DARK PASSION-Asya FF updated chap 15 pg 140 - Page 26

Originally posted by: jasnw

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Yeah i came before the pm n yippieee I'm first.

Let me go one by one with the total analysis

U knw the food me my mouth watering tooo, not the food which was served on table, but the one zoya was thinking about.

N oh so mr khadoos has an urge to see our heroin, i hope he will start appreciating her rather than playing the charater zoya has rightly named mr. Khadoos.:D Anyways I'm enjoying loads.

N oops sry i had no clue tgat u made a new banner. Sry had missed it. But great job yar. I didn't knew that u have so many talents!

Great job kaya!!!!

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Super updae
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Originally posted by: jasnw

r

Yeah i came before the pm n yippieee I'm first.

way to go dude!!!

Let me go one by one with the total analysis

U knw the food me my mouth watering tooo, not the food which was served on table, but the one zoya was thinking about.

N oh so mr khadoos has an urge to see our heroin, i hope he will start appreciating her rather than playing the charater zoya has rightly named mr. Khadoos.:D Anyways I'm enjoying loads.

Thnxxx..😳

N oops sry i had no clue tgat u made a new banner. Sry had missed it. But great job yar. I didn't knew that u have so many talents!

That's ok..I no u jst read my ff...I wasn't talking abt u..thnxxx again😳

Great job kaya!!!!

Originally posted by: niviii

Hi Kaya13,

You are doing a fab job with this story...its so interesting that I want to keep reading...Do write as soon as you are done with your exams...All the best!!!

I was just going to logout n was sad thinking I have
no update today 😭
N then I got ur pm
Thnk u sooo much 😊
Asad is tempted to see zoya,nd today he is early @ home
That's cool 😳
I think this akdu ll be changed into sweet by our zoya
Loved the update
N yeah banner is superb
And I want to read about jealous asad pl update soon 😉
Sry for editing

Originally posted by: Asyalover

OMG the banner is Awe so dont be sad and so was the update...hmm change already started in asad...haha

hey update was fab😊 but v short...demand for a longer update😆 tx for the PM. would luv to read more.

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I love the funny twist on Zoya's POV and can't wait for the jealousy track to start in the next chapter. And your banner is really nice, sorry for not noticing the last time !!

Originally posted by: didlr

oh wow, i was thinking of this ff when i received the pm:D

zoya staying at asad's place n the dude can't stop thinking abt her. Thats great!

Soon a new entry,wow the track is getting intresting day by day:)

Loved it

Thanks fr pm:)

Ps- beautiful banner. Sry fr late comment

nice update and the banner was tooo good

Originally posted by: varshificat

Oye !!! not fair hun . such a short update ... i demand for a longer 1

First u giv us all dirty and wild ideas bringing zoe home😉😳 and now u cut out on the update ...😭

I looove u'r updates eagerly awaiting more😆

varsha