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friendsall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awww so cute can imagine dis scene...gud...cvs shud tk ideas from here...

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Tanzia Scott

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

very nice when will u continue

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jazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Did u also get red dress lol
Lovrd the os it was fan cute I love dear whole family I wish IG tanveer oops msk wasn't there with them

Plz plz do con and pm me if u can plzzz

Edited by jazmeen - 12 years ago

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Barayah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

hahaha I loved it! Amazinggg!!!

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grad2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

really nice plzz do continue!!!

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I am very happy that many liked this so here's part 2...do comment

PART 2

DILSHAD:Asad zoya tanveer najma sub aajao khana tayaar hai jaldiii...!

ASAD:Ji ammi!

ZOYA:2mins phupi

TANVEER NAJMA:Ji hum aagaye!

Zoya came so all started having...After finishing

NAJMA:Chalo Zoya T.V pe koi accha sa movie aata hoga..hum na aaj koi thrilling movie dekhenge.

ZOYA:Really! chalo.

Najma zoya went and switched the T.V.

NAJMA:Yeh kaisa rahega?

ZOYA:accha hai chalo beto.

Asad wasn't sleepy so he came and sat with his book..(koi boring si) tanveer and Dilshad went to there rooms.

NAJMA:Dekho accha hai na...abb hero milega apni mehebuba se hahahaaa...

ZOYA:haan hahaaa

ASAD:GOD!

1 hour passed and they were still watching it...

NAJMA:dekho zoya vo sare unn dono ke peeche pade hai..mujhe lagta hai vo ladki ko maar dalenge aur apne bete ko le jayenge.

zoya was getting little scared flash back of the mangalpur journey were coming infront of her.Asad saw zoya and got that she was being hurt.

ASAD:tamatar T.V off karo abb bas!

ZOYA:nahi Mr khan mujhe dekhni hai.

Asad couldn't convince her...the scene was getting more intense...same thing was happening with the Actress which happened with zoya in mangalpur...they were digging the ground and were putting her into the ground when she was alive.

ASAD:bas! mujhe abb nahi dekhna.

ZOYA:Toh app jaiye mujhe dekhna hai...

ASAD:Zoya tum yeh mat dekho!Dekho najma bhi soo gayi

Actress was been kept into the hole and others were putting mud on her...Zoya was completey crying...then she couldn't see it more so she ran to her room.

ASAD:zoya...meine kaha tha isse mat dekho par sunti kaha hai meri baat.

zoya ran to her room...asad went to her but though it would be better if he waits outside.1 hour passed then some 15 minutes later he heared zoya scream..

ASAD:zoyaaa...he entered her room

ZOYA:Mr khan mei vo...mei Mar gayi thi Mr khan mei mar gayi zinda nahi hun..meine apko kho liye mar gayi mei..

ASAD:Sshhh kuch nahi hua tumhe...meine tumhe bachaliye...kaise marne deta tumhe? dekho abb hum mangalpur mei nahi hai..
zoya started crying very badly..she hugged him...asad tried to make zoya feel better...he tried to make her sleep...

ASAD:Shhh tum theek ho...(his eyes were wet seeing zoya like that)..shh its ok...
Then he saw that zoya had slept..but she had caught his hand tightly so he slept down while he was still holding her hand.

In the middle of the night the got up and saw zoya wasn't there..

ASAD:Zoya? Allah kaha chali gayi yeh...he was very tensed so he went in search of zoya!

How was it please do comment

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kdramafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Res again

Unreserved

This was a sweet update

Poor girl! Why did she not listen to asad😭

Asad consoled her😳

Where did she go

A cliffhanger!

Continue soon dear

Waiting for the next

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago

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friendsall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

sweet yaar...jus imagining dem..pata nahi serial mein kab ayega????

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: friendsall
sweet yaar...jus imagining dem..pata nahi serial mein kab ayega????

pata hai mujhe pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki isske aage kya likhun...then i thought of mangalpur...aur jab zoya gayab ho jati hai tab hi aayega maza and asad feelings out! 😆😃