Asya FF: The Night Train at Deoli(updt pg8) - Page 5

Originally posted by: deedeez

This is such a different story and i have to say very well written. The way you've used words to build momentum in the story, giving a glimpse of the era and the events is lovely and very rich 👏. Certainly looking forward to the next update!

Oh thank you so much...it actually means a lot!

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Hey... I never knew you wrote something ! Something soo good !!

This story is completely different from any story I've ever read ! And you write really beautifully !

I'm loving Asad's character...and the setting of the story ! Waiting for Zoya to come into the picture...:D

I would want you to continue pretty soon... Plz ! :)

Thank you Aaniya!!

Originally posted by: cutiesanya

such a unique stry ...
i think it is first srty of asay on historical
back drop yu write very weel
and it seems u have good knowledge
of histry watiiing fr zoe entry
do p me and accept my buddy

Thanks and hey my history ain't that good!

Originally posted by: zoas91

this was so wow! though no description of asad ...as in his appearance per SE in times of British Raj... i can totally imagine him with nicely cut hair, a mustache , broad shoulders and piercing eyes... ohh myy!! plz continue and would love to get a pm !!! pretty plzzz?

Thank you! And sure I'd send you a PM!

abs. Loved it ! Awesome job ! : )

when am I getting the next update, tehe ? do PM me. thaanks.

Originally posted by: hilly

abs. Loved it ! Awesome job ! : )

when am I getting the next update, tehe ? do PM me. thaanks.

finally !
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unres!


awesome as always !
beautifully written !👏
i just love the way you describe everything !
it feels like reading a classic novel ! i just love your writing style !⭐️
by the way who's the lady that he see's in the dream ?
when's zoya gonna enter?

it was a really very short update ! but it's okay !😛
next time please give us long long chapters 😳
i can't wait to read what lies in deoli !
love you 🤗
kiki

Aawww...such a chotu update !? :(
Anyways, I completely loved it ! Every line was beautifully written and the way you described Deoli made me fall for that place tooo ! :D

I wonder if the mysterious lady is Zoya... Will wait for you to unfold the story ! So plz update pretty soon this time ! ;)

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