Asya FF: The Night Train at Deoli(updt pg8)

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

1945..you captured the mood to the T..

and deoli sounds exotic..

the language and aggressive of that era...

brilliantly written..

keep up the pace..

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Brilliant. Brilliant Brilliant.

The plot the language the usage of the theme perfectly suits the early half of the 18th century. Ahhmazingly writing, taking me back to the beautiful horror movie called as 1920 😆 very very very nicely written. Very good.

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grace4descanzo

@grace4descanzo

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

the night train at deoli is one of my fav short stories! Im looking forward to your story too😛

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Loved it... Do continue soon!!!

Dee

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Resie
un
yur description of thr really sceneric beauty
was just awesome
the lines beautifully written
looks like deoli is a gr8 place
do update fast hope asya meet
😃

Edited by cutiesanya - 12 years ago

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hey this is really good. -waitingforyou- sent me a PM telling me to check it out and I was like 'Why not?' and I have to admit, it's really really good. AU and completely Non-Canon, but awesome! Do update soon and if you PM, please add me to your PM list. 👍🏼