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Oh myyy! Haven't updated since long. [very long].. 😲
Well,my apologies.. I know that some of you were really eager to read more.
I have been trying my best to write the rest of the chapters but to no avail.
Have got tons of homework to do
Studies come first nah ('__')

I sometimes feel that I should discontinues this SS. 🤔


Chapter 13

As soon as Asad started the car, another phone call came from the private number. Smiling as widely as he could, Asad responded to the call confidently.

One could say that something was surely going on in his mind by looking at him.
He undoubtedly knew what he was doing and wouldn't make a blunder even if hundreds of people would come and try convincing him into taking the wrong path.

Asad: "Yes, Mr.Coward?"

Stranger: "Asad..Ahmed...Khan! Hmmm... So much confidence in your voice... actually, you're the real Coward, not me! You are calling me names when it's you who should be called a coward. Apparently, you are so afraid of me that you've not yet come to your Zoya's rescue.

Anyway, I guess there are even more important things than this to be discussed. Right, Mr Asad Ahmed Khan?

Well! Well! I've got a good news as well as a bad news for you.

But! before I start, I would like to give you an advice, rather, a solution! Yes, you heard it right! A solution!.. to escape your problems. Wouldn't you like to hear it? I'm sure that after carefully listening to what I'll tell you and wisely following my instructions, you'll never have to hear my voice again.

Yeah! You heard this one right too! So? Let me.."

Asad: "Oh! Cut the crap, you Coward! I'm still on the line only to listen to your so-called good news and bad news not to pay heed to your stupid advices. I've already told you and telling you again that I'm firm on my decision.

I'l never let go of my Zoya, no matter what. I"ll never let her down and will always stand by her. And Yes! I'll definitely save my Zoya, by hook or by crook. Understood? Now, just stop your nonsense and tell me what you had to.

You see, I can't bear holding a conversation with the dumbest man in the world, so, can you please be quick!?"

Stranger: "Oh! Mr Khan! You seem so confident of yourself. Well, let me remind you that being overconfident is not a good thing. You should better fear what is coming your way in the upcoming hours.

Well, what do you want me to start off with? Good news or bad news? You decide!"

Asad: "Do as you wish, stupid!"

Stranger: "Just shut up, okay! If I want, I can harm your dear Zoya right now. Why talk about harming her? I can even take her life away in the twinkling of an eye and you would't be able to lift even a finger to prevent or undo the damage which will be done. So, listen carefully! huh.

The goods news is that, you'll get the opportunity to talk to Miss Zoya on the phone for 5 mins, only.

Okay, You shouldn't be too excited. I know that you must be thinking that "Oh yeah! That's one golden opportunity to inquire about the kidnapper and where we are. You'll be the dumbest person on earth if you ever think of doing so.
So, listen..

The phone will be put on loudspeaker. So, don't you dare make a mistake which you might regret later on! I hope that I've been clear enough for you to understand.

Asad: "Oh really? Why did you take such a risky decision, then?

Woah! Come on Man! Why on Earth would a kidnapper allow a lady as smart as Zoya, held in captivity, to talk to someone as wise and intelligent as me? You should be kidding me!

Tell me you have nothing more to say. Uff.

I'm just fed up with your crappy talks, man! Just cut the call. Please! I beg you!

I can find my Zoya on my own. I don't need your fake help to achieve my goal.
Can't you let me on my own?
You're acting as if you are the one who has been kidnapped.

Stranger: "What crap!
Since you are so eager to cut the call, then, do so! But remember one thing, you'll regret your actions.. I'll make sure you do! That's my promise to you. You might see this as a threat to scare you but no! I'm serious about what I've just said. I don't just make promises and break them later on. I keep them.
GO! Go and search for your Zoya.. Your Zoya will.." and the line got cut.

Stranger [Fuming with anger]: "How dare he cut the call like that? How dare he!?
Mr.Khan, I'll make sure you pay for what you did. You'll pay.. You'll pay very dearly..I promise."

Asad on the other end, thinking to himself [Smiling]: "He thinks he is the smartest. Huh! What he doesn't know is that I'm smarter than him. Perfect Idiot!
Well, that going to be one BIG surprise for him.
hah!"



Edited by twinkle_heart - 12 years ago
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Luved da update xxx plzzz do continue dis ss i really lyk it xxx
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REALY NICE UPDATE
I LOVED IT PLZ CONTINUE SOON
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Loved this. Short but nice.
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That kidnapper is scaring the hell out of me but yeah, he's a dumbo. Villains can be so dumbos at times. Heehaahaahaaha... LOL.

Hey please don't discontinue this. I love this story. Pretty please! *Zoya's puppy dog face*

Loved your update. Waiting for Asad to save his Zoya☺️

Jaldi update karo..

Love,

Diya

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finallly finallly finalllyyy finallly i gt d update! yaaahhhooo! god u made me cry 4 ths badly!!
anyways d update ws awwwsmmm!!!
Mr.khan is sooo confident !! he mst b scared at d momnt ??!!
i thnk daal m kch kaala or shld i say poori daal hi kaali hai???
oh gosh!! cant waiiit 4 d nxt part!!
plzzz plllzzz yaar nxt century se pehle upadte d nxt 1!!
plzzz plzz i requst u frm d core of ma heart plzzz upadte asap!!
tfs!!!
tnkooo 4 updating ths part!!
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Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

finallly finallly finalllyyy finallly i gt d update! yaaahhhooo! god u made me cry 4 ths badly!!

anyways d update ws awwwsmmm!!!
Mr.khan is sooo confident !! he mst b scared at d momnt ??!!
i thnk daal m kch kaala or shld i say poori daal hi kaali hai???
oh gosh!! cant waiiit 4 d nxt part!!
plzzz plllzzz yaar nxt century se pehle upadte d nxt 1!!
plzzz plzz i requst u frm d core of ma heart plzzz upadte asap!!
tfs!!!
tnkooo 4 updating ths part!!


ThankYou dr! You're such a loyal fan of my SS.. lol 😆

PS, I'll try to update as sooner as I can.. 😊

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