OS - The Past Meets the Future - Page 4

Originally posted by: havokhotline

Listen to me.

And listen carefully.

Look outside you window right now and you will see a crow.

That's me.

I've come to stalk you outside your house, outside your window so I can give you a BIG FAT HUG FOR RIGHTING SOMETHING SO AWESOME!

BWAH!

I'm totally phangurling you right now! This was such a cute and happy piece. :P And the way you pointed out the insane similarities between 4Lions Shows was just amazing!

Do me a favour and put Geet and Maan in the next oneshot no? :D

Amazing! :) Loved it! :)

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Purely a beauty. And yes, there is so much of similarity in the two stories! I loved the end bit a lot! (:

Originally posted by: mehak09

I'm usually a silent reader on the forum, but I had to comment on this one. I'm a huge fan of both Asya and Arhi, and this os was simple yet awesome! Loved the way you combined both the couples and their respective stories. Beautifully written! This is the first thing I read this morning and it certainly put a smile on my face. Great work. Looking forward to read more from you. :)

Originally posted by: freya123

awesome

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

My favourite Jodies :) Thank you for writing this

Lovely piece :D

Originally posted by: blueflames

hayyeee lovely... reminded me of all sweet Arshi moment.

do keep writing more.

Originally posted by: janestone6

This was simply heaven. Two of my favourite couple were in the same OS. Loved the way you blend IPKKND into Qubool hai.

Khushi, whose mouth was wide open and eyes unblinking.."Khushi you okay" Zoya shook Khushi a little. "khushi, khushi.." Khushi was speechless maybe for the first time in her life, Zoya just described Arnav-ji. "Zoya, what is Jahaphanah's full name.." Zoya looked at puzzled and said " Asad Ahmed Khan" Khushi let out the breathe she was holding and giggled. "Zoya, for a minute I thought you described my Arnav-ji,each

This literally cracked me up

Originally posted by: Denita-ishq

Thank you..😃

with so many awesome comments it gonna be hard not to write anymore😃