OS - The Past Meets the Future

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

I. LOVED. IT. TO. THE. VERY. LAST. WORD. OF. YOUR. FIRST. ONESHOT!!!!!!

I love this one to the core DAMN IT!!!!!

I had wanted one such story to be written here, and you fulfilled my wish!!!

Thank you so much for this!!! And yes! Both their stories have similarities and I loved the way you inserted "This is our Past" and "That is our Future" lines in this OS!!

Beautiful! Well done for a first attempt and do right more!

A little grammatical errors here and there, but that can be handled later too!

Good job!

Annie

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

This is pure genius! Loved it.

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Farhana

@risingsea101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Nice Nice Nice Nice and... Nice

lol, I love-ed it! 😆

Fabtastic OS hun

<3 Farhana

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Raina S.M

@rainaM

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

So, I'm a read-freak and have pretty much read all the OS-es on here yet never really felt the need to comment (Yeah, I'm the lazy type) however this particular OS compelled me to abandon my sluggish ways and get my commenting on!

HOW? How did you come up with this wonderfully creative idea? I'm actually speechless! This, my friend, was beyond wonderful! Two of my most favorite couples together. MY! I'm dead. You should write more about them two, maybe their next encounter?

Anywho this OS= perfection! The best one I've read so far. Good job buddy.

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crazy5

@crazy5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Wooow ...Wht a beautifully written os...u ve put the writers to shame...it was a pleasure reading it...especially if u r a fan of arshi ...I ve no more words to describe Hw much I loveeed it...pls continue writing...

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Denita

@Deen...

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-
THIS HAS TO BE THE BEST OS AROUND! ❤️

Both of them my most fav jodis! My only fav jodis!!

This was sooo awesome! Loved how khushi said that our lives our penned by the same person! 😆

Loved how khushi said to arnav lookin at asya that 'thats our past' and how in the end zoya said to asad looking at arshi that 'thats our future'!

LOVELY BEYOND WOARDS! ❤️

Thank you 😃 means so much..

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Denita

@Deen...

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: dmgloverforever
So, I'm a read-freak and have pretty much read all the OS-es on here yet never really felt the need to comment (Yeah, I'm the lazy type) however this particular OS compelled me to abandon my sluggish ways and get my commenting on!

HOW? How did you come up with this wonderfully creative idea? I'm actually speechless! This, my friend, was beyond wonderful! Two of my most favorite couples together. MY! I'm dead. You should write more about them two, maybe their next encounter?

Anywho this OS= perfection! The best one I've read so far. Good job buddy.

Thank you..lol..I have also read almost all the OS's and Fan Fictions on Arshi and Asya..😃. thats where the idea came from..why not incorporate the both of them in one story..just imagine if we could see the 4 of them on 1 screen *mindblown* 😃

Thank you so much for the kind words..

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Denita

@Deen...

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
I. LOVED. IT. TO. THE. VERY. LAST. WORD. OF. YOUR. FIRST. ONESHOT!!!!!!

I love this one to the core DAMN IT!!!!!

I had wanted one such story to be written here, and you fulfilled my wish!!!

Thank you so much for this!!! And yes! Both their stories have similarities and I loved the way you inserted "This is our Past" and "That is our Future" lines in this OS!!

Beautiful! Well done for a first attempt and do right more!
A little grammatical errors here and there, but that can be handled later too!
Good job!

Annie

Thank you Annie..means alot..I have read all your works..I love them 😃

With encouragement like what I have been recieving I will defiinitely write more..

Lol..yeah..can't help the errors..you know how it is when all the words are in your head and when you brain works faster than you fingers can type..😆 will work on that..

Thank you once again..