Kareena just got down to business because they knew something was going on.. 👍🏼

LMAO!! Asad's thought about New York women 😆 it's not just New York women.. it's all women around the world 😆

I felt so sorry for Asad .. Yeah it was all his fault but his words just keep resurfacing whenever he wants to forget about what happened and start afresh.. Neeru was amazing in this chapter.. Loved her dialogues 👏 and now moving on to Billo Rani.. hmm.. I couldn't stop laughing when she was busy chanting her triumph speech but then got a hard blow in the face when Dilshaad called 🤣 hilarious!! ahh man if only this was an episode.. her face would have been something to re-watch over and over and over 🤣

and now I'm gonna be thinking for so long over who could have heard Tanveer.. maybe Ayaan? 🤔 I dont really know.. but whoever it is should just kill that annoying b*tch once and for all.. she should just leave us all in peace.. I've been hating her so much in the show and now I'm starting to hate her in all stories that are written 🤬

and the dream sequence in the end.. Hayeee amazing!! If only I could hear Asad sing in that sexy voice ☺️ the way it would be my ringtone for the rest of my life 🤣 and the dream sequence just reminded me of Zoya'a teri meri dream 😳 the way you described it.. I could easily picture it in my head 👍🏼 Zoya didn't have a part in this but the dream sequence made up for it 😃

I'm starting to see some light now 😆 after that previous chapter.. where you had me crying because of what Asad and Zoya were like.. you made me smile in this chapter.. even though it was a mixture of both sad and happy.. I just had a grin on my face 😃 wonderful update as usual.. & now I'm eagerly waiting for the next update.. and I want Tanveer to be exposed this time 😆 ohh & I hope that Neeru & Kareena succeed in making Asad & Zoya one 😳

Quote

Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#985

Ok so I started reading this a few days ago,but unfortunelty I haven't been able to finish yet! But I can say I'm well into the ss and I LOVE IT!!! It's AWSOME! Please do PM when you update, I assure you I will get through all the posted chapters soon 😃

Quote

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet
Ok so I started reading this a few days ago,but unfortunelty I haven't been able to finish yet! But I can say I'm well into the ss and I LOVE IT!!! It's AWSOME! Please do PM when you update, I assure you I will get through all the posted chapters soon 😃

Aww yay! I'm so glad! I'm sorry I didn't PM you before! I realized I was only buddies with you after you sent me PM about your story 😛

Quote

natasha

@princesnatasha3

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#987

awesum update.. comntng 4 the frst tym

Quote

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: princesnatasha3
awesum update.. comntng 4 the frst tym

Aww yay! Glad you liked it 😃

Quote

Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: mochhug

Aww yay! I'm so glad! I'm sorry I didn't PM you before! I realized I was only buddies with you after you sent me PM about your story 😛

It's no problem! Don't say sorry!

Honestly, I opened your link to all your writings but that was during finals week last month and I was unable to read it since then and since its Ramadan, I still don't get to read much. But I will read all! if that is the last thing I do! 😆 🤗

Quote

SakeenaSidd

@SakeenaSidd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#990

I read it all n now I feel like crying bcoz I have to wait for further updates. I'm sooo anxious to know what happens next. Monica my request is please don't make Zoe reject Asad's attempts to make up for what happened. This hard hearted Zoe is a bit strange for me, I want my warm hearted, softie Zoya back. I think it would be great to have her at least not be so cold to him anymore even if she's not completely forgiven him. Let them be friends ok ;)

Btw, why didn't you tell us you're a professional author? That is the only explanation I can think of for your being such a great writer! :) xoxoxo

Quote

1 ... 97 98 99 100 101 ... 108

AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#1 ~ Link to T#2 Page 1! - Page 99

Related Topics

Explore Topics