FF: Broken promises

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FF: Broken Promises

Prologue

"Probably there's some kind of a mistake." Zoya sobbed.

"No, mam. It's his car, no doubt about that. The number plate matches." The inspector said before walking away.

It can't happen. Asad can't die, he can't leave me alone. Her knees gave away and she fell in the cold, hard marble weeping bitterly. Ayaan, Dilshad and Nazma rushed to her aid.

"He can't leave me, can he? He promised me never to leave my side. He promised me...My Asad can't be dead."

Dilshad and Nazma too cried along with her while tears threatened to flow from Ayaan's eye.

Dilshad hugged her. "Zoya, please try to understand."

"Theres nothing to understand. He's not dead, the police haven't yet found his...corpse, then how can they declare him dead."

"Bhabisha, calm down. It's not good for your health. The doctor has asked you to take special care of yourself and if bhaijaan was here, he would never let you cry." Ayaan said

"But that's the problem. He's not here." she said her eyes filled with

So, here's the prologue. I know it's short, but how long can you expect prologue to be?

And if you want pm on further updates please hit the like button, and comment (just a word is also fine) and send me a buddy list.

Let me tell you guys I am a really late updater but I'll try to post the chapter 1 by next week.

The police have declared Asad dead but is he?

The promises Asad had taken with Zoya, had he broken it?

Are promises kept only to be broken?

That's what this FF is all about.😃 and one more thing Ayaan is not stepbrother of Ayaan but his own. There's no stepbrother fiasco here.

And here's the link to the OS I had written way back

OS: A night at a hotel room


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supriya.ipkknd thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked it. Do continue asap :)
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It was an interesting prologue...
But you killed our Asad...
Hope he is alive and come back to Zoya soon...
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Liked it ..plz update soon and plz PM me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey you cant kill Asad!
He better be alive!
Its interesting continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice plzz do continue soon!
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Thank you, yeah I will
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Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

I liked it. Do continue asap :)

Glad you liked it
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interesting...do acept my buddy request and add me to ur pm list...eagerly waiting to know wat happens next...
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DON'T KILL HIM YAAR . WHY U R DOING THIS🤢😭
i know he can't break his promise . he will come back to his soul.

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