AsYa SS: Written in the Stars (Ch 3 POSTED!)

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Neetu2825

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Thanks for a lovely update...a great Valentine Day's present🤗
I loved your portrayal of such an emotional scene. I'm glad both were able to reveal the truth behind there reasons for accepting this marriage proposal to the other. Truth is a great start to a lasting relationship. I am interested to know who betrayed him in the past...a old girlfriend?

As for Asad's realization, I am thinking he is going to suggest a "pretend engagement" or "pretend marriage" to Zoya to get his sister married to her love and make Zoya's sister happy.

I guess I'll have to wait and see if I am right. Update soon!

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...SankaDevi...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

It was lovely!! Please PM me the next part!!:D

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

lovely SS..

do pm me whenever u updt..

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: hooriya93

Haahaha... Your reviews brighten up my day hun!! Thanks for being the first. Yup I know how could someone betray the hot, six packs handsome Mr. Khan!!! Really Heartless people! As for finding out his sordid past you are just gonna have to be patient.

Good Luck wid ur presentation Annie!! I am always sweating bullets before presenting so if you r anything like me in this aspect u r gonna need the luck! 😕

-Hooriya

Aww... *blushing real hard* Shtop it you!! *pushing you by the shoulder* You are embarrassing me! 😳

😆 Hahahahaha... I love brightening people's days! Okay, well, even a smile's enough for me re! But achcha lagta hain jab kisike chehre par smile aati hain! ⭐️

Yay! I know! I was happy that I was the first, yayee!!

I will be as long as you up-i-date!! :D Don't mind my ajeeb language! When I get excited, I tend you use words of my own! 😛

Thankoo, hoor! Gosh! I am so like you! And on top of that, we girls had to wear sarees!! 😕 Not that we all weren't looking smoking hot in the class, giving competition to the even the boys in our class, but damn the weather! 😡 Humid toh hain hi, uske upar it was hot like a Summer Day! Sheesh! 😒

Somehow, I and my partner managed to keep up the presentation. Got a dry throat at the end of it all. Horrible, that I was talking like a blabbering Soul! 😭 And the whole class, including me was SLEEPY!!!

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

HowGood Woooaa!. and what? you didnt pm me? :'(

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hooriya93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
HowGood Woooaa!. and what? you didnt pm me? :'(

Really. I thought I did. My bad I might have missed u sorry, I hate the IF rule of just pming 20 ppl at a time. Why cant we just send a msg to all of our friends?

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Esha Singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Woowww !!!!!!!!!! This is brilliant

Amazing how you described the emotions of both, but esp Zoya. Please update soon...i am curious to know what Asad has in his mind
Can you pls pm me ????

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: hooriya93

Really. I thought I did. My bad I might have missed u sorry, I hate the IF rule of just pming 20 ppl at a time. Why cant we just send a msg to all of our friends?

So true! I hate that rule myself! 😡 Then we have to keep on going back to the PM composer again and again till you have finished. Why can't we differentiate the people from other forums too?

You know there are people from other forums too in my buddy list and it makes it hard for me to PM those who are of a particular forum. Mostly because I don't remember much of their usernames. Then again starts the whole process of looking at their posts and all.. 🤢

Sorry. I'm rambling!

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sneaky-aj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

both of their stories are sad...especially Zya's but really nice portraual of the scens
and loved how Asad is totally mesmerized by her!

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

This is an awesome SS...plz cont soon... I'm eager to see them getting married...lol
n wats dis ?! Someone betrayed Asad ?? Cant wait to knw who it is...