AsYa FF-Please Forgive Me-Note PG 82 UPDT 8/18/14

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

firstly thanx for turning it into ff... yayyy🥳

the update was superbly duperbly awsum

dilshad rashid talks were nice... love najma and dilshad convo... wow so now they'll gonna try and find zoya's feelings... cool

awww love the way asad was refering zoya as mine...!!!!

precap is interesting...

continue soon...

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samko

@samko

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

loved it so much

bond asad is about to awake

ab tanveer uske haathse kese bachega

haha

i loved it

n really excited to c what dhilshaadh n najma do to c whether zoya loves asad

cant wait for the next update

do update soon

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-krrish-

@-krrish-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

very nice👏👏👏👏

continue soon plz

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NephilimByHeart

@NephilimByHeart

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

can u pm me ... n its gr8 ,, 😊

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

That was beautifully written! :D

Great job!

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roses.09

@roses.09

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Amazing... Liked how dilshad and najma are going to bring asya together.. Now its them against billo and razia.. (well i.directly). Also did asad realize he called zoya "his" ??

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Love the tone that you've set for AsYa in this FF. I also think that Zoya should make it a little hard for Asad before accepting his apology and can't wait for the new entry cause I just love jealousy tracks !! Have sent you a buddy request, do PM me when you update next !!

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

This was great :).

I want a longer update plej

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rockstarrfn786

@rockstarrfn786

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Hey guys sorry I haven't updated chapter 4 yet. I have been sick and place i just returned home from my trip. I have been very busy but i will try and update chapter 4 soon. If you guys have any feedback of things you want to see please do let me know! it helps me to write better! I would appreciate the feedback! An then depending on the feedback i will see if i should continue on with this FF or not. the reason is because i haven't gotten much feedback on it so its hard for me to tell if i should continue or not. writing things like a FF are hard it takes time and patience so i'm just disappointed that i haven't gotten much feedback on it. Well let me know with what you want to see and if i should continue. Hope to see some feedback from my readers!

Ruksar