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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx for all the comments .. will update later or tomorrow :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome part
Asad gave a red rose to Zoe
That was soo nice
plz continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hey zara..don't put negativity...asad-zoya, ayan-humeira..should be together...jst make it simple & sound...zayda stretch mat krn pls...phir thoda boring lagne lagta hain...its perfectly going nw...love asad-zoya ...love story,ayan-asad bromance...don't spoil it yr...

pls continue & do PM me...

pari
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Originally posted by: princeegoyal

hey zara..don't put negativity...asad-zoya, ayan-humeira..should be together...jst make it simple & sound...zayda stretch mat krn pls...phir thoda boring lagne lagta hain...its perfectly going nw...love asad-zoya ...love story,ayan-asad bromance...don't spoil it yr...


pls continue & do PM me...

pari

thanks for the comment it really helped me as I was stuck whilst I was writing 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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is everyone ready for the next update .. coming up in 5 mins 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hope you like this part ..
it has abit of of everyone and asad and zoya
so enjoy

part 13

everyone was getting ready for tonights funtion .. it was the flower jewellery ceromony .. zoya was in nikhats room with all the other girls helping her get ready ...

wow nikhat .. you are looking so beautiful .. imraan is going to be speechless ..

do you really think so ? nikhat shyly asked .. of course they all hugged her ..

humeira was still irrated with zoya so she left the room and took nuzhat and najma with her to go check on some decoration .. leaving zoya behind who felt hurt but didint want to show it ..

i will go check if phupi needs my help zoya told nikhat .. and she turned to leave ..

zoya wait .. nikhat held her hand and stopped her .. i know we all havent been very welcoming to you but i want to thank you today ..

thank me ? for what ..zoya asked confused ?

for making my bhaijaan fall in love with you ..

nikhat your bhaijaan is going to be engaged to humera.. zoya replied

but he is not engaged as yet so tell him how you feel ... i see it in your eyes and his .. zoya whatever is between the both of you .. its true love !! dont give up on bhaijaan .. make him say it or you both will regret it for the rest of your lives ..

i know you dont want to upset humera but you cant just ignore those feelings.. and nikhat hugged zoya ..

thank you nikhat ... ive never had a family and zoya hugged nikhat back tears running down her face ..

and then she was back to her usual happy self ... then she asked nikhat if she could borrow one of lehengas as she didnt have any traditional outfits so nikhat took her to her cupboard and told her to choose any colour she wanted ..

zoya was about to choose a pink and black when she remembered asad telling her red is better and she blushed and she chose a simple red lehenga with black and silver lace ..

...

all the guests were arriving and zoya was nowhere to be seen .. the khan family stood at the door welcoming the guests .. humeira came and stood in between asad and ayaan .. and ayaan was mesmerised by her beauty when his mother said .. ayaan enough daydreaming .. plz go and check up on zoya ..and bring her here to stand with us ...

ayaan ill go .. asad quickly said before ayaan could go and he went to get zoya leaving his whole family shocked and ayaan laughing at his older brother who was in love ...

humeira looked at him rushing to zoya but she didnt know why she didnt feel jealous .. shouldnt she be angry at zoya for taking her man ... humeira wondered .

but for the first time she didnt think of asad as hers !! and then she she realised even though she and asad were perfect for each other they were never meant for each another .. he belonged to zoya .. and she smiled .. her heart letting him go ..

ayaan watched humeira with a smile on her face looking at asad and he knew she had accepted that asad was in love with zoya ..

nows my chance ayaan thought .. ayaan turned to humeira and started to talk .. but silence .. she was soo beautiful .. his mind and tongue went num and he stood there with his mouth open ..

ayaan .. are u ok .. humeira nughed him and ran away giggiling ..

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zoya was in her room listening to her ipod .. she was trying to tie the strings at the back but it was hard as the scarf kept coming in her way .. and thats how asad found her .. he knocked but no reply .. he opened the door and there she was .. looking more stunning than ever .. he saw she was tring to tie the strings so he walked upto help her and he put his hand on hers and he took the strings .. zoya gasped when she saw him.. he was dressed in a black and silver shewani suit .. he never looked more handsome .. she let him take the strings and he tied it for her and his fingers touched her back sending an electric shock through her body .. she could feel his breath on her neck .. he was so close to her ..zoya turned to wards him and looked in his eyes .. they stood in silence ... asad came closer towards her .. zoya moved backwards but he stopped her ,, put his hand on her back and pulled her towards him ... his face came closer to hers ... he bent his head down and zoya closed her eyes and then the unexpected happend .. asad whispered .. not until we are married miss farooqi .. and i told you red is definitly better than pink .. and he let her go a smirk on his face ..

now can we go .. ammi is waiting for you .. zoya was angry .. he was playing games with her !!! well he doesnt know who he has messed with !! and zoya left the room with him a revenge smile on her face ...

dilshaad was at the door greeting guests when da smile left her face and she went cold .. rashid who was next to her turned to his wife and saw she looked worried .. whats wrong dilshaad he asked .. they are here and she looked towards them .. rashid followed her gaze and it was them .. razia and sidduqi... the entered and greeted dilshaad and rashid then they went and hugged humeira and then she asked ,,

humeira where is asad ..

im right here he said walking towards them .. razia and siddiqi started walking towards him and what they saw next stopped them in their tracks ... the girl walking behind asad

who was she ?

it couldnt be .. she looked exactly like her !! it wasnt possible .. razia thought

she was dead i made sure of it !!

precap .. zoya makes asad jealous

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nyc..evil eyes n
zoya..asad help her..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
its a lovely update...
just luv it...
please pm me fr the next update...
eagerly waiting fr the next update n even more cause of the precap waiting to see a jeolous asad...
please continue sooon n pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey everyone thanks for all the awesome comments will update by tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Hey intersting cnvpt. Luvd the story. Pllzz do pm me whn u cont.

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