Asya FF: The Night Train at Deoli(updt pg8)

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

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i thought you forgot about this ff 😡& when i saw you commenting on ankie's thread i thought about
pm ing you about this . but there was no need .thank God you finally updated !😳
i feel like sitting in my history class . & i should say i'm impressed by your update '😃
you write quite well . no not quite well ..
you write like awesome 👏
it was a short update but i don't care cos at least you have updated
i hope now we'll get regular updates😉
can't wait to read the rest of the story . it's interesting & i 'm loving it 😊
thanks for the pm & continue soon 🤗

love
kiki

Edited by waitingforyou - 12 years ago

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MemoriesDieHard

@MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMG!!!! This is Fabulous!!!! I need an Update Asap!!!

U hear that??

This goes straight in to my Favourites...

I am hooked up to this one!!!!

Girl... U are one Awesome writer.

Every single Description was Precise and perfect. And A Period FF? I am Loving it!!!

Para pa pa pa!!!!😆

Yashi

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nknaini

@nknaini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice update soon..and pls make an index becaux it will b easy 2 find ur story part

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Loved the chapter.. Thanks for the pm. Do continue asap.

Dee

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hey im sorry for give you comment after a long time

i hope that you will understand😳😳

anyways moving to the update:

MY GOD!! its awesome man!!👏

its like i have returned to the ancient times

your update cleared my confusion

coz i was a little confused in the prologue :P

continue soon

lovely update..😃

and thanks for the pm :)

P.S i will try to comment earlier next time :P

P.P.S sorry if any mistake coz my mom off the light :P

Farah<3

Edited by Sirit-of-Dead - 12 years ago

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deedeez

@deedeez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

This is such a different story and i have to say very well written. The way you've used words to build momentum in the story, giving a glimpse of the era and the events is lovely and very rich 👏. Certainly looking forward to the next update!

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

A very good start ... continue soon

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Aaniya

@_Aaniya_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Hey... I never knew you wrote something ! Something soo good !!

This story is completely different from any story I've ever read ! And you write really beautifully !

I'm loving Asad's character...and the setting of the story ! Waiting for Zoya to come into the picture...:D

I would want you to continue pretty soon... Plz ! :)