AsYa SS: Written in the Stars (Ch 3 POSTED!)

hooriya93 thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Hey everyone. I am back but this time with a SS. This idea had been running around in my mind and I decided to put it on paper so to say. Posting the first chapter. Hope everyone likes it.



Chapter 1

Zoya watched the houses pass by as the car whirred on. The trees looked greener and fresher due to the rain this morning and there were decent sized puddles of water on the side of the road where children were indulging themselves by splashing water on each other. Usually this sight would have brought a small smile upon her face but not today. Today it was masked by the turmoil her heart was going through.

"Zoya please try to understand."

"No Aapi. No! I refuse to listen to what you are saying. How can you even think like that?"

"I have to be practical! Hope is fine and all but false hope isn't. And what you are exhibiting right now is ignorance and false hope."

Zoya's eyes filled with helpless tears and her body seemed to be drained of all energy as she slumped down on the chair. Zeenat moved to kneel in front of her and grabbed both of her hands in her own.

"Bache, try to understand that what I am doing is all for you. I want to see you settle. I want to know in my heart that when I die, my sister is happy and safe. That I have fulfilled my promise to Ammi and Khala. I want to be there on your wedding Zoya."

She looked into her Aapi's beseeching eyes feeling her heart breaking at the love that shone through them. Even now when she was supposed to be thinking of herself, her sister's only thought was for her.

"And you will Aapi. You will be at my wedding. You will be the-"

"The doctor's given me six months Zoya."

And this was the moment Zoya's heart stopped.

"What?" she gasped. She watched as Zeenat got up to sit on the chair beside her, running a shaky hand through her hair. She noticed her sister's bony fingers, the veins contrasting against the paleness of her hand.

"We went to the doctor today. He told me that the cancer is spreading faster than they expected. I only have six months to live."

Zeenat placed her hand on Zoya's cheek and forced her to look at her. She stared at her teary face as she spoke,

"Please Zoya. Agree to this. He is a very good boy and I believe you will be very happy. Anwar has known this family for a long time. Trust me and agree to marry him. We are going to meet them tomorrow."

So here she sat in the backseat of the car, heading towards an unknown face. She had already decided on getting married to the guy Zeenat had chosen for her. So meeting him and his family today was just a formality for her. How could she refuse her sister? The sister who had brought her up single handedly and without any complaints. The sister who had treated her orphaned cousin like her daughter. Zeenat was everything to Zoya. Her mother, her father, her whole family. And now that she was dying the least Zoya could do was give her what she wanted the most.

~******************~

If you want future updates then buddy me. Let me know what you think.


INDEX

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Edited by hooriya93 - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

68

Views

19.4k

Users

42

Likes

244

Frequent Posters

kandygrover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Oohh great... Loved it... Poor aapii
latanzia thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
love it and pm me when u update
dumas thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
awesome start hope its assad she is coming to marry thanks for the pm can't wait to read more

sophie420 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Nice beginning!
Poor Zeenat!
Hope it's Asad, there meeting!
Please pm me when you update!
Update Soon!
~Sophie :)
raii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
liked it!! plz pm me when you update!!
grad2011 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
really nice start update soon
iqra11 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
hey i loved ur ss...it was emotional but outstanding...cud u please pm too...i am having difficulties adding u as a buddy...
thanks and please please continue soon
sneaky-aj thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
so i m guessing the guy is Asad right?
interesting concept...thanks for the PM! :D
nimmycub thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
oh wow, bechari aapi! i cant wait for the next part

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

a year ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".