Asya FF: The Night Train at Deoli(updt pg8) - Page 4

such a unique stry ...
i think it is first srty of asay on historical
back drop yu write very weel
and it seems u have good knowledge
of histry watiiing fr zoe entry
do p me and accept my buddy

this was so wow! though no description of asad ...as in his appearance per SE in times of British Raj... i can totally imagine him with nicely cut hair, a mustache , broad shoulders and piercing eyes... ohh myy!! plz continue and would love to get a pm !!! pretty plzzz?

pls pls pls update the next part soon
& can you please put an index
it would be so helpful !

don't forget pls update soon :)

when will we get an update??????????

DON'T FORGET TO PUT AN INDEX !

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

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unres

i had read the 1st chapter long tim ago and you had hooked with that one chapter itself!

first of all - night train at deoli is one of my favorite short story

second- i really like the way you write! ur writing is very rich and posh! makes me think im reading a proffesional writer's story!

great job! pm me if u can

Thanks a lot. It really means a lot to me for I'm such a big fan of your works!

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

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unres

i thought you forgot about this ff 😡& when i saw you commenting on ankie's thread i thought about
pm ing you about this . but there was no need .thank God you finally updated !😳
i feel like sitting in my history class . & i should say i'm impressed by your update '😃
you write quite well . no not quite well ..
you write like awesome 👏
it was a short update but i don't care cos at least you have updated
i hope now we'll get regular updates😉
can't wait to read the rest of the story . it's interesting & i 'm loving it 😊
thanks for the pm & continue soon 🤗

love
kiki

Thank you and sorry for I made you wait for long!

Originally posted by: ForeverArhi

OMG!!!! This is Fabulous!!!! I need an Update Asap!!!

U hear that??

This goes straight in to my Favourites...

I am hooked up to this one!!!!

Girl... U are one Awesome writer.

Every single Description was Precise and perfect. And A Period FF? I am Loving it!!!

Para pa pa pa!!!!😆

Yashi

This coming from you!!! I so love your works!! Girl I'm thoroughly flattered. Thank you so much!!!

Originally posted by: nknaini

nice update soon..and pls make an index becaux it will b easy 2 find ur story part

Thank you and I would love to add an index but the thing is I'm technologically a gawar so would have to learn first😆

Originally posted by: Endless-LOvE

Hey im sorry for give you comment after a long time

i hope that you will understand😳😳

anyways moving to the update:

MY GOD!! its awesome man!!👏

its like i have returned to the ancient times

your update cleared my confusion

coz i was a little confused in the prologue :P

continue soon

lovely update..😃

and thanks for the pm :)

P.S i will try to comment earlier next time :P

P.P.S sorry if any mistake coz my mom off the light :P

Farah<3

Oh thank you so much Farah!! I love your works too <3