A PROMISE FF - update page 18 - 10 sept - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
hmmm nc story cont nd pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Awesome ff

Plz add me to ur pm list

I'm glad that Ayaan opened Asad's eyes

I hope Asad may confess his love to Zoe soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
OMG at first when I read it.. I was like Asad and Humeira 🤢 no way!! But the ZOYAAA camee!!! Please update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
i have no words to say. at first i read asad n humeira i think no. but later u made it as asya. it is beyond my imagination. plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
its nyc...plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
hey everyone !!
I know my last post was really a long time ago ... to be honest I forgot about it but im back and I hope you like it .. buddy me for pms ...
this is a short part but will update later with another part as well ..
I have a question for the readers .. should I turn humeira negative and bring a new girl for ayaan or would you like to see the ayaan humeira storyline ... please comment

part 12

the morning after ayaan and asads talk .. asad decided to tell his mother everything but he didnt get time because nikhats wedding was in 5 days and his mother and all the girls were busy with preparaitons for all the ceromonies ... so asad decided to wait and he told ayaan he will tell his mother everything properly after nikhats marriage takes place ...

asad was leaving work when he heard her voice .. allah miya whats wrong with you najma ..i said pink roses and you are giving me the white ones !!!

asad turned and stared at her .. she was on a ladder decorating the ceiling with flowers .. asad wanted to go upto her and hold her in his arms and tell her that he loves her .. but he knew he had to wait .. he and ayaan needed to tell humeira everything first thenhe could tell zoya...

najma came to him and said .. bhaijaan plz give zoya these flowers ..ammi is calling me ..

he took the roses and went to tell zoya he is leaving it down by her .. then she screamed .. NAJMA .. please pass me the flowers.. thinking najma was still by her .. quitely asad passed her the flowers one at a time ... asad stood quitely while zoya blabbered on and on about the different type of pink flowers and how pink was the best colour of flowers .. till she asked .. isnt it beautiful najma ? waiting for a reply and silence reached her .. zoya turned around to see asad below her satanding with flowers in his hand !!

YOU !!! she exclaimed .. they had barely spoken in two weeks and she never saw him as he always came home late !! he looked so handsome she thought .. dressed in full black .. she continued to stare at him .. then she remembered they decided to be only friends and it pained her knowing he could never be hers ...

yes me .. asad replied .. any problem ?

yes .. i thought najma was here .. y were you giving me the flowers .. dont you have any shame .. and she carried on with her insults and before she knew it her foot slipped on the ladder and she fell ..

asad caught her in his arms ,,, her eyes were closed .. fear etched on her face .. she opened her eyes slowly and looked at asad .. relief washing over her ..

he held he tightly before slowly putting her down ... are you ok he asked ?

yes she said softly .. thank you mr khan .. and she looked up and smiled at him .. her whole face brightening up ..

next time be careful and he was about to leave when he turned around .. took a red rose and put it behind her ear ..and whispered in her ear ..

red is definitely more beautiful than pink . miss farooqui .. zoya blushed and asad left with a small smile on his devishly handsome face ...

meanwhile

razia and siddique arived in india to join the celebrations of nikhats wedding but both of them had a different agenda ..

humeira had to get married to asad and they both vowed they will make sure it happens ...

precap ... asad teases zoya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
tis is just awesome...
it brilliant..
luv the whole story..
please continue soon n please pm me...
eagerly waiting fr the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
really nice. now asad is ready to accept zoya. sooo nice. i think its better to enter a new girl. if its humeira for ayaan zoya, asad,ayaan feels weird after what happened btw them. thanx for pm. hope u update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
awesome.plz continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
humeira neednt turn negative...asad open up..thanks 4 pm

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