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PART 1

Pata nahi aase kya hai usmei ki hum jitna dur jate hai untaa hi paas bhi aajate hai! Kyun appp meri kuch na hokar bhi meri sub kuch hai...kyun jab apko kuch hota hai ya apke akho mei aasun aate hai toh vo meri dil pe zakam karte hai...Kyun aap Misfit hoke bhi Perfect hai mere liye..KYUNNN??

Asad was trying to sleep but he was thinking about zoya which was not letting him sleep! other side was Zoya who was trying to sleep tooo but couldn't..

pata nahi aase kya hai unmei ki hum jitna dur jate hai unti hi paas aajate hai...vo mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi karte par vo mere liye meri khushiyan kyun hai..jab bhi mei koi problem mei hoti hun toh mere dil mei ekk barosa kyun hota hai ki Mr khan hai vo sub thekk kardenge...KYUNNN?

Both were struggling to think why and it was morning!

ZOYA:Allah miya what's wrong with you Mr sun...itni jaldi aagaye aap mei abhi tak nahi soi!
She made a crying wala puppy face...got ready and went to dinning table.

ZOYA:good morning phupi!

DILSHAD:Good morning zoya aur tumhe kya hua thaki thaki se kyun lag rahi ho theek se soya hai kya?

ZOYA:Nahi phupi raat bhar Mr khan pareshaan karte ra...(she realised what she said)

DILSHAD:Asad ne kya?

ZOYA:kuch nahi kuch nahi phupi...yehh yeh Mr khan nahi...Vo shah ruk khan!

DILSHAD:Ya Allah! haan zoya beta tumhe aaye hua ktni din ho gayi par mei tumhe koi gift nahi de payi beta batao tumhe kya chaiye?

ZOYA:phupi aap mujhe guest ki tarah kyun treat kar rahi hai...?

DILSHAD:Nahi beta aasa nahi hai...dekho har time mei najma ko kuch na kuch dilati raheti...apna samajhkar tumko bhi poocha chalo..dilshad made a sad face as she knew zoya will say yes any moment.

ZOYA:nahi nahi phupi sorry...aap na mujhe koi acccha sa Indian dress dilayiye..aur mei tanveer aur najma ko bhi leke aati hun hum sub chalenge!

DILSHAD:ok tum 2 beja ko tayaar ho jana hum chalenge!

ZOYA:yaayy okk...and was going to her room when she came across a hard muscle.

ASAD:Miss farooqui aap theek hai? aur app itni khush kyun hai?

ZOYA:vo kuch nahi Mr khan..see you around byeee...(zoya in her mind) meine just kya bola see you around aur bye! pagal ho gayi hun mei Allah miya!

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It was 2 so 4 left...najma and zoya were selecting dresses and tanvi was searching alone and dilshad was looking at some cotton clothes!
ZOYA:Milgaayaaa!

NAJMA:arre wah laal...yeh bohot sunder hai aur bhai jaan ka favorite colour!

ZOYA:Accha Mr khan ka favorite colour toh mei zarur yehi lungi...blushed!

NAJMA:kya kaha apne?

ZOYA:kuch nahi tamatar tu bhi dekh..yeh accha hai...kyun?

NAJMA:Haan! thanks zoya.

Tanveer also got a dress so dilshad payed and all left!

DILSHAD:ya Allah 5 baj gaye aur humme pata bhi nahi chala...bohot accha tha na shoping?

ZOYA:Haan phupi it was awesome!

they came home and zoya started..

ZOYA:mei yeh pehenke aati hun phupi

DILSHAD:abhi abhi toh aaya hai thodi der beto zoya.

ZOYA:nahi nani mei abhi pehenke aati hun...and left!

she was back in some 4 mins..

ZOYA:kaisi dekh rahi hun phupi?

DILSHAD:bohot sundar zoya.

NAJMA:haan zoya superb bohot accha hai..

ZOYA:batao na tanvi kaisi hai..

TANVI:jealous..haan theek hai!

ZOYA:mei bohot bohot khush hun (climbed the couch) thanks phupi thank you (climbed on the back support of the couch)..

NAJMA:zoya neeche aajao...and she was poniting something with her eyes..

ZOYA:kya hai waha par...bhooth ya..jahapanar six-packs haahaaa
Zoya saw what najma was pointing at...zoya found Asad down and he was near to her...but he was not angry he was staring at her lovingly...So miss farooqui was lost too...
Then zoya lost her balance and fell and asad as always held her.They both were lost again...

ZOYA(in mind):abhi bhi mujhe girna ka bilkul bhi dar nahi tha mujhe pata tha ki Mr khan hai aasa kyun ho raha hai? kya mei inse pyaar?

ASAD(in mind):yeh gir rahi thi aur jaan meri jaa rahi thi..Zoya kyun mujhme vo jasbaat jagaati hain jinhe main mehsoos nahi karna chhahta?

Asad left her down...but she was looking that pretty that he couldn't help...he wantedd to scold but couldn't! So he left to his room.
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AHHH :P kaisa tha,pata hai meine na ekk dress dekha tha mujhe chaiye tha par mom was like tu vo pehenti nahi hai vo lake pooja kargi..par meri zid ke aage unko dilna hi pada :P usike khushi mei yeh os :P i noe its little mad but 😃

Guys please do comment...it makes me happy! 😊

INDEX

Part 2 page 3
part 3 page 5
part 4 page 7
part 5 page 8

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

really nyc. Will u gona 2 cont it?

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kdramafan

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This was sooo cute.

Zoya will be Zoya😆 Doing all pagalpantis.

Loved this OS.

Asad zara bachke.. you are falling for her😳

Continue writing such stuffs

Love,

Diya

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Soumya02
really nyc. Will u gona 2 cont it?

No i am not gonna continue 😭 par dusri os likhti rahungi...glad u liked it 😊

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kdramafan

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaforlife
Edited my comment on page 1

aww thanks a lot..love it when people comment on my works a say good things about it 😊 actually all love it. 😛
anyways once again thanks,,a i'll be writing 😊

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cyndu

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Originally posted by: luvushivin1
awww...so cute..!...continue plzzz

Thanks a lot...i will try to continue kyunki aage kya likhu pata hi nahi chal raha tha!
if not this i will surly write some more 😊

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey ...

That was sweet !!

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maya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it! I really want this to happen in the serial.. Zoya wearing traditional wear and Asad staring at her, astound by her beauty! Maybe Asad will even have a flashback of the Dargah scene where he could not take his eyes off her. That would just beautifully tie it all together that Zoya was meant to be for Asad. I'll stop ranting now.

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crazy5

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Posted: 12 years ago

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That was a beautiful piece of writing...r u gonna continue

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