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kdramafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

FAN-freaking-TASTIC!!

This was the same dialogue which Asad uttered

Continue this soon

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Eheheh, she repeats his dialogues 🤣 like usual!

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mei toh tab se betke dialogue soch rahi thi...toh mujhe best option yahi laga 😛
utna bura tha kya 😭

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: asyaforlife
FAN-freaking-TASTIC!!
This was the same dialogue which Asad uttered
Continue this soon

mei toh tab se betke dialogue soch rahi thi...toh mujhe best option yahi laga 😛
utna bura tha kya 😭

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Barayah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Amazing!! I love it! Please PM me :))

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

aww...love your comments...likh rahi hun mei next part will update soon

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Amayaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

too good continue further soon..😊

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ASADsweetZOYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

really nice dear

loved reading it

thnx 4 the pm😳

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

just read all the parts...!!!

superb start...!!!

loved it...!!!

asad worried for zoya ... cool...

continue soon...!!!

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

PART 4

Asad came home with zoya...zoya in his arms..his eyes completely wet and zoya Unconscious.Dilshad and tanveer saw them so they ran to asad zoya.

DILSHAD:Kya hua zoya ko?

TANVEER:Jammy apko kya hua app roo kyun rahe hai zoya ne koi gadbad kar diya kya.

ASAD:Tanveer yaha pe zoya ki yeh halat hai aur tum!ammi isse bukar hai aap doctor ko phone kijiyega aur mei apko badmei bataunga.

TANVEER:Batao na jammy kya hua?

ASAD:Tanveer hato!

Asad took zoya to his room...made her sleep on his bed..and though of going and asking ammi whether she called the doctor but suddenly something stopped him.
When he turned back he saw it was zoya's dupatta which held Asad's button.So asad went close to her kissed her forehead and

ASAD:Tum jaldi theek ho jaogi zoya...mei tumhare sare sawalon ka jawab de dunga aur tumhe wada karna padega ki tum mere sath aasa kabhi nahi karogi.

TANVEER:Asad tum isse tumahre kabre mei kyun leke aaye uska kambra toh vaha hai na?

ASAD:TANVEEER WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? tumhe yaha zoya ki halat dikhaide nahi kya?

TANVEER:Mere vo matlab na

ASAD:Toh kya matlab tha..(Dilshad entred) Ji ammi?

DILSHAD:Aaj doctors ka strick hai na toh vo mumbai gayi hai...unhone kaha ki thande pani mei kapda dubakar usse zoya ki sar pe rakhti rehena chaiye.

ASAD:Toh pure bhopal mei koi aur doctor nahi hai kya ammi.

DILSHAD:Honge bete par no.? ruke mei kisi se poochti hun...aur mei aake zoya ke sar pe geela kapda rakhungi.

ASAD:Vo mei bhi kar sakta hun..app jaiye ammi please doctor ko bulaiye please.

ASAD:Mei jake kapda leke aata hun...tum 2 min yaha ruk sakti ho tanveer?

TANVEER:ji!

Asad came back and saw tanveer sitting near zoya.

ASAD:Thanks..abb utho yeh uske upper rakhte rahena hai.

TANVEER:Mei kar deti hun deejiye.

ASAD:Nahi mei kar lunga..tum jao please.

TANVEER:Mei karti hun na jaammy.

ASAD:LEAVE! PLEASE

Tanveer left and Asad started keeping wet cloth on zoya's forehead.

ASAD:Zoyaa.(but he didn't get any reply)he was still keeping the cloth on her forehead.

ASAD:Tum jaana chati thi na zoya..(dilshad entered but stopped seeing that asad was telling something to zoya)tumare sawaalo ka jawab..toh suno,jab tum roti ho ya tumhe ko takleef hoti hai na toh vo mere dil pe zakam karte hai...tumari hasi mujhe sare khushiyan dedeti hai...jab tumko kuch hota hai na toh mei marta hun...mujhe lagta hai ki tum mere liye aur ammi najma ke liye misfit ho par tum humare liye perfect fit ho zoya...

Dilshad was crying..and was about to go and hug her son for such a awesome bahu..but she stopped again as She heard...

how was it? do comment 😊

Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago