Constructive Criticism because I care

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Posted: 13 years ago
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1. Please show people reacting in a logical way. In every indian drama that I watch, I see people reacting in the strangest ways to some situations.All Ayaan did today was joked around with a sad girl and then left to answer some call without atleast telling her that he will talk to her later. In an effort to stick to Ayaan's primary character sketch of being a flirt, don't show him flirting with people on the phone when a girl who is standing in front of him is emotionally unstable.When Nikhat saw that Humera is tying to say something to her, why was she more concerned about making her feel warm and giving her medicines ? ๐Ÿ˜† I am sorry, but that looked ridiculous. Instead of asking her what happened, and urging her to finish what she was saying, she said " let me go get medicine for you"...It just made the girls look stupid. Make them react more sensibly please.
2. Why does Najma have such few dialogues ? She doesn't talk even when there is a lot going on around her. It's nice to see thats he respects her brother and allows him to speak without interrupting him. However, at times it is nice to show that she has opinions of her own which she chooses to voice. The actress has a pretty face, but she's not being given the opportunity to ACT, like..literally.
3. The worst thing Asad said today was " In ke jiju ne inhen yahan chood to diya par inke harkaton ke baare mein nahin bataya"?? Where is Zoya's dignity now?? Last time she left the house, this time too, she should have just left the house. I strongly feel that Zoya should have just left the house. What he said about Zoya's jiju leaving Zoya with them was so insulting and they even showed Zoya's reaction to that which showed how MUCH that hurt her. That was so insulting, it's like saying that someone gave you something without telling you about it's poor quality and now you're stuck with it. My advice to CVs is that if they want to show AsYa having a future together then they need to make Asad say things that just show difference in thinking instead of showing him be a plain jerk to her. Later on it's going to be hard to see them getting all lovey-dovey when these past scenes are remembered.
4. Asad was shown to be a guy who respected his Mom so much that he allowed Zoya in the house and tolerated her only for his Mom then how come he is going against him Mom to send Zoya to meet some stranger guy?? When Dilshad is saying that her Jiju allowed her to run away from the shaadi, then why is he still hell bent upon sending her there?? Just to satisfy his ego?? IF Zoya was really wrong, wouldn't Zoya's jiju ask her to apologize, ya know being the good guy he is according to his Mom?? For Asad, Imran's need for an answer is suddenly more valuable than his mother's wishes and statements. It's like he is set to fight for the rights of others even if he has to go against his Mom. I don't think Cvs should contradict what they showed in the beginning regarding Asad-Dilshad equation.
These are all the things that I found wrong about today's episode, if anyone else has suggestions as well, then do comment because we never know , someone from 4Lions might actually read it. If you found this offensive then don't even bother to comment because I am just saying all this because I care abt the quality of this drama. SO yeah, agree or disagree but politely please. don't bring in actors and start defending KSG or some other actor because I didnt say anything bad about them.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
I quite agree with you!

1. Yes, I thought so this. If Ayaan is going to be portrayed as a flirt, at least give him some humanity. And besides, it's not called being a flirt if he answers a phone whilst a girl is upset, it's called being rude. If he could pacify his mother and sister, then he shouldn't need to leave Humaira! About Nikhat, to be honest I think she just saw Humera's health much more important. God knows what illness she has, so perhaps she didn't think much about it.

2. Najma I feel is more like a catalyst between Asad and Zoya, as with Dilshad. It's like most of their scenes are linked with them. I'd understand but yes, Najma does have few scenes although I don't mind but I want to know more about her backstory with the other girls [Nikhat and Nuzrat].

3. DAMN right. I have nothing more to add.

4. I don't get why Asad is all in Zoya's business. I think he just wants to soothe his ego, to get one over with Zoya. The logic in this is stupid especially as the whole supposed kidnapping track is happening. I've always thought Akram had a creepy side. ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me too agreeing most of it ..

but i guess they are doing this to build up the story to such phase where it would erupt at the climax..

I guess humaira will fall in a very bad trap .. i loved this scene as many silly girl fall for this type of trap i know some so i want it to be shown properly as it might open some of the silly girl's eyez..

and about nikhad what should I say more ..

and Ayaan .. they definitely have some plan for him.. im giving them some more times..

about Asad .. he will pay for his own words some day ... im waiting for those.. and next week will be the kidnapping .. so it will be intense ..

I kind of started disliking the way he keeps on hurting zoya with his words.. :(

but all of these r indicating some major twists in the story so im just following it .. :)
Edited by godhuli_4_Sarun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Asad having Zoya go alone to meet a guy is not like his character, they prob should've shown him accompanying her there and having to attend some call or work leaving her there alone with Akram. That would look more realistic.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a fiction cant be so realistic nd logical like u said...!!

otherwise it would look like a reality show...๐Ÿค”
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so rude man... u could have skipped it ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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About Asad peeping into zoya business
but i strongly felt he was talking on behalf of Akram as he have seen whats Akram going thru after his roka broke up . He worked for him for 2yrs and as Asad said all employees is like his family member sooo He was talking on behalf of Akram if its zoyas business its Akram business too ...

But a person who is working very good in his office for 2yrs without any giving negative sign how will Asad know that Akram is such a creepy person ...

When zoya was tring to help rashid without know the whole story she became mahan and when Asad tring to help Akram to get over his depression he became male chauvinist ?

i have been saying and will always say fault is from both side so blamming one is not right
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I agree with all the points you have raised. I especially don't like the way asad keeps hurting zoya with his words. This makes him look insensitive which goes against his character. There is a limit for everything and he crossed his limits yesterday. Lets see how the story unfolds now. Nice post btw.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*claps*

GREAT post! I absolutely agree with you. Qubool Hai has a wonderful story but it would be nice to see some realism once in a while.

Asad seems like a jerk at times and you're right when you say that it's just going to be weird when he suddenly starts caring about Zoya..
And I absolutely agree about Najma and Ayan too! I mean.. they've given us a character sketch but they still have to stick to basic human tendency.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi ashrun, i agree 100%, i have said it also to the writers before dont muck up the show or its characters, people would be dissident ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ in the end, they have done it with other shows and no one wanted to accept what they were trying to do or show and it caused drop in ratings, so if they want to make match of zoya/asad( which everyone wants) stop this constant ugly battles between them, but that is what the writers thrive on, the viewers getting emotional, angry and upset and promoting the show to keep it running, no problem but give us viewers entertainment that we appreciate also ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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