~Ishq Waala Love~ AsYa FF part6 pg25 updtd/apr 16

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Priya

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~~Ishq Waala Love~~

Character Sketch -

Asad Ahmed Khan - A local youth hailing from Hyderabad. His father Eijaz and brother Aayaan are well settled businessman but Asad has other plans beside taking up family business. His family doesn't quite like the idea but his adventurous sister Aaliya loves it...

Aayan Ahmed Khan - Asad's younger brother who loves him a lot. Aayan is a playful but practical guy and he keeps trying to persuade his brother to join the family business.

Zoya Aslam - A young girl who dreams of getting back to her home town New York. Will she find love, her own little home in Hyderabad?
Read on...

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Hey guys, I love KSG. N I have this craze of writing fanfics n here I am. As soon as I came to know that my exam tomorrow got postponed, I rushed here to write this. Hope ya guys like this new idea of mine.. the story will have a Hyderabadi backdrop, cuz I'm a Hyderabaadi myself.

Also I apologize in advance for any mistakes regarding wat I write here. I'm a hindu (dunno much details about muslim customs, sorry)and I will do my best to make the content error free.

thanks for reading :)

Edited by Priyamvada - 12 years ago

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::Index ::
Part 1 : Page 1

Part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3266093/ishq-waala-love-asya-ff-part6-pg25-updtd-apr-16?pn=3

Part 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68848649

Part 4 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73830411

Part five: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74689597

Part six : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3266093/ishq-waala-love-asya-ff-part6-pg25-updtd-apr-16

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Priya

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~Ishq waala Love~

Part One

The streets of old city were crowded with buzzing local people, who were all engaged in their respective tasks of the day. A new day began for the Hyderabadis. But what's special in this? This city was full of mean selfish people.

Zoya sighed. How she wished she was in New York! She would have been happy.

"Zoya.. tu abhi bhi soyi hui hai kya... Maa mujhe maardegi.. haye allah-"

Zoya glared at her intruder.

Noori smiled, "acha hua tu jaag gayi.. chal thoda bahar ghoom aate hai!"

Zoya resisted, "Abhi jaana hai kya? Ithni subah? Yeh jagah mujhe pasand hi nahi hai.. mujhe jaana hai waapis apne New York!"

Noori laughed, "Just come with me baby.. you would like it.. "

"You will like it.. " Zoya corrected her.

"Haan wohi! Ab chalo na... warna Abbu pakadlenge!"

The girls ran out the ancestral mansion, well avoiding the naukars and other officials.
They were soon riding on Noori's bike and Zoya smiled. Noori was still the same little girl, like she was twelve years ago. She glanced around. Chaarminar, looks familiar she thought reminiscining her old memories.

She breathed in the crisp, enthralling scent in the morning air and smiled. Hyderabad was still the same too, it carried the same fragrance of love, peace and tranquility.

How much she loved this city when she was a kid! She played with mohallewaale. Enjoyed in the rain, prayed in the mosque, enjoyed the holy feast just till that happened. The accident that killed her parents. She had to move on to her uncle in New York. Her grandmother opposed it, but her uncle took her away, saying New York would heal her heart. But it didn't. Her heart still throbbed, once in a while.. the pain wouldn't just go-

"Zoya! Zoya... Lo hum pahunch gaye... "

Zoya glanced at the huge Masjid in front of her. She was speechless.

"Noori.. "

Noori gave a sad smile, "mujhe patha hai.. tu jab bhi udaas hoti hai, tu wohi jaati hai.. masjid.."

Zoya couldn't take it anymore, "tujhe mere baare mein sab yaad hai.. hai na?"

Tears leaked from her eyes. Noori nodded, " sab kuchhh.."

The girls shared a hug. Zoya went into the mosque and smiled. It felt so good. If it wasn't Noori, she wasn't sure how her day would be. It feels amazing to have someone near you, caring for you and loving you.

'Mujhe meri pehchaan meri manzil dikhaadijiye Allah.. main khud nahi jaanti ab mera yeh safar aage se kahan jayega, mere saath bane rehnaa..'

She offered her prayers and turned to Noori, "Hume jaana hoga.. Dadi mujhe chodke ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti.. sach kahoon toh unke saath rehkar acha lagtaa hai.. Par Aapi ko bataana mat ki Dadi yeh bimari ka natak mereliye kar rahi hai.."

"Zoya.. main kyon bataaongi. Chalo!"

She pulled back her burkha, securing it in its place and was descending the steps when someone bumped into her.

The water can slipped from the stranger's hand and both were drenched.

"Kaisi badtameezi hai! Tum dekhke nahi chal sakte?" Zoya yelled at the guy, "tumne mera naya dupatta geela kardiya!"

The stranger just gave her a look that said, its not my fault.

A playful guy beside him commented, "Are zara apna chehra toh dikhaaiye madam.. Bhai aise bina soorat dekhe baat nahi karta.."

Noori gasped.

The stranger slapped his brother lightly, "Ladkiyon se aisi baat nahi karte.. I'm sorry ji. Galati se girgaya.."

Zoya glanced at the guy. Her stranger he was a foot taller than her, his hair was wet and soppy, due to the water. It was just an asset, the guy was dashingly handsome. She shook her head. Handsome guy in Hyderabad?

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Noori dragged her long and Zoya felt a little bad. She knew it was her fault but still she was pleased he apologized. She glanced back at the guy who brought another bucket of water and was mopping the floor.

~ A while later

"What was that bhai.. aapne use jaane diya? usne toh paani giraya.."

"Rehne de Aayan.. "

"Bhai.. lekin yeh sab use karna chahiye tha!"

"Uski hi nahi meri bhi galti thi.."

"Aap bhi na Asad bhai.. kuch zyada hi sweet ho.."

Asad smiled as he got up. The floor was clean, shimmering in the morning light.

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"Offo! Yeh gaadi abhi kharab hona tha kya.. ab ghar pe phone bhi nahi karsakti koi gaadi bhejne keliye..Hum pakde jaayenge Noori.." Zoya bit her nails.

Noori was tensed too. She stopped a car that was approaching them.

Zoya's eyes widened at what she saw. Sitting in the car was the same stranger from the masjid. Except that his piercing blue eyes were hidden behind a pair of expensive glasses. Beside him was his brother.

"Tum?" she exclaimed.

"Aap?" was Asad's reply.

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K guys... Part 1 didnt come out to be great! Sorry.. I'm pathetic at intros! So yeah..Hope ya guys like it :) Comment n let me know how it is!

Do post ur comments even if u like/hate it😳

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Tich

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey priyamvada...

good to see u here..

i'm a hyderabadi too...

looking forward for this FF..

love,

Tich.

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-Fizzi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Would love to read further :)
Continue soon <3

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaNymph
Hey priyamvada...
good to see u here..
i'm a hyderabadi too...
looking forward for this FF..

love,
Tich.

Hello... thank you Tich,. u were from LNMDJ forum right? I love ur FF there.. thank u😳 n fellow hyderabaadi *hugs*

Btw r u a telugu? wer do u stay in Hyd? Just curious😆