AsYa FF-Please Forgive Me-Note PG 82 UPDT 8/18/14 - Page 8

Please continue soon :-) loved how you expressed how Zoya was in the middle of the fire and how Asad felt

Hey guys thank you so much for all the lovely comments!! I really appreciate it so much! It helps me to write better when I know that my readers are enjoying my work! As i promised if i got good comments and feedback i would update chapter 3 soon! I have started writing it and i will have it posted soon. if you guys have any suggestions or ideas of something you want to see happen please do tell me so i can incorporate the ideas into the story. Also I will take some time in exposing Tanveer and Raziya because if i just throw everything out there then the story comes to an end point to qucikly and i dont want that to happen! This has officially been turned into an FF and no longer a SS. In the following chapters i will go into asad and zoya's feelings but i want it to be a very emotional. I noticed in the serials that Zoya forgives asad to easily for everything that he does to her but in the FF i want to make it a challenge for asad.

That was very intense.. i loved it..please continue

Omg yes please :) id love to see asad give her the earring somehow :)

Omggg, I love you for deciding you're gonna make it a challenge for Asad to get Zoya to forgive him. I've wanted to see that in the serial but we never got it ;( so please, make it hard for Asad but not like Zoya treats him too harshly. Just like make it quite funny type.

Lol, I doubt you understand what I just crapped up there, lol, okay :(

And and... can you please let Zoya wear more traditional clothes? Pleaseee. I wanna see Asad's reaction xD


That's it, I'm done crapping. I hope you understood :D

Originally posted by: Manpreet23

Omggg, I love you for deciding you're gonna make it a challenge for Asad to get Zoya to forgive him. I've wanted to see that in the serial but we never got it ;( so please, make it hard for Asad but not like Zoya treats him too harshly. Just like make it quite funny type.

Lol, I doubt you understand what I just crapped up there, lol, okay :(

And and... can you please let Zoya wear more traditional clothes? Pleaseee. I wanna see Asad's reaction xD


That's it, I'm done crapping. I hope you understood :D

Chapter 3

Precap: Asad and Dilshad found Zoya amidst the fire in her room. Asad rescued her and the doctor came checked on Zoya's condition and gave the news to Dilshad. Tanveer is seen talking to Raziya telling her that the plan failed. However, Raziya tells Tanveer not to worry as soon there plans and efforts will pay off and they will kill Zoya and send her to her mother. Dilshad goes to asad's room and sees him expressing his feelings for Zoya and crying. Dilshad realizes something and goes to talk to Najma about it but before she can she gets a call from Rashid.

Dilshad: "Rashid"

Najma: "Ammi, abbu is calling you do you have any idea what the reason would be?"

Dilshad: "No beta, but let me see what your abbu wants to talk about I will be right back."

Najma: "Ji ammi, take your time."

Dilshad walks out of Najma's room and goes to her room. She closes the door and hit the answer button. She put the phone up to her ear and heard Rashid speak.

Rashid: "Dilshad, Assalaam Alaikum."

Dilshad: "Walaikum Salam, wo Rashid is there a reason you have called me at this hour it's late. Did something happen?"

Rashid: "No Dilshad actually I called to check up on Zoya and see how she was doing. Aayan and I have both tried to reach her on her cell but she is not answering our calls so I decided to call you and ask about her."

Dilshad: "Wo actually Rashid, things are really bad I don't understand how this all happened but Zoya is in bad condition. After she came home she passed out and hit her head and lost a lot of blood so we had her resting in the room but after a while he heard a scream from her room and when we went to go see what happened we saw…that her room…was on fire…" (talking hesitantly)

Rashid: "YA ALLAH, what are you talking about! Is she okay now? Where is she?"

Dilshad: "She is resting in asad's room and Asad is with her watching her."

Rashid: Okay that all is fine Dilshad but have you guys found out how all this happened? I mean how did Zoya's room catch on fire?"

Dilshad: "Ya Allah! Thank you so much for reminding me Rashid! We were so caught up in all this that we never thought about how her room caught on fire in the first place. I will go tell Asad right now and have him look into this. Rashid I will talk to you later okay for now I have to go and take care of Zoya and also talk to Asad about all this. Allah hafiz Rashid."

Rashid: "Okay Allah hafiz Dilshad."

After Dilshad got off the phone with Rashid she went back to Najma's room to finish talking about what she wanted to talk to Najma about. Dilshad knocked on the door and Najma asked Dilshad to come in. Dilshad went into the room and started explaining the whole situation to Najma and also told her that her bhai-jaan was in love with Zoya.

Najma: "Kya! Bhai-jaan is in love with Zoya! WOOHOO! That means Zoya is now going to be my bhabi! Ammi I am so happy for bhai-jaan finally he has find someone that can understand him and also someone that can stand up to bhai-jaan. But ammi, bhai-jaan loves Zoya, but does Zoya also love bhai-jaan?"

Dilshad: "This is where I need your help beta. First of all we need to find out whether or not if Zoya also likes Asad or not and then we can put a plan into motion to bring the two of them together!"

Najma: "Yes ammi I agree with you first we must find out about bhabi's… wo I mean Zoya's true feelings about bhai-jaan and then we can bring them closer! Oh ammi I am so excited! My best friend forever is going to be my bhabi!"

Dilshad: "Yes yes beta, but please calm down first we cannot let anyone find out about this we have to be very careful okay or else our plans will backfire on us. Understand Najma?"

Najma: "Ji ammi, I will keep my lips sealed."

Dilshad: "Okay beta you go rest I have to go talk to Asad about all that happened today. I just don't understand how Zoya's room caught on fire."

Najma: "Yeah ammi, this is really strange I mean what could have caused the fire. But okay you go talk to bhai-jaan about this and I am going to sleep. Goodnight ammi."

Dilshad: "Goodnight beta."

Dilshad left Najma's room and went to go check on Zoya, when she walked into asad's room she saw that Zoya was still asleep and that Asad was still sitting on the bed holding her hand and crying silently. Seeing her son in this state broke her heart. She walked up to Asad and placed her hand on his shoulder. Asad turned around to look at who it was, he saw it was his ammi and quickly let go of Zoya's hand and stood up. Dilshad saw the tears in his eyes and saw that his eyes were blood shot red as if he was crying for hours.

Dilshad: "Asad beta don't worry about Zoya she will be perfectly fine. Nothing will happen to her just pray and your dua will be answered for sure. No I also wanted to talk to you about what happened tonight. I want you to look into this and find out how Zoya's room caught on fire."

When Dilshad reminded Asad about this he freaked out and his face went pale. With all that had occurred he had totally forgot about Zoya's room catching on fire. All of a sudden a different type of rage filled inside him and his face glazed as he realized that someone had purposely tried to hurt HIS Zoya and he would not rest until he found out who that person was.

Asad: "Ammi I promise you that whoever did this to MY Zoya will pay! I will not let them go! I will kill anyone that tries to harm MY Zoya!"

Dilshad: "But beta how do you know that some did this on purpose and that it was not an accident?"

Asad: Wo ammi, I had smoke detectors installed in this house and they never went off I also have the wirings checked monthly just to be on the safe side so it has to be someone that went into Zoya's room and did such a heinous thing to her. And also when I went to go put out the fire I smelled kerosene on the curtains and you can also smell it on her bed sheets and on her clothes. It seems as if someone just poured it all over her."

Dilshad: "Ya Allah! But who can do this kind of thing to Zoya?"

Asad: "Ammi that I do not know but I promise you and Zoya that I will find out who did this to her and I will make sure that person pays dearly for hurting MY Zoya!"

Precap: Asad is standing by his window and he hears Zoya mumbling in her sleep. (She will be having a nightmare)

Hey guys so this chapter didn't have that much exciting drama going on. i dont know if the chapter update is that good but i wanted to balance it out with other things going on. Chapter 4 will be an intense chapter i promise you guys. i hope you guys like chapter 3 and please do comment and let me know how you liked it. An if i should continue with chapter 4. Sorry for the late update i was busy. driving for your trip is painful and very time consuming. So i promise i will try to get two chapters in tomorrow. well give me feedback on chapter 3 and let me know how it was! I appreicate getting feedback it helps me to make the chapters better and more interesting and it also encourages me to write more! So do comment!!!! PLEASE!!

Ruksar 😊

Awesome update :-) loved the conversation between Dilshaad-Rashid and Dilshaad-Asad

Superrr se bahut bahut uparrr tha ye part...

Awesome!!! 👏 Can't wait for Tanveer to be caught 😊 Please do continue soon 😊