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naz1123

@naz1123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

What a wonderfully "suprise" filled OS. You brought a beautiful couple to guide a beautiful couple. My favorite ARSHI to help ASYA. Such a treat.

Laughed when Khushi asks the name of Zoya's love, as the similarity is so on par with her

Arnav-ji. Loved the way Khushi gives Asad advice, as well as Arnav giving Zoya guidance.

Thanks for bringing a smile to my face with this great OS.😊

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tiena395

@tiena395

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

This is beautifully written! I love your incorporation of Arnav and khushi. I love them to death. And now experiencing the same with Asad and zoya. I never realized how much they have in common.
I love that line "it's like our lives are penned by the same person"

Amazing job!

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Arnavdewaani

@Arnavdewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

U, dear lady, r very smart. The essence of 4 lions captured very efficiently. the stories were beautifully interwined with a very natural flow. loved the title as well.

Take a bow, marvelous creation !

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

And that was excellent. Truly imaginative and original. Great wit and very funny to read. You took the time out to find the unique aspects of each character and story line and bring them together. I found your attention detail very commendable.

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

My two favs 2gether? ASRHI & ASYA FOREVER!

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pkaps

@pkaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

beautiful... i love the blend of the only 2 serials I ever watched...👏

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shaheerdiwani

@shaheerdiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

OMG d onscreen characters I've ever luvd in one :-)
Awesum piece of writing ... Just luvd it
Would be gr8 if u can continue pls pls

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

loved the os...absolutely loved how u interwove arnav and khushi into asad and zoya's life...would like to read more stuff written by u...do accept by buddy request and add me to ur pm list...

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day_lily

@day_lily

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

That was amazing os..loved it!!

Plzz do pm me your future updates..would love read 😊

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

OMG! I loved it...both of my fave couples all in one OS! eeek!! :D If you continue please PM me for update cause this was just breathtakingly beautiful! *_*

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