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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ras224

u r welcum & i'm shormi😃...thnk GOD romance will also cum hehe


Yello Shormi! What does your name mean?
Hahahha... Now am thinking of scrapping the romance from the story. Let's keep it this way only, huh? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: delena90

Intriguing! Just read chapter 1. You absolutely have my attention as a reader. Well done!


Oh Hi!

Thank you, pal! Wish to hear more from you as I upload more! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really interesting story... Loved both updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

#3


Asad strode into the cafeteria of his new school, with Seth following him. He met Seth in his first class and had instantly taken a liking to the 17 year old. He looked a lot younger than his age, but he was a sensible kid, though with a pack of lamest jokes and lines in him.


"Yo, hoes!" He heard Seth shout.

He glanced back at Seth and then forward to see a group of 'popular' looking people seated at a big round table. It was the biggest actually.


None of the occupants gave even two cents for the addressing Seth did. Instead they gave a quick glance at the source of the voice and turned back to continue their conversations.


Narrowing his eyes at the group of boys, he tilted his head a bit and addressed Seth. "You do know those people right? Or are you just trying to act cool, eh?"


Seth chuckled and waved it off, and said, "Of course, I do! We all know 'em! They are the Populars, of our school, like every school has! Cliche, ain't it? But it's true!"


Asad smiled and shook his head at the boy. "Then why did you even address them so?"


"Just to gain some reaction!," Seth said, and sighed, "But none ever comes! They are rather very into their own Freaking worlds of getting laid and fighting our biggest Rival, Cornwall, to even give two shits about the others. They even don't care for the feelings of others, but their own. I doubt they even have each other's ******* backs!"


Asad raised an eyebrow at the abusive word Seth used and said, "Woah! So insensitive they are, eh?"


"Why?," Seth smiled and nudged Asad with his elbow, "You a feelings boy, eh Mate?"


Draping his arm over Seth's shoulder and pulling him into the line for food, Asad laughed, "You'll soon know, mah boy! Very soon!"


It hadn't been even a few minutes, when he felt Seth starting pull out of his hold.

"What's up, Seth?"


He saw him swallowing slowly as he looked beyond his shoulder. "I- I gotta go.."


Asad was fast enough to grab hold of Seth's arm and pulled him back in line. "Tell me, Dude!," he chided, turning back to look for whatever's bothering him. "Why do you look so... pink?," a look of quite disbelief crossing his features.


Seth look flustered than usual and started looking anywhere but him, and started scratching his ear. "Uh.. Nothing.."


"Really?," Asad raised an eyebrow, chewing his cheek. "Seth?," he chided slowly, as he pushed him forward to go forth in the line with his tray.


But as soon as he had said it, he saw Seth rushing out of the line and out of the cafeteria with his tray. Confused at the boy's weird actions, he kept staring at the stairs that Seth just took to make his so-called escape. Suddenly something soft descended on his side, making him instantly turn and catch hold of it, before something happened.

A small face came into view.

And she opened her eyes.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res! 😃

unres! sorry sorry sorry! i was busy writing a fun post!

i'm sure the 'soft thing' is the famous mona darling (Zoya) but but but but why did seth run away?? sab usse dar ke bhaag jate hai kya?? 😆😆😆

ok jokes apart! i really liked this part but it was veryyy short! update soonishhh! i want to read the next part ASAP warna... 😆😆😆
Edited by startruck - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

You still not done reading?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is Seth gay and crushing on Asad? Update soon! Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: delena90

Is Seth gay and crushing on Asad? Update soon! Thanks for the pm :)



*gasp* Seriously?? I didn't know pal!! 😲😲
Do you want me to make him one? 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unreserved

This Seth seems a weird character

Behaving so unusual

Whatever he was saying sab mere upar se gaya

And the most weird thing. He escaped. Like really

Suddenly something soft descended on his side, making him instantly turn and catch hold of it, before something happened.

what this must be??

If I think then it must be a girl

Maybe Zoya!!!??? or maybe anyone else

Let me read the next one for this. See ya at the next one

Again this was AWESOME as usual

Yours,

Sweetum sweetu

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: startruck

res! 😃


unres! sorry sorry sorry! i was busy writing a fun post!

LOL! I know!😉

i'm sure the 'soft thing' is the famous mona darling (Zoya) but but but but why did seth run away?? sab usse dar ke bhaag jate hai kya?? 😆😆😆

Achcha? I wanna know who that gal is, so let's ride the car together you know! *pulling you into the centre of the road of my brain* 😎 Yeah! That's my Brain-wa! 😆 🤣 Okay! That was lame, I know! 😛

Hahahaha... I don't know why the guy ran away! 😆 I am still figuring out why on Earth I did that!😳 🤣

ok jokes apart! i really liked this part but it was veryyy short! update soonishhh! i want to read the next part ASAP warna... 😆😆😆

Pssh... I know that this part is utter crap! 🤢 Nothin was really coming up as to how to start this hot guy's comeback to school-road!😲

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