Asad/Zoya: Aaina [Chapter1]

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A A I N A

Disclaimer: All work except the characters are purely mine, some ideas may have been adapted from QH. I'm Muslim but I'm not at all that known with the culture, I'm Bengali so I incorporate bits of the traditions from there. Please don't mind, and do read on! Also, "Aaina" means mirror in Bengali :)

Two People.
Two sides of the same coin. One is Asad, the suave, successful son of a single mother. The other Zoya, living life on her own terms and breaking through the stereotypes.
Can both of them live knowing they are on the separate sides of the mirror?

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Prologue

Asad Ahmed Khan looked out of his bedroom window. He stared at the bright blue sky, that hid the emerging morning sun. In the distant, he could hear the faint tweeting of the birds, and the soft buzz of people walking through the market. He closed his eyes and sensed everything, the cold air hitting his skin. He opened and looked out again, and noticed a young woman running through the roads. He watched as she looked back, a slight distress on her face. He watched her as she nearly slipped, and regained herself back up before running ahead. She wore a long black shawl to cover herself but as she fell, Asad saw the red lengha that she was wearing. He frowned.

"How can someone leave their Nikah like that?" He rolled his eyes and moved away from the window, annoyed at the views of people in this day and age.

He was not the typical man. Asad was calm and collected when he needed to be, but he was also quite traditional. For him, there was no such thing as love. It was an alien thought. He disliked people who went against their cultures, their traditions. He was not a rule breaker, merely a rule follower, and he was quite proud of himself and his upbringing.

"Asad, beta. Come down, breakfast is ready." His mother, Dilshad called out.

"Coming, Ammi!" He walked out, fixing the collar of his white shirt. He sat down next to his sister, Nazma and ate his bread. This was his family: him, his sister and his mother.

He had a father - once.

A father who left him for the sake of another woman. He despised his father, to the point where he hadn't seen him for the last 17 years. After all, who would ever want to have a relationship with the father who had cheated on his wife whilst being married? Not Asad. He didn't care whether it was acceptable in Islam, for a man to have four wives at once, he didn't care that his father still wished to have contact with him. Rashid, his father had cheated on him, on them all and Asad could never and will never forget that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys, thanks for that! Do read the prologue, which I've just updated!
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the running girl might be zoya
seems interesting
do continue soon and pm me too
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Great loved it:-) awesome start :-)
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I am an avid reader. This show has a great character Asad. (don't really know anything about others) Starting an FF so soon is very commendable. Do continue and let me know when you update yeah??
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Great start :)
Update real soon and add me to ur PM list plzz :D
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@Jammy-
Thank you! I don't know, I've already have two other FF's open! 😆 I shall PM you when I do!

@-MidnightSky-
Thank you and I'll PM you!

Thanks guys!
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loved the beginning. eagerly waiting for more.
plz pm me wen u update!!:D
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Zahaara ! : )
missed your writing ! ...
AH-MAZING prologue ... Asad *sighs* .. lovin' it already.
your prologue held such a charm, can't wait to read the start !
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very nice plzz do update soon

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