DARK PASSION-Asya FF updated chap 15 pg 140

First Previous

Page

103

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Whoa !!! That was uh-mazing !!!!

It's really intriguing ... ;)

Thanks for the pm :D

Quote

Starshina

@Starshina

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Hey its very interesting and very different from all other stories... I keep waiting for you to update :) and thats what Im gonna do now too... Pls continue soon 👍🏼

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Stuti

@Dan Fan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

It is so amazing. Have no idea how u write the way u write...continue soon plz

Quote

XXX

@ChamakChallo91

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

OMG !!! To say i'm shocked will be an understatement! 😲

I did not expect that! Asad telling Zoya he owns her was intense!

But you wrote everything amazingly!

Can't wait for the next update!!

Thanks for the pm!! :)

Quote

ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

I hate this manhandling .😡 I swear i'd love to die before giving up . I know some time circumstances make you weak but why a girl suffer always ? why . waiting for next part . plz update soon .

thanks for pm.

love

ritu

Quote

SOWMYA

@sowmy18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

awesome!imeagerly waiting for ur next update!😊

Quote

Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Wow! Awesome story. Luvd it. So here Asad is a playboy but there is some hidden pain, some hidden past that has possibly morphed him into such a monster, a handsome monster off course. Now that's what I like in a girl. I always like strong n determined girl n Zoya is 1 of them. Luvd the story till now. W8ing 2 know wat happens now. Plz update soon n pm me.

Quote

jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Omg
Dis sounds lyk...
Bt I hope asad behaves...
Gd lck zoya

Continue soon

Quote

Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: amri123
hey
that was some update
and surprisingly i actually wasn't TOO shocked at Asad's behaviour
but some shock there was😆
my first thought after reading this chapter was, Asad is such a jerk😡
like seriously who treats a girl like that?
anyways i'm waiting for you to make Asad justify his actions
and for you to put him back in my good books
until then i'm sticking with him being a jerk😆
but don't hate me for that
i'm sure he'll change for the better😉
and i really like the banner👏
its actually very nice
you did a marvelous job
congrats😃
continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

Ya he is a jerk...will always be. But I hope to change him into an adorable jerk!!!

I'm really glad u liked d banner..u are d first person to comment!!!🤗

Edited by Kaya13 - 12 years ago

Quote

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Just realized i forgot to comment. Mentally hitting myself for committing such a crime. BEAUTIFULLY written. Felt for zoya and her fear. Looking forward to asad being rejected once again by her at night hahaha :) please PM when you update! Loved it!