AsYa SS: Written in the Stars (Ch 3 POSTED!) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


So true! I hate that rule myself! 😔 Then we have to keep on going back to the PM composer again and again till you have finished. Why can't we differentiate the people from other forums too?
You know there are people from other forums too in my buddy list and it makes it hard for me to PM those who are of a particular forum. Mostly because I don't remember much of their usernames. Then again starts the whole process of looking at their posts and all.. 🤢

Sorry. I'm rambling!

I know!!! I have just given up trying to differentiate btw ppl from other forums. Dont have dat much energy🤢. Lol the scene u described about ur presentation was spot on! šŸ˜› Whenever I have a presentation day in class I settle down comfortably in my seat and buckle myself to go into La la land. And Guess who stars most frequently in my dreamland šŸ˜‰ Of course our very own six packs jahapana. And for some reason he mostly shirtless in my dreams. Wonder why??šŸ˜†
Where do u live? Its hot and humid there in Feb.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
simply loved it.who the hell is crazy enough to betray mr.six packs?and dying to know what happens next.please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: hooriya93

I know!!! I have just given up trying to differentiate btw ppl from other forums. Dont have dat much energy🤢. Lol the scene u described about ur presentation was spot on! šŸ˜› Whenever I have a presentation day in class I settle down comfortably in my seat and buckle myself to go into La la land. And Guess who stars most frequently in my dreamland šŸ˜‰ Of course our very own six packs jahapana. And for some reason he mostly shirtless in my dreams. Wonder why??šŸ˜†
Where do u live? Its hot and humid there in Feb.


Hmmph! Me too. That's why I don't PM people on my Asad-Zoya works. Well, it's time consuming and it is weird that I choose days when am loaded with assignments to write something new or update my old ones!šŸ˜† What do I do with myself?? *shaking my head in disbelief*

Hahahaha... Wait! I don't even remember what I said... *checking my previous reply*
Oh...Hahahahaha... damn, it was the bechaara state of our class! 🄱
Heehee... our chairs have been taken by some stupid people, leaving us those stools we use to sit while drafting. But most of the time we guys are standing while drafting, since it's not possible to get the measurements correct on the top end while sitting.🤢
Heehee... I know i know... Humaare Akdu Jahapanah!! 🤣 Shirtless?? Why not fully ahem ahem?? ā˜ŗļø *wiggling my eyebrows*
Sheesh! Tujhe bigaad dungi mein... No no bachcha... How old are you, gal?
Mumbai, yaar! Humidity ki Maharani hain humaari Mumbai! You??
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
omg such a splendid update...well written...loved their intense conversation and the way zoya starts to apeak...plz update soon, want to know asads realisation
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
That was just awesome...
one of the best ones I've read off late...and I've been following them obsessively for a while now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
What an amazing chapter!! Wow, Asad shared his dil ki baat - I could not believe it. And he was so funny with his internal monologue. And no, some horrible woman betrayed him:(. Aw, he's going to make Zoya pay for that, I just know it.
You're writing and this story just gets better with every chapter. I am absolutely hooked and desperate for the next chapter and Asad's realization:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Amazing update... U are a great writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Omg beautiful SS so well written and gripping you need to continue with it asap<3 do PM me:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome i loved it you have written very very well write more soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
I have really enjoyed reading your first three chapters. Very romantic and very beautiful characterizations of Asad and Zoya. I like the rationale you gave for both of them to enter into an arranged marriage - very well thought out and believable. Also your descriptive writing is well done. Looking forward to more.


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