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IIdewaaneII thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

<font size="3" color="#cc9999">Sent you a buddy request. please accept it😳
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Accepted 😃
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Woah!!!</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">This was amazing dear...</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Asad and Zoya are married☺️</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Tanveer still in the picture😒</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Ohhh Lord!!! Who hit Zoya???😲</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Thank God Asad saw his car and got down to inquire</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Waiting for the next chapter</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">I'm already hooked to this.</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Continue soon girl!!</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Please PM me when you update</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Love,</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc9999">Diya</font>




Thank you sooo much
Lol don't worry she's only there so I can kick her butt! 😆
And I will pm you as soon as I have the next part up 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
i realy love ur ff plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: tishma

i realy love ur ff plz pm me

thank you! and sure thing 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DEAR.. LOVE IT!! SORRY FOR BEING LATE TO REPLY👏
Edited by flowergarden - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
the best part-they are married 😃
p,s-continue soon coz i love it 😆


IIdewaaneII thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR THE AMAZING COMMENTS! 😃

PART 2:

Asad: ZOYA?
Zoya laid on the floor with bruises and blood gushing out of her head.

He was freaking out. His heart beating fast while Zoya's was starting to slow down. He tried to shake her to bring her back, but nothing helped. He quickly picked her up and brought her into his car and drove to his house fast not caring what's coming in his way.

Once they reached the house he carried her inside. Najma, Dilshad and Tanveer were sitting at the living room and were surprised to see Zoya in that condition (well everyone but Tanveer was surprised *hint hint*)

Dilshad: ASAD! what happened to zoya?
Najma: Asad is she ok?

Asad: Call the doctor fast.

Asad brought her into her room and care full put her in the bed while Dilshad called the doctor.

After calling, all three of the ladies went into Zoya's room to get an explanation from Asad while they waited for the doctor to arrive.

He explained the whole story to all three of them. Tanveer pretended to care, but Asad chose to ignore her because she has been all up in their business for a while now. Like seriously, this was Mr. And MRS. Asad A Khan business we are talking about here. It was not for anyone to include in

Anyways the doctor arrived and checked up Zoya. Asad left the room for the doctor to check her up, a gentle man thing to do ;)

The doctor came out of the room and went towards Asad
Asad was worried and went to ask the doctor
Asad: How is she doctor?

Doctor: well not serious Mr. Khan, but there is a concussion. It seems as though something had his the back of her head very hard. Be careful. Im perscribing some medicines, you should get them right away. And make sure when she wakes up, please call me so I can check her up. If you want we can send in some nurses to help here.

Asad: No that fine doctor, I can take of her myself. But thank you so much for coming here.

The doctor left and Asad went back into her room. Tears escaped his innocent eyes.

something that the doctor said would not stop crossing his mind " It seems as though something had his the back of her head very hard."

Asad (talking out loud to himself) How could that be possible. She was fallen face forward when I found her. The only thing that could make sense is that someone had hit her from behind. But who would do such a thing?

The whole time he was talking, Tanveer, the Billo rani, was listening in.

Tanveer evil billo rani: If the plan works, then ASAD WILL BE ALL MINE. But it seems as though, everystep WE take should be done careful.

The day was now night and Asad told His ammi and sister that he will take the night shift and stay with zoya to make sure she is ok.

Asad watched her carefully as the night went on.

**Back to the present moment**

Asad: " It seems as though something had his the back of her head very hard." Something is wrong here. Why would someone want to hurt Zoya? She did nothing bad to anyone. She was only going to see her fathe-

Her father!

Precap: Asad finds Zoya's Ipad and turns it on...


NEXT PART UPDATED!!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3493231&TPN=7

Edited by IIdewaaneII - 12 years ago
latanzia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fb update Waiting patiently for part three, pm me when you do update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: latanzia

Fb update Waiting patiently for part three, pm me when you do update

Thank you :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you! :)
i read you FF its awesome!

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