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Posted: 12 years ago
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Where is the 5th part? >:(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FINNALY HAVE THE NEXT PART :P
I know its a late update, i just got bust with my brother! Thanks again for the awesome amazing fantastic comments!!!
Love you all! 🤗
Hope you guys like this part!!

PART 5:

He began to search through the phone. He hit the recordings to find some files. He played the file.

"My dark secrets that lead me to living hell. 17 years ago...
(the voice explains the whole story behind siddique having another daughter.)

Once he heard the recording he was about to turn it off when another voice stated to talk.
"why do you call me billo rani, my name is TANVEER Rani"
(the whole Razia and Tanveer conversation was played)

Asad had no words, he was speechless. Everything that he thought was right, ended up being the complete opposite. So many secrets were clear to asad.

1) Zoya saved his ammi rather than almost hurting her
2) Tanveer is evil and plotting their death
3) Razia's husband has another daughter
4) Rashid was innocent the whole time.

But one thing that was bothering him was why did they have to hurt Zoya?
He didn't have time to think here. He had to take the phone and leave the factory before anyone would find him.

He made his way towards the door when ___

*clap clap*

Asad tuned around.

Tanveer and Razia were stand right there.

Anger grew inside him.

Razia: wow asad miya. Seems like you have found your clue to finish this game. Too bad we will never let you cross the finish line.

Asad: WHY DID YOUHURT ZOYA? You sick woman. She is completely innocent. She had finally found her father, and before she could have met him, you hurt her!

Razia: That is exactly what I don't want. HER FATHER IS MY HUSBAND.

Asad was shocked! He really couldn't handle this right now. It felt as though his whole world had torn apart and fallen over him.

Asad: What's your excuse tanveer, or should I say Billo rani!?! I had trusted you and what did you do? Tore apart my world. why?

Tanveer: Because I need to get married to you! But sadly that wont happen now.

Razia: Don't worry billo rani, you helped me hit the little brat --

Asad: Her name is ZOYA!

Razia: yeah, whatever her name is, you hit her and helped me, so its my turn to help you Billo rani.

Tanveer: and how will you do that?

Asad was just listening to them and felt disgusted inside that he once called Tanveer a friend, a good person and trusted her. She may seem like an ideal friend, daughter and wife, but inside she is a selfish brat who runs behind money.

Razia: We hit the girl, and she 'lost' her memory, we will do the same for him, so that he doesn't remember your true form.

Both evil smiled darkly and turned to Asad.

Asad: You can't do anything to me.

Razia: Who said we would be doing anything?

Asad was confused while razia smiled in the most evil way possible.

Someone came up from the shadows behind Asad and hit him on the back and he fell on the floor.

************ Asads house ************

Zoya: ASAD!

She had jumped out of her bed. She was sweating from the fear. She knew her Asad was in trouble. She ran out of the room outside the house. Surprising no one had noticed she left. She got an auto and made her way to the Factory. She didn't know if she was going to the right place, but her heart seems to show the way to the factory. She tried calling Asad but he wouldn't pick up

Zoya: C'mon Asad, pick up the phone!!

*****At the factory*****

Asad tried to get up but was hurt badly.

Was this it? Was everything going to be taken away from him like that? No. He can't let this happen. He came here for his Zoya, and he will not back down.

He got up ready to Fight. Blood was dripping down his forehead. He was determined to win this battle.

All of a sudden the door of the factory flew open.

Zoya: ASAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Asad turned to Zoya standing at the door in all fear, still bandaged up looking so weak.

He was about to go to her when he was hit again.

Zoya couldn't see this happening. She tried running to him but Tanveer held her back

Zoya: Let go of me Tanveer!

She held her arm tighter. She her nails into Zoya's skin, leaving marks and blood dripping down.

Asad got back up seeing zoya being hurt. He turned to the man that was hitting him and beat him till he was no longer able to move. Asad then turned to Zoya.

Zoya took her other hand and slapped Tanveer. Tanveer being shocked let go of Zoya

Zoya: How dare you even think of hurting Asad, he trusted you!

Tanveer's anger was growing but before she could say anything, Zoya ran to Asad and hugged him! She was crying so much. To see him in this state was devastating.

Asad held her tight making her feel safe inside. They let go and looked at each other.

They both loved each other a lot, but had never showed it. Today they could love in each other's eyes.

Precap:

Razia: HOW IS SHE STILL OKAY? I THOUGHT YOU HIT HER!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Where is the 5th part? >:(

I know! I'm late! but its up now 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Heyn...

Wonderful update !!!!

Hey :) and thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update😊😊..loved it❤️...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

amazing update😊😊..loved it❤️...continue soon

Thats so sweet! Thanks sooo much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WoooW wooow Wooow!!!!

This is a Thrilling episode! Wooohh Wooh wooh! Lag raha tha ki i was watching QH! ooowowowwowoow!!!!!!!!

Continueee! noo latteey!

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