Dil ki baat: Asad's POV Pt 4-pg 16 (Feb 3)

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Sangeeta,

That was amazing. You have captured Asad's thoughts and feelings really well...I love it.

PLEASE continue.

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proshomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

This was sooo beautiful and amazzing,plz update soon and do pm me plzz

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: spoorthi
its awesome
beautifully written
asad pain can be felt... plz continue

Thanks ksen and spoorthi...asad has def seen a lot of pain in his childhood.

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: princessjojo
Beautiful. You explained every aspect of Asad- his brooding serious nature, his orderliness, his six pack (lol!), his success, his profession and more. Its as if you took a peek into Gul's mind. I especially loved your explanation behind him choosing architecture-the need for design and control and more. Just amazing!!!

Thanks jojo...hey you are sweet to say that but credit does go to Gul and her team for writing such a well defined character. Yes, even I thought architecture makes so much sense for his personality. OCD helps in getting the perfect design😊

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: varma.nishi1

U did not PM me 😭

Anyway I just came across this and Before I clicked it open I thought its one of ur posts, but it turned out to be an FF ...l,will surely give it a read soon ...

Tank didn't I tell u that ASad Ahmad Khan will get u back to writing fiction ...👏

Sorry nishi. I didn't really pm many people as I wasn't sure how many are interested in reading ffs at this stage. Also, this is not really ff but just my interpretation of what goes on in asad's mind. I would love it if you have to time to read it. Let me know if thats what the creatives had in mind when they wrote his character. Yes, KSG has always been an inspiration for my ffs...and he has not disappointed here either.

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin
WEE!! You are back! I m a big fan of your DMG FF's. I m glad that Asad Ahmed Khan or should i say KSG have inspired you again. The part was amazing and you bought out every detail very carefully. The way you have described his past, childhood days and why he choosed architecture was just marvellous. The writing was amazing and you gave a wonderful preview to Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan^^

Thanks salwa. Yes, KSG does such a good job of portraying his character that it makes it easy for us to write ffs. I am glad you could relate to his character through this peek into his childhood.

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-
welcome back in writing di,

i don know what to say on this FF cz words seems less but its simply mind blowing. i enjoyed reading it a lot <3

keep writing !

Thanks Yaariyan...KSG/aak is def a great inspiration. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks @ Darcy, @ humptydumpty, @ grad @ zara

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: _Oishi_
wow...you are back in writing..Yayyy..I am so happy

and the start is soo damn Good..i cant express how happy i am..and i loved the part..plss continue soon

Thanks oishi...yeah, a lot of people had asked me to write something. I was just waiting for that right inspiration. KSG has done it again. Glad to see so many old ' faces' here