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Kawaljit Kaur

@IIdewaaneII

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: skavya
Its AWESOME part

Asad recognise the recorded voice... interesting!!!!!!!

Update soon dear

eagerly waiting for next

Thanks sooo much!!

Will try to update today

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Kawaljit Kaur

@IIdewaaneII

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Thank you all once again for the support and amazing comments
I hope i don't disappoint you!

PART 4:

*Tanveer walks in*

Tanveer: Asad.

Asad stopped. That voice. It's the same as the one in the recording.

He turned to give the darkest look to Tanveer.

Tanveer: Food is ready. Come an-

Asad: I'm not hungry, just leave me alone.

Asad knew it was too early to start pointing fingers so he kept quiet about it.

Tanveer: but --

Asad: OUT! (*random side note* wish he does this in the actual episodes :P )

It shocked Tanveer. She was about to walk closer to him, but he gave the death stare. So she just decided to leave with 'anger'.

Asad (In thoughts) I need more proof to make sure my assumptions are correct. If Razia is related to Ayaan and Rashid, than she has to do with the Gudiya factory inccident. But why would she want to hurt Zoya? Zoya has never met Ayaan's Family.

He had a weird feeling about this. All though things started to seem crazy in his head, he decided to have a visit to the Gudiya Factory.

He walked out of his room and into Zoya's. No one was in the room but her. Asad went to sit on the bed right beside her. He held her hand tight while his tears flowed.

Asad: I promise you Zoya, I will find out who did this to you and you promise me one thing. Just get better and smile once again. I miss your voice, your smile, you're crazy talking, just everything. Come back to me Zoya. I need you!

He kissed her forward and begged to god for her happiness and good health as well. He left the room and made his way out to his car. Before leaving he told Najma to take care of Zoya, and call him if anything happens.

He went to his car and drove off to the gudiya factory.

After 35 minutes of driving, he finally reached the factory, a place where the shadows of his life are casted. He had a weird feeling inside. He didn't want to go in because of what happened last time, but it was for Zoya this time. He would do anything for him.

The guard was asleep so Asad quietly yet swiftly walked past him and into the factory. It was dark inside with only tiny rays of the sunset making its way through the cracks of the window curtains.

He looked around, no one was there. He didn't know what he was looking for, but all he knew was he came here with a hope of finding proof and he wasn't going to leave without succeeding.

He began to look around. Nothing was to be found. Did he make a wrong assumption?

*RING RING*

A phone was ringing, but it wasn't Asad's. He turned to look at the floor. There it was. A phone just laying there. He walked to it and picked it up. He read the phone. "TANVEER CALLING.."

He was right.

Before he could pick up the phone, it stopped ringing.

His anger was building up towards Razia and her billi, Tanveer.

He began to search through the phone. He hit the recordings to find some files. He played the file.

*My dark secrets that lead me to living hell*

Precap: Zoya: ASAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Asad turns and in shock.
Something hits Asads Back, hitting him to the floor.

GUYS ITS A SHORT POST I KNOW!!

but I promise, with my precap, my next part will be reallly really long!! :P

Please do comment guys and tell me how it was!

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Edited by IIdewaaneII - 12 years ago