Paya ff nayi zindagi part10 updated - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
hey wen wil u update???

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow.. its a vry niceee update ofaq...😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 10
Rubel n kaira enters into adi's room n listen 2 him talking 2 himself they smiled at each other n went towards adi
Rubel:are mere bhai tu bol tou hum teri madad ker sakte hain agar tu chahe tou(he winked at kaira)
Kaira:haan , agar hum teri madad nahi karegne tou or karega!
Adi:madad?
Kaisi madad? Kya keh rahe ho tum dono?
Rubel n kaira:adiii!!!
Adi:acha yaar bata hun!
Wo mjhe pankhuri ka number chahye
R n k:oooh(in teasing tone)
R:are tu fiqar na ker hum teri madad zaror karenge!
Per badle main hame kya milega?
K:han! Bolo kya milega!
Adi:are jo tum log kahoge wo
Per filhaal mjhe uska number laa doo!
K:acha theek hai laa dete hain!
Per apni shart bhoolna nahi!
They both leave!
They went 2 harish
Rubel:harish uncle umm kya aap k pass pankhuri ka number hai?
Harish:tum ko uska number kyuon chahiye?
(After thinking a bit)
Tum ko chahiye ya tumhare bade bhaya ko?:p
Rubel:hahahah
Usi ko chahiye!
Harish:ruko main deta hun
Harish gave him the number n rubel deliverd it 2 adi!
Adi room
He was holding the his mobile n looking at the number n finally after thinking from last 1 hour ge called
Pankhu room
Pankhu:ye kis ka number hai?
Umm uthaon? Utha hi laiti
hun, hello
Adi:hello is it pankhuri?
Pankhu:yes! Whos this?
Adi:its me adi !
Umm aap kaisi hain?
Pankhu was little bit shocked as she didn't axpect 2 b him
Paknhu:main theek hun ? Aap?
Aadi:main bhu theek
For sometime there was silence
Adi:main direct point pe hi aata hun
Mjhe ghooma fira ker baatein kerne k bilkul bhi aadat nai!
Main aapko is liye phone kiya hai kyuon k main jaanata hun k aap yahi soch rae hongi k maine is rishte k liye haan kyuon kari?
Per trust main is rishte k kabhi khilaaf hi nai tha!
Mjhe tou tum pehli hi nazar main pasand aa gai thi
Or tuhmare past se bhi mjhe koi problem nai hai!
Tum ye mat samajhna k k tum se sympathy ker rha ha hun ya ahsan ker raha hai!
Per agar tum meri zindagi main aai tou mere liye isse barkar kuch bhi nai hoga!
Pankhu listen 2 it n she was in tears
Adi:hello? R u there?
Pankhu:(wiping her tears)
Jiii main sun rae hun!
Aaj mjhe aapne phir se yaqeen dila diya k is dunya main kuch log aise bhi hote hain !:)
N thanku
Both were smiling!

Next day every one were having tea
Avantu:dad main soch rae thi kyuon na hum adi n pankhuri k engagement kerwaden?
Nanu:are ye tou bauhat hi acchi baat hai!
Harish:tou phir saih main aaj hi diwakar jii ko phone ker laita hun or unse date fix ker laita hun
Anuj:aaj kyuon abhi hi kerlo
Ache kaam main deri kaisi?
Harish:ye bhi saih hai
Main phone lgata hun

Pankhu house
Diwakar:are harish bhai saab ka phone?
Hello namaste bhai saab!
Harish:namaste !
Kaise hain aap?
Or baaqi sab?
Diwakar:sab khairiat se hain!
Harish: woo hum chate the k ...
(They talked about tge engagement n fix the date
N it was fix after 2 days engagement will took place)

In both house prepartions were being made
Both mommys were hypered as they want every thing 2 be perfect
Pankhuri has also trying 2 adjust
N she was also putting her past back n moving forward n on other hand adi was really excited!
Paya talk 2 each other n pankhu has become comfortable wid adi

After 2 days at veneue
Both families were gathered n they welcome each other
Ambika:pankhu sab k pain choo beta
Pankhu took blessing from elders
Accept avantika she proceed towards her
Avantika:rukoo!
Every one were shocked 2 see her reaction
Avantika looked at everyone n smiled n said:tum mere paon nai chovo gi balke gale lago gi:)
Everyone smiled seeing this!
Then everyone started 2 welcome the guest
After few minutes
Dadajii look at his watch are sagai shuru kerne ka mahurat ho gya hai!
Adi n pankhu cum face 2 face each other n pass a smile
They both make each wear the ring
Rubel n kaira perform a dance for them
N this beautiful evening ended wid beautiful memories 2 be chrished

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome update ofaq..i loved it..continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
loved the update... Keep updating😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow
lovely update...😃


Superb😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: faizawangde

loved the update... Keep updating😊

thanku soo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silsha

wow
lovely update...😃


Superb😉

thanks 🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 11
At night adi n pankhuri were talking
Adi:aaj every thing was perfect
Pankhu:yup itne kam waqt main sab acha hogya
Adi:umm pankhu kya kal tum mere sath lunch pe chalogi?
Pankhu:kal? Umm main maa se pooch k bata doon?
Adi:okay as u wish
Pankhu: bauhat raat ho gai hai aap sojaye
Adi:raat khali mere liye thodi howi hai tumhare liye nai hai? 😛
Pankhu:(smiling) mere kehne ka matlab tha k HAME sojaana chahiye
Adi:okay madam as u say goodn8 😳 Pankhu:gudn8
Adi :gudn8
Pankhu:phone tou rakho 😛
Adi:chalo sath main hi rakhte hain:p
They both kept the phone
Pankhu in his mind pagal hai bilkul lekin acha hai 😳
Adi tomorrow plzz cum soon
Next day pankhu's home
Pankhu came to the kitchen n asked ambika
Pankhu:maa wo adi ne aaj lunch k liye poocha tou kya main jaon?(feeling shy)
Ambika:(smiling) han jaa is main poochne k kya baat hai?
Neha:are is k dates tou abhi se hi start ho gai:p
Pankhu:chup 😳
Shushma:are neha mat tang ker isko
Ambika:jaa jaake tayaar hoja
Pankhu:thanku maa(she hugs her n msg aadi that her mother has given permission)
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All were having breakfast
Adi phone rang n he was the msg n he loudly said YES ⭐️
which shock everyone
avantika:kya hogya aadi?
Adi:embaresed umm nothin
Preeti:phir itni zor se yes kyuon bola?bolo na
Everyone started 2 question hin
Adi:bata hun, wooo aunty ne lunch per jaane k permission dedi
Kaira:ooh tou hamare bhaya date pe jaa rae hain?
Rubel:good going aadi abhi se apni fiance ko patana shuru 😉
Harish:acha haina in dono k tunning meri or avantu jaise ho jayegi!
Sheila:nae baba phir ye dono bhi aap dono k tarah lerte rahenge hum aik or haish n avantika ko nae sambhal sakte 😆
Upon this everyone started 2 laugh

Evening adi reached pankhu's home
Adi was waiting
Ambika:adi beta aap sharbat perjiye main pankhuri ko bulati hun!
She went up n open the door n listen 2 coversation of panku n nehaa
Pankhu:neha main achi tou lag rae hun na?
Neha:are tu best dekh rae hai, dekha aaj tou aadi k hosh hi ur jaenge 😉
Pankhu blushed
Ambika smiled n come inside chal pankhuri adi neeche tera wait ker rha hai
Downstairs
Adi:itni dair kyuon lag rae hai?
N he saw up thar beautiful angel is descending he was just lost in her
but came into his senses by the coversation of girls
He look here n there
They all sit down for a while then adi said:hum chale
Pankhu nodded
They both left for the lunch

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Edited by ofaq - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Nice update..everyone teased adi n pankhu..waiting for the next update..paya's first date.:D

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