DARK PASSION-Asya FF updated chap 15 pg 140

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Dan Fan
It is so amazing. Have no idea how u write the way u write...continue soon plz

Hmmm I have no idea as well..I jst sit in frnt of my comp and start typing...

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Mahi Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: mochhug
Just realized i forgot to comment. Mentally hitting myself for committing such a crime. BEAUTIFULLY written. Felt for zoya and her fear. Looking forward to asad being rejected once again by her at night hahaha :) please PM when you update! Loved it!

Thank you 4 commenting( wiping happy tears) No need to hit urslf u jst rectified it nw...Yup wl pm wen I update!!

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Mahi Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: nazakthar
😊Just about managed to catch up hun had a very busy week, enjoyed the update was fabulous I'm so impatiet can't wait for the next instalment wonder how zoya is going to handle asads aggressive nature looking forward to your next update. Your a brilliant writer and thanks for the pm😊

thank you..😳

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Mahi Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: mileyhaward
in true words your story is about passion..
a man passion to get his girl..
a heart passion to get his love
asad is having misconception that he wants her only for sexual satisfaction reason..
but only he could understand that his heart wants her to fulfill his incompleteness..
his love is his passion ..love the way you are bringing up the story..
please update soon..and thanks for the pm

wow u described it really well...wl pm wen i update.

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Mahi Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: janu1610
I hate this manhandling .😡 I swear i'd love to die before giving up . I know some time circumstances make you weak but why a girl suffer always ? why . waiting for next part . plz update soon .
thanks for pm.
love
ritu

I can undrstnd the way u feel abt Asad..bt trust me the guy here is as emotionally challenged here as he is in the serial..that scene was jst to show the beginning of his obssession. Look at this part..

Why can't you just let me be?'

Asad looked at angry face for sometime. It was a question to which he had no answer.

The man has issues. Which will be revealed in the future updates.

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shreya2748

@shreya2748

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Interesting ff
Waiting for d next update 😔
Only sat-sun
No...
plz post everyday na 😳 😛

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Stuti

@Dan Fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

When r u gonna update next. No QH for 2 days n u also haven't updated. This forum has turned dull. Plzz update quick. :-)

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Mahi Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: guptaaesha
Interesting ff
Waiting for d next update 😔
Only sat-sun
No...
plz post everyday na 😳 😛

That depends on my typing skill...but I'll try.

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Umi

@Umi91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Woww this is beautiful ... I read it all from the beginning and loved each sentence!! Beautifully written and structured xxx I will buy this any day if it was to be published xxx absolute gobsmacked to be honest... keep up the good work and keep writing some more x ill keep waiting xxx

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Mahi Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: Umi91
Woww this is beautiful ... I read it all from the beginning and loved each sentence!! Beautifully written and structured xxx I will buy this any day if it was to be published xxx absolute gobsmacked to be honest... keep up the good work and keep writing some more x ill keep waiting xxx

Thank you for such a sweet comment😳..I wl update to soon mayb 2day if possible.