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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey everyone hope you enjoy the new update .. will post aagin tomorrow or day after as well

next chapter part 14

zoya .. dilshaad called ..

jee phupi ? im sorry im late .. you know its my first time wearing indian clothes .. zoya smiled

i know , dilshaad hugged her and said .. you are looking very beautiful !!

yes very beautiful , ayaan screamed across the hall and recieved daggers from asad and humeira ..

it was just a compliment, ayaan brushing his hair back muttered under his breath..

razia came and bumped into zoya .. cant you see where youre walking . stupid ladki ..razia stared at her ..

im so sorry zoya apoligised ..

dilshaad intervened .. im sorry razia , but i think you will be pleased to meet zoya ..she is staying with us ,,,

zoya this humeiras ammi razia !!

pleasure to meet you zoya reached out to shake her hand but razia turned her head and walked away !!

before anyone could respond .. there was a noise at the front and nuzhat and najma came in saying .. imraan is here , imraan is here ..

ok asad and ayaan, dilshad started giving orders .. i want you boys to go with all the girls to welcome imraan and his family .. while your abbu and i bring nikhat down ..

jee ammi . asad replied and took ayaan ,zoya humeira and his 2 sisters to welcome imraan ..

zoya was walking in front of asad and he teasingly started pulling her dupatta .. zoya shot him an angry look and started walkin faster , still plotting her revenge ato get back at asad ..

they all welcomed ayaan and his family and imraan introduced his friends to everyone .. then he called zoya and said .. i think you will be interested to meet Adil.. he is from new york .. nikhat told me you like reading about new york and adil is a travel agent so he can answer any of you questions ..

hi adil .. zoya shook his hand .but adil bent down and kissed her hand and said this is how we greet beautiful women in new york and zoya laughed ..

nikhat is here.. imraan everone is waiting for you . asad almost shouted abruptly .

zoya turned to look at him and saw him staring at her hand in adils and she saw her chance for revenge and took it .. she pulled adil with her and said .. come i will explain to you what this ceromony is about ..and you can tell me about new york ..

the flower ceromny started and evryone stood around watching nikhat and imraan .. zoya stood an one side whispering to adil who was getting uncomfortable as he could see asads anger in his eyes staring at him ..

he whispered to zoya .. look i have a girlfriend and im kinda scared of him !! his eyes indicating to asad ..

chill please .. zoya laughed .. im just making him jealous .. will you help me ?

ooh jealous boyfriends .. i most certainly will help .. only bcoz i recognise true love .. adil smiled

asad stood on the other side .. watching zoya and that guy whispering and laughing and he was boiling with anger !!! how could she do that .. earlier she wanted me to kiss her and now she is on some other guys arms .. whats wrong with her ..

asad was about to go over her and question her when everyone started throwing flowers and he couldnt get to her ...

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zoya was standing in the balcony looking at the stars .. when all of a sudden someone pulled her and her back was gainst the wall .. her mouth covered preventing her from screaming ... her eyes were closed but she knew it was him ...

her heart was racing and she could feel his breath on her lips .. she slowly opened her eyes and looked into his chocolate brown eyes ..

he moved his hand from her mouth .. and she took in a long breath .. he watched her and he saw all the emotions in her eyes , from fear to shock to surprise and now they had anger in them ,,

zoya tried to push him away but she was pinned to the wall .. his arms at either side of her .. he came close to her and whispered in her ear .. stay away from him miss farooqi .. i dont want you anywhere near him .. understand

zoya shoved him again and released herself from him ..

why should i mr khan ? he is my friend .. and who are you to tell me who to talk to or not ..

im your ... he couldnt finish his sentence ..

my what ? zoya asked ? what mr khan ?

she turned to walk away from him when he pulled her back towards him .. he moved a strand away from her face ...

mis farooqi ..umm.. i am your ... umm .. asad stuttered .. why was he so nervous ?

umm ..

are you gonna say it or not mr khan ? i am nothing to you until you say it to me !! just 3 words mr khan !!

umm miss fa , i mean zoya umm

hey zoya a voice interrupted !! everyone is dancing , may i plz have this dance . adil winked at her .

she was till in asads embrace .. whe he moved in front of her and looked at a now scared adil and said .. she already has a partner to dance with .. you can leave now !!

when he left zoya started shouting at him .. allah miya mr khan .. so much anger .. he pulled her .. put his hand on her waist and hugged her .. and said .. this anger and jealousy is all for you zoya .. everything i do now its only for you ..

zoya hugged him back and said ,, im still waiting for those 3 words mr khan ..

ill say it i promise ..

fine mr khan you have till tomorrow night to say it zoya whispered and then left him alone ..

or so they thought they were alone !! but razia was watching everything ... i will see to it he never says those words ... humeira will be mrs asad ahmed khan !!

precap ...zoya crying

will asad say those 3 words or will razia destroy them ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
intresting...KILL THAT RAZIA PLZ. SHE Z GETTING INTO MY NERVS. Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i hate razia...uff we r tired of asad's woh..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read the whole story in one go. Awesome...!!! You're wonderful 👏 Please continue soon and please dopm me when you update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg it such a great update...
just luv it...
it really nice to see a jealous asad n he is possesive of zoya but still havent said the 3 magic words...
thx fr the pm...
hoping asad to tell to zoya the 3 magic words...
please continue soon eagerly waiting fr the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx for all the comments .. dnt worry .. soon razia will get whats coming to her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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razia...yeh yaha bhi aa gyi...kill her yr,...don't let her spoil this beautiful couple...pls asad jst said it...hey u updated it...but no pm...why so...pls update soon & do pm me too..



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Edited by princeegoyal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz buddy me if you want pm plz 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum update!!!! Cntn soon waiting to read more!!!👍🏼
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HEY EVERONE TODAY WILL BE A 2 PART UPDATE !! YAY ..LET ME KNOW HOW IS THE FIRST PART ?
PART 15 - PART 1
THE NEXT MORNING ASAD WAS WALKING AROUND IN HIS ROOM THINKING OF A GOOD WAY TO TELL MISS FAROOQI THAT HE LOVES HER !! SHE GAVE HIM A DEADLINE TILL TONIGHT TO CONFESS AND HE DIDNT WANT TO LOSE THIS OPPORTUNITY ..

BUT ASAD WAS A MAMMAS BOY AND HE WANTED TO MAKE SURE DILSHAAD WAS OK WITH HIM AND ZOYA BEING TOGETHER BEFORE HE CONFESSED TO ZOYA !! SO HE SET OUT TO DO 2 MISSIONS .. MISSION 1 - TELL AMMI AND MISSION 2- CONFESS TO ZOYA

ON HIS WAY TO HIS AMMIS ROOM HE BUMPED IN TO HER !!! SHE WAS WALKING TO THE KITCHEN AND DIDNT SEE HIM AND SHE FELL BACKWARDS INTO HIS ARMS >> AND HIS EYES MET HERS .. (MITWA MOMENT ) SHE WANTED TO MOVE AWAY FROM HIM , SHE WAS DETERMINED TO STAY AWAY FROM HIM TILL HE SAID THOSE 3 WORDS BUT THE MINUTE SHE LOOKED AT HIM .. SHE FORGOT EVERYTHING ELSE ..

IM SORRY MR KHAN .. I ..

ITS OK MISS FAROOQI .. ASAD STOPPED HER ...LET ME TELL HER NOW ASAD THOUGHT ? WE CAN ALWAYS TELL AMMI AFTER WARDS AND HE STARTED

MISS FAROOQI .. UMM I MEAN ZOYA .. I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING ..I .. UMM

SAY IT MR KHAN !! ZOYA ALMOST SHOUTED I DONT KNOW WHY YOU ARE HESITATING SHE SAID LAUGHINGLY ..

OK OK RELAX .. ASAD SAID CALMING HER AND TOOK A DEEP BREATH ..

HE HELD HER HAND AND LOOKED IN HER EYES ..

ZOYAS HEART STARTED BEATING FASTER AND SHE KNEW HE WAS GONNA SAY IT !!

WELL ITS TIME MR KHAN SAYS IT ZOYA THOUGHT

ASAD STARTED : ZOYA I LO

AAASSSAAD BETA THERE U ARE !!! I WAS LOOKING FOR YOU ..COME HERE ..RAZIA INTERRUPTED THEM

ASAD CLOSED HIS EYES IN FUSTRATION AND AND THEN LOOKED APOLOGETICALLY AT ZOYA ..

GO .. SHE PUSHED HIM AWAY .. THE DAY IS STILL YOUNG ..

RAZIA , DILSHAAD AND ALL THE GIRLS CAME DOWN AND GATHERED IN THE LOUNGE ... THERE WAS SAREES EVERYWHERE ..

RAZIA HELD UO 2 SAREES AND ASKED ASAD ? WHICH COLOUR DO YOU THINK HUMEIRA WILL LOOK GOOD IN ? ASAD AND HUMEIRA WERE BOTH EMBARRASSED AND DIDNT KNOW WHAT TO ANSWER AND ZOYA FELT JEALOUS LOOKING AT THEM ...

AMMI .. I LIKE THE BLUE .. HUMEIRA SAID QUICKLY ..

BUT I WANT TO KNOW WHAT COLOUR ASAD LIKES ? RAZIA NAGGED !!

BLUE LIKE THE SKY FOR BEAUTIFUL HUMEIRA !!! AYAAN CAME IN WINKING AT HIS BROTHER .. WOW HUMEIRA .. WE BOTH CHOSE BLUE ? AND HUMEIRA BLUSHED

ASAD WENT TO HIS MOTHER TO TALK TO HER AND SHE LIFTED TO SAREES AND CALLED ZOYA ..

ZOYA ,TELL ME WHICH COLOUR DO YOU LIKE ? THE PINK , GREEN OR YELLOW ONE ? COME CHOOSE ..

ZOYA WENT TO CHOOSE A SAREE AND ASAD WAS STANDING BEHIND DILSHADD WATCHING HER ...

ZOYA LIFTED THE YELLOW WHEN SHE HEARD A COUGH AND LOOKED UP AT ASAD AND SAW HIM SHAKING HIS HEAD AT THE YELLOW SO SHE SMILED AT HIM .. SHE POINTED TO THE GREEN AD HE MADE HIS FACE INTO A NO THEN HE MOUTHED THE WORD "PINK" SO ZOYA QUICKLY PICKED UP THE PINK SAREE AND TOLD DILSHAAD SHE IS TAKING THAT ONE AND SHE WAS GOING TO TRY IT ON ..AND SHE LOOKED AT ASAD WHO WAS SMILING AT HER ..

DILSHAAD CAME AND STOOD NEXT TO ASAD AND WHISPERED .. EVEN I THINK PINK WILL LOOK GOOD ON ZOYA !!

ASAD WAS EMBARRASSED AND BLUSHED AND SMILED AT HIS MOTHER ..HE SAID , AMMI I NEED TO TALK TO YOU ABOUT .. DILSHAAD PUT HER HAND ON HIS HAND AND SAID .. I KNOW BETA .. EVEN I LIKE ZOYA ...

ASAD HUGGED HIS AMMI AND SHE TOLD HIM .. TODAY YOU HAVE MADE ME THE HAPPIEST MOTHER IN THE WORLD !!

ASAD SAID .. NOW I HAVE TO TELL MISS FAROOQI THAT I LOVE HER ..LET ME GO TELL HER NOW ..

ASAD!! HIS AMMI PULLED HIM BACK !! YOU ARE GOING TO TELL HER NOW ? IN HER ROOM ? THATS SO UNROMANTIC ! THE LEAST YOU COULD DO IS MAKE IT SPECIAL FOR HER .. I HAVE AN IDEA .. AND MOTHER AND SON WHISPERED ABOUT IT ..

RAZIA WATCHED AND SHE WASNT VERY HAPPY ABOUT IT .. I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING AND FAST .. NW THAT DILSHAAD HAS ACCEPTED THEIR RELATION .. ASAD WILL TELL ZOYA ..

DILSHHAD BI .. RAZIA INTERRUPTED .. DONT YOU HAVE TO GO BUY SOME JEWELLERY FOR NIKHATS MEHNDI ? LET ASAD AND AYAAN TAKE YOU AND THE GIRLS THEN YOU KNOW YOU CAN GET THAT DONE ...

OH YES I FORGOT ABOUT THAT .. ASAD LETS GO ? ..

OK AMMI .. CMON EVERY1 .. AYAAN GET EVERY1 IN THE CAR .. ILL CALL MISS FAROOQI ..

ASAD HIS MOTHER CALLED HIM BACK ... WE NEED TO BUY THE RING FOR ZOYA AS WELL .. SO I THINK ITS BETTER SHE DOESNT COME THEN YOU CAN SURPRISE HER ..

OK AMMI LETS GO ..

RAZIA WILL YOU TELL ZOYA WE LEFT PLEASE ?

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ZOYA WAS IN HER ROOM TRYING ON HER SAREE AND SMILED WHEN SHE THOUGHT ABOUT ASAD .. AND SHE COULDNT BELIEVE HOW FAST SHE FELL IN LOVE WITH HIM .. SHE COULDNT BELIEVE HOW LUCKY SHE WAS TO HAVE FOUND LOVE AND A FAMILY .. AFTER LIVING SO LONG WITH A DRUNK AS A GUARDIAN .. SHE SMILED AT HOW EVERYTHING WAS GOING SO WELL ..

RAZIA WALKED INTO ZOYAS ROOM AND SAW HER SMILING AND SHE COULDNT TAKE IT ANYMORE AND SHE STARTED ..

YOU LOOK VERY HAPPY !! OF COURSE YOU ARE HAPPY !!! YOU RUINED MY DAUGHTERS LIFE !!!

ZOYA TURNED AROUND WITH A FRIGHT AND GOT SHOCKED TO HEAR RAZIAS ALLEGATIONS !!

IM SORRY ZOYA SAID .. I DONT UNDERSTAND ..

OH PLEASE !! RAZIA SHOUTED .. DONT PLAY INNOCENT IN FRONT OF ME !! YOU ARE JUST LIKE YOUR WRETCHED MOTHER !!

SHE STOLE YOUR FATHER FROM ME !! AND NOW YOU ARE TAKING ASAD FROM HUMEIRA !! ARE YOU HAPPY ? NO YOU ARE STUPID !! YOU ARE JUST A CRUSH FOR ASAD .. HE ONLY LIKES YOU FOR YOUR BEAUTY !!

NO.. ZOYA STUTTERED THATS NOT TRUE AND A TEAR ROLLED DOWN HER FACE .. ASAD LOVES ME !!

REALLY ? RAZIA TAUNTED HER .. DOES HE REALLY LOVE YOU ? HAS HE TOLD YOU THAT ? OF COURSE NOT .. BCOZ ASAD KNOWS YOU ARE A GOLD DIGGING WOMEN .. BUT HE TRULY LOVES HUMEIRA .. HAVE YOU NOT SEEN IT IN HIS EYES AND THE WAY HE TALKS TO HER ? HE LOVES HUMEIRA !!

NOOO .. PLZ STOP ..ZOYA BEGGED !! I NEVER WANTED ASADS MONEY !! I LOVE HIM AND HIS FAMILY !!

WOW !! RAZIA CLAPPED .. YOU ARE A GREAT ACTERESS .. YOU DONT WANT MONEY .. BUT HERE YOU ARE LIVING FOR FREE IN THIS KHAN MANSION !!

IF YOU LOVE ASAD .. YOU WILL LEAVE HIM ALONE !! GO FROM HERE AND LET HIM BE HAPPY WITH HUMEIRA ... DONT LET THIS FAMILY BE DESTROYED AND GET A BAD REPUTATION BCOZ OF U !! DO U WANT THAT TO HAPPEN TO THEM ZOYA ? RAZIA ASKED .. THEY WILL ALL BE BACK BY 6 O CLOCK .. YOU HAVE TILL THEN TO DECIDE !! AND RAZIA LEFT

ZOYA FELL TO THE GROUND SOBBING AS RAZIAS WORDS RANG IN HER EARS !!

PART 2 .. WHAT DOES ZOYA DECIDE TO DO ? ANY GUESSES ,, PLZ POST IN THE COMMENTS WHAT YOU GUYS THINK ZOYA WILL DO ?
Edited by zara1ksg - 12 years ago

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