FF: Broken glass forvr remainsthecrack lstprt pg20

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY GUYS!
So im making a FF but today is only the promo.
its short but tell me if i should continue for this ff

thanks 😃

Broken glass: forever remains the cracks

PROMO:
Asad goes to the gudiya factory. He begins to look around.

All of a sudden he sees something flash. He bends down to pick it up. It was a phone.

He turn it on.. and tears fall

Part 1:(Page 3) https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3493231&TPN=3

part 2 (Page 6) https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3493231&TPN=6

Part 3: (page 7) https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3493231&TPN=7

Part 4: (Page 9) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3493231/ff-broken-glass-forvr-remainsthecrack-lstprt-pg20?pn=9

Part 5: (Page 12) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3493231/ff-broken-glass-forvr-remainsthecrack-lstprt-pg20?pn=12

Part 6: (Page 15) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3493231/ff-broken-glass-forvr-remainsthecrack-lstprt-pg20

Part 7 (Page 17) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3493231/ff-broken-glass-forvr-remainsthecrack-lstprt-pg20

Part 8 (Page 20) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3493231/ff-broken-glass-forvr-remainsthecrack-lstprt-pg20

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting! Please continue! 😊
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This is surely interesting .. :D Continue Soon! :D
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interesting😊😊...Waiting for update...Continue soon 😃
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seems interesting. update soon :)
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Interesting update soon 😊
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continue soon dear
i am waiting for update
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Hey guys
so im here with the 1st part! :)
its short and may seem confusing right now, with missing puzzle peices of the all the dark secrets, but i promise you, once i get my story going, you will see how it unfolds
Hope you guys do enjoy it! :)
Please do share your views

What you may need to know for the story to make sense:

- Asad has married Zoya ONLY so she can stay longer to find out the whole truth of her past

- Zoya is at home ( Khan residence) with bruises and scars, left unconscious

- Tanveer aka billo rani is still at the house

- Asad is furious to find out what happened to Zoya and who is responsible for it

PART 1
Zoya lay on her bed unconscious for a full day now. The girl who was full of life, laid there life less. Asad sat beside her on her bed holding her hand while praying to god to fix his Zoya, his wife. Although they never behaved like a husband wife couple, he had always wished they did. Deep inside he knew that he loves Zoya and always will and had a feeling that she did as well.

***24 hours ago***

Zoya walk up to Asad's room in all excitement.

Zoya: Mr khan! I'm going to meet my Abbu today! I called and he said that we can meet today and some cafe called apna cafe. Can you please drop me off? I'm a little nervous.

Asad: Sorry Zoya, but no (He refuses to call her Ms. farooqui because in reality she is actually Mrs. Asad A Khan) I have way more important things to do. I have a meeting today with an important client and I can't be late.

Zoya's smiley face died off and she walked out of the room silently. She was use to these rejections now.

Zoya (in her mind) If it were Tanveer asking, he would have never said no.

Asad saw her leave silently and felt bad. But what could he do. For him, his work came first.

Zoya left the house with her bag that had her Ipad, wallet and phone in it. She got the driver to drive her to Apna cafe. The driver told her that he had never heard of such place but Zoya gave him the address on her ipad, while accidently hitting the voice record button. She let the driver keep it at the front until they would reach.

While driving, the car stoped working. The driver parked the car to side of the road.
Zoya: what happened?
Driver: it seems like there is something wrong with the engine. Maam , there is a mechanic shop near here, i'll go and get him, you wait here.

Zoya: Ok, but be fast
The driver nodded and left. From a distance, he turned around and gave a evil smile without Zoya noticing.

Zoya decided to stand outside for some fresh air. The windows were open so there was a breeze but it was still to stuffy.

The next thing you know something hit the back of her head, leading her to fall on the floor crashing her head again on the rocks and dirt. she was unconscious, but how?

(A random man's voice) : that should do it. She will never remember anything now and the raaz, will always stay as a raaz.
*******

Asad was driving to his office when he saw their car parked on the side.

asad: wasn't zoya in that car? seems like the car broke down
he parked his car behind the car and got out of his car.

He walked up to the car but saw no one, only Zoya's Ipad at the front passenger seat. He walked around the car and frooze

Asad: ZOYA?
Zoya laid on the floor with bruises and blood gushing out of her head.

Sorry no precap! :P

If you want me to pm you, like this post so it would be easier for me to not miss anyone while i do msg everyone
thanks :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you 😃
and i will 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really loved the first part! Wished it was a bit longer though. You write so well that you made me greedy. Lol. Hope you update the next part soon.

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