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zara

@zara-KSG-malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: varma.nishi1

U really need to get ur facts right dear ...This PH is known for its romance, chemistry and charm
Heave u heard of IPK, this was from the same PH and I think it is the most popular show now and known for chemistry and charm ...

But QH is slightly diffrenet ,..hence the romance will start later..who said romance will happen in one week..makers know their job dear ,,.there is still time for romance in the real sense

my facts r right dear, from the very start we are aware that its not romantic show so there were no expectations from the very start, love story will be shown in the back ground always but even if it background it does not mean, u will not show any continuity

I know 4lions very well and their strengths and weakness too, if their previous show had done really well it does not mean they cant do mistakes in future

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jasw

@jasw

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Excellent point zara. Abrupt ending kills the flow. It would be much nicer if they continue the scene and show what effect it is having on each other. Right now it is only action and when it is time to show reaction, the scene is cut!! As the other member said they are the maker of IPK, but in IPK, every scene at least in the beginning was quite elaborate on the reaction. How the lead actor/actress were effected was shown not only in their interaction but also in their conversation with their siblings. It adds to the story and the gradual build up. Hope the creatives will take a note of it.

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Shruti

@ShrutiRaina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

i agree zaru...the flow in the scenes is breaking at many points...the continuity is very much needed...otherwise it will break d essence of d scenes...i hope d CV's understand this nd correct it in future

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Yeah. I agree with you all.

Definitely, there will be romance and stuff in the future but there's something called coherence and continuity in script. Both of which seems a wee-bit off. :|

Let's hope they work on it.

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Ecrivain

@Ecrivain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: zara-KSG-malik

my facts r right dear, from the very start we are aware that its not romantic show so there were no expectations from the very start, love story will be shown in the back ground always but even if it background it does not mean, u will not show any continuity

I know 4lions very well and their strengths and weakness too, if their previous show had done really well it does not mean they cant do mistakes in future

Zara right ...

See like every individual knows their job , so do they as in the makers and no one is perfect , so why Expect something unnatural from them ...I am sure u are not aware of the off screen dynamics and what goes into making a daily soap...no I DONOT expect the viewers to understand that but there are sometimes unviable circumstances where in stuff just happens ...(relate to the current scenario)

U see there are many aspects to what u see in 30mins ...the scripting, acting, directing, editing, screenplay , it's a tricky business ...so yes sometimes the bloopers do occur...please give it sometime

And I know what u guys are expecting and I am not even here to tell u to change ur POV ..just bringing about a clarity ...so that when u criticize the few mistakes , u can appreciate the good points too...doesn't it make more sense then ...As in it's so easy to criticize but would not it be nice if certain good point are brought to notice as well ...and if u compare QH or the previous shows to others running now amongst the array of channels, u would know what it clicks ...and why are watching it ...

Also, nothing personal sweetheart ...just here to help, appreciate ur POV much ...I am gonna be here whenever u need a listening ear, peace out

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priyankabhat09

@priyankabhat09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: varma.nishi1

Zara right ...

See like every individual knows their job , so do they as in the makers and no one is perfect , so why Expect something unnatural from them ...I am sure u are not aware of the off screen dynamics and what goes into making a daily soap...no I DONOT expect the viewers to understand that but there are sometimes unviable circumstances where in stuff just happens ...(relate to the current scenario)

U see there are many aspects to what u see in 30mins ...the scripting, acting, directing, editing, screenplay , it's a tricky business ...so yes sometimes the bloopers do occur...please give it sometime

And I know what u guys are expecting and I am not even here to tell u to change ur POV ..just bringing about a clarity ...so that when u criticize the few mistakes , u can appreciate the good points too...doesn't it make more sense then ...As in it's so easy to criticize but would not it be nice if certain good point are brought to notice as well ...and if u compare QH or the previous shows to others running now amongst the array of channels, u would know what it clicks ...and why are watching it ...

Also, nothing personal sweetheart ...just here to help, appreciate ur POV much ...I am gonna be here whenever u need a listening ear, peace out

Hi Nishi,

I am not a teen Fangirl but a viewer in my late 20s. I am not commenting as a fan from 4 lions previous show, have watched only IPK ( liked initial 6-8 months then left watching the show )and not Geet or Arjun or other shows. Also I am not BS, SI, KSG or SJ FAAAN , I am mere viewer who just want 20 min of entertainiment after my hectic work schedule.

Even I feel there is no continuity to some of the scenes, abrupt ending of the scenes ( as people from 1st 2 pages have described, will not elaborate further, since i agree with them ...and I m noticing this from past 3 weeks, ( so was the actor sick from past 3 weeks,??? ok ok... will let it go ... ) hopefull he or she should be well from next week atleast ... and then we will see if we will get the continuity / improvement and the mistake gets corrected nor not. I personally dont want romance at this stage let the characters grow and let the story / script, direction take its own course ... tell us the story what 4 lions creative team want to tell ... and not necessarily bow down to any pressure (be it any one??? i know who we mean !!!).

As the previous 4 lion show has just ended memories are still fresh in viewers mind and comparisons are bound to happen ... ( specially many loops were opened and left stranded, and not closed !!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!Also I read one of your post 2 weeks back and how you were explaining the loops are just opened or opening for QH ...so atleast if u have links with PH , atleast in this serial dont keep loops standed since viewers will loose confidence ...and might not be intersted in future ventures.

QH- 1st few episodes were really good and I really liked ... and then after couple of weeks i only liked here and there ... (since the performances / scenes were not consistent...) will give some more time till this month end , if I am happy i will watch otherwise I have got remote in my hand or the Famous quote " dhekna hai tho dheko will apply". TRP Miya / TRP bhaijaan will make Grand appearence next week!!!!!!!!!!! ..😊 I t would be quite interesting for public to know the 1st TRP of QH.

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I also have the same concerns Zara.
I don't know why this is happening with only ASYA scenes.If it's a Ayaan Humaira scene then we always get a proper ending but for ASYA I feel a bit disappointed at times.
I really don't find any logical answer behind these abrupt endings..
The only thing which comes to my mind as a probable reason is that the scenes end abruptly because the romance track has not yet started.So we can't expect an eyelock during the meteor shower.We can't expect to let Zoya show concern for him.
And regarding the cake scene,I can only say that when Asad is really angry he won't shout and show all his anger on the punch bag which shows the rage that has build up inside him,
But still these explanations are simply my thoughts.I would have loved if we would have got to see a little more after each scene.
I didn't find the cake scene abrupt coz I was expecting that this time Asad may not shout at Zoya.Like you
I found the first 2 scenes a bit abrupt.
I hope this series of unfinished scenes may not continue in future...

A wonderful thread Zara.I was about to make a similar thread regarding this matter.
Take care!
love ya
Asma

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago

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Ecrivain

@Ecrivain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: priyankabhat09

Hi Nishi,
I am not a teen Fangirl but a viewer in my late 20s. I am not commenting as a fan from 4 lions previous show, have watched only IPK ( liked initial 6-8 months then left watching the show )and not Geet or Arjun or other shows. Also I am not BS, SI, KSG or SJ FAAAN , I am mere viewer who just want 20 min of entertainiment after my hectic work schedule.
Even I feel there is no continuity to some of the scenes, abrupt ending of the scenes ( as people from 1st 2 pages have described, will not elaborate further, since i agree with them ...and I m noticing this from past 3 weeks, ( so was the actor sick from past 3 weeks,??? ok ok... will let it go ... ) hopefull he or she should be well from next week atleast ... and then we will see if we will get the continuity / improvement and the mistake gets corrected nor not. I personally dont want romance at this stage let the characters grow and let the story / script, direction take its own course ... tell us the story what 4 lions creative team want to tell ... and not necessarily bow down to any pressure (be it any one??? i know who we mean !!!).
As the previous 4 lion show has just ended memories are still fresh in viewers mind and comparisons are bound to happen ... ( specially many loops were opened and left stranded, and not closed !!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!Also I read one of your post 2 weeks back and how you were explaining the loops are just opened or opening for QH ...so atleast if u have links with PH , atleast in this serial dont keep loops standed since viewers will loose confidence ...and might not be intersted in future ventures.
QH- 1st few episodes were really good and I really liked ... and then after couple of weeks i only liked here and there ... (since the performances / scenes were not consistent...) will give some more time till this month end , if I am happy i will watch otherwise I have got remote in my hand or the Famous quote " dhekna hai tho dheko will apply". TRP Miya / TRP bhaijaan will make Grand appearence next week!!!!!!!!!!! ..😊 I t would be quite interesting for public to know the 1st TRP of QH.

Hey there Priyanka Bhatt ...I hope I got ur name right ...

Well first of all, it's surprising how u had followed IpK forum and we never interacted ...

So yeah it's great to read what you think ...SO MY MERE VIEWER allow me to help you

In my comment above I have clearly mentioned I am here TO HELP ...Its UPTO you how and if u wanna receive it or just rant and let go ...

You know certain off screen dynamics are not brought out to the fans for a reason ...like you said ...inevitable circumstances ...do happen and the makers have to adjust to that ...as much the interference hampers ...alas ...

Why and how the actor was well or not and what played along ..isn't a matter of concern darling for the viewers but yes, you can always share your views and I for one have no objections to it and am only here to help ...AS POLITELY AS POSSIBLE

The show has just started and yes comparisons have happened and will haooen but it's best to give the show time coz its fairly new ..also, darling u Know what too much ranting did previously ...so yes put across points and also appreciate the good ones ...just like u did for the first few episodes ...

TRPs my dear, is such an unfair indicator that it had to be stopped to set it right ...ALSO, CHANNELS MIGHT DEICDE OTHER INDICATORS FOR A SHOW JUST LIKE FOR IPK IT WAS POPULARITY N INTERNATIONAL RATINGS ...

PLUS VIERWES DYNAMICS CHANGES IN 2 WEEKS ...so even if audience have a remote and change , there are others who tune in and the process goes on ...

Hope this info helps ...I am gonna be away now ..u can PM and I will get back if U have doubts ...have a great weekend

Edited by varma.nishi1 - 12 years ago

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simran45

@simran45

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: varma.nishi1

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Jahapana6packs

@Jahapana6packs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

I agree!
Like i said Always its the same. Never a proper ending of their scenes. And i dont even know what to expect anymore. People keep saying its not romantic show so cant expect hawa hawa look look atm and even ik that and its NOT about romance its just about continuing a scene making a baseo thier relation which in future when they will fall will love help to make their chemistry beautiful. This is one BIG problem that they need to sort out!
Another- Its just the precap. Yes for AsYa its always a scene that seems amazing in precap which excites us but in actual scene if the precap was 15scs then the real scene will be like 45 secs abt that topic/scene.
I havent watched other shows of PH in that detail but due to all the buzz and seeing popularity of the PH. I had a lot of expections which is leading to dissapointment for me. Also they said this will be something new and different then I guess their change aint working.

Edited by ksgianlover - 12 years ago