Paya ff nayi zindagi part10 updated - Page 3

Loving this FF! Sorry I don't know your name? Really like the progression of PaYa's story but also the past of Panhkuri which you have added! Really nice and beautiful! Keep going!

Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic

Loving this FF! Sorry I don't know your name? Really like the progression of PaYa's story but also the past of Panhkuri which you have added! Really nice and beautiful! Keep going!

thanku soo much
My name is shafaq:)

nice update!! continue soon...
so pankhu was betrayed in past by sid...
but wat did she see at sid's house???

Nice update @shafaq..waiting for the nxt part..😊

Part7
Continue..
Sid's whole house was decorated n in garden sid was taking phere with some one else
When pankhu saw this she couldn't beleif she was in state of shock
Pankhu:SID????
Sid look up n saw them(panku n her dad) he smiled
Sid:are aao aao tum bhi shamil ho jao hamari shaadi main!
Lekin wait!
Hamari se matlab meri or priyanka k!
N he started 2 laugh n on other hand tears were falling from pankh's eyes
But she spoke
I know sid tum mazak ker rahe ho?
Tum mjh se pyaar kerte hona?
Phir ye sab kyuon?
Chalo ab mazak band kero ghar chalo sab raah dekh rahe hain!
Sid:nahi! Mera jo maqsad tha wo maine paa lia! PAISA!
Ab tum kisi kaam k nahi ho!
Maine tum se nahi balke tumhaare paison se pyaar kiya!
Or dekho aaj tumhari poori company mere naam hai!
Diwakar : kehna kya chahte ho tum?(angrily)
Sid:awaaz neeche!
Ab main us company ka mailk hun!
Or dikhye kaise aap k naak k neeche maine aapse sab kooch cheen lia!
Or aap ko pata bhi na chala!
Hahahahahahaha
Pankhu started 2 feel dizzy n she become unconsious
Sid:are apni beti ko sabhaliye wo behosh ho gai!
Diwakar took pankhuri n come 2 house !
Every one were shocked 2 see pankhu unconcious
Amibka:kya howa hai pankhuri ko?
Or sid kahan hai? Aaap kuch batate kyuon nahi?
Diwakar:pehle isse room main lejao! Or doctor ko bulao!
Doctor came n checked pankhuri
Ambika:kya howa hai doctor wo theek tou haina?
Doctor:she is pregnant!
Ambika n other family members were shocked (pushkar had tell them about this while doctor was checking pankhu)
Ambika:maine pehle kaha tha k ye larka hamari pankhuri k laik nahi hai!
Lekin kisi me bhi meri nahi sunni!
Or aap dekh liya aaj aap k beti ne hame khain ka nahi chora!
Bin biyahi maa ban rahi hai!
Log kya khaenge!
Diwakar:dekhi
Ambika:nahi bus ab maine ab bauaht dekh lia or sun lia ab main wahi kerongi jo mjhe saih lagega!
Amika goes 2 pankhu's room
She was laying on the bed n her hand was on her stomach
When Ambika saw this something pinch in her heart as she has never seen her daughter in this condition but she hide her emotions
N said:pankhuri(angrily)
Pankhu sit down n looks at her
Ambika:kal hum doctor k pass jayenge or tera (she took deep brearth) abortion kerwadenge!
Pankhu just look at her n then her stomach
Pankhu:nahi maa
Main aisa nahi kerongi!
Is main is bache k kya galti?
Is ka kya kasoor?
Main ye kabhi nahi ker waongi!
Ambika:tjhe kerwana hoga kisi bhi kimmat per
Pankhu :nahi maa plzz samjhiye naa
Plzzz (she was begging)
Nahi pankhuri ap tjhbe wahi kerna hoga jo main kahongi!
Werna tu mera mara howa moun dekhe gi!
Pankhu was shocked n just for the sake of her mother she aborted her child:(

Scene back 2 pankhu n adi!
Pankhu:kya ye sab jaane k baad aap mjh se shaadi kerenge?
Adi didn't said any thing just left fr there
N pankhu break down n started 2 cry:(

Scene between diwakar n harish
After listening 2 it harish console him n said mjhe is baat se koi problem nahi hai!
Bachi thi wo ! Or aap jaise bhi us k jhanse main aaa gaye tou is main pankhu k kya galti?
Lekin!
Koi bhi mashware se pehle mjhe avantika se baat kerni hogi!
Main aap ko kal phone ker k hamara jawan bataonga!
Abhi chalte hain sab intezaar ker rahe honge!
Adi n his parents left
Avantika has sensed some tension on adi n harish but didn't speek n thought after going home
she will ask them


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Originally posted by: Aieshaa

Nice update @shafaq..waiting for the nxt part..😊

thanku soo much

What a power packed update...loved how you unfolded the past of Pankhuri! Excited to see the reaction of Adi, Harish and Avantika. Beautifully written!

nice update!
sid 😡
now adi & harish know d truth...
continue soon...

Nice update dear..excited for the next part...😊

Part8
Adi,harish n avantika reached home n all family member gather in lounge
Nanu:avantika beta larki kaisi lagi?
Pariwaar kasia hai?
Avantu:dad mjhe tou bauhat ache lge ,larki bhi bauhat pyaari hai,suljhiwi hai, n ghar k log bhi bauhat friendly hain!
Everyone become happy listening 2 it!
Adi was lost in his thoughts
Rubel : are mere bhai tu tou abhi se us k khayalon maik ghum hogya! Kya baat hai? Itni pasand aa gai hai tjhe?:p
Adi:nahi aisa nahi hai!
Rubel:are humse kya chupana?
Are kahin tjhe usse pyar tou nahi hogya?
Adi gets irritated n goes from there
All this while harish was quiet
Rubel:aree isse kya hogya?
Avantika looked at harish n saw him tensed
Harish:usse thodi dair k liye akela chordo
Main zara aata hun!
Everyone gets busy in their work
Avantika went in her room n saw harish sitting on the bed n he is in deep thoughts
Avantu:kya baat hai harish?jab se aaen hain tum tension main ho! Adi bhi thoda upset lag rha hai?
Koi baat hai kya?
Harish look at her n tell her what happened!
Avantika was shocked n was feeling pitty on pankhu:(
Avan:itni choti umar main usko ye sab jhelna para!kya guzr rahi hogi us per? N just look at their honesty! Agar wo chahte tou ye chupa sakti the!
Lekin aadi ka kya reaction hai?
Mjhe lagta hai tumhe aadi se baat kerni chahiye!
Harish: main?
Avan;han tum! Tum aadi ko bauhat acche se jaante ho!
Or tum hi wo insaan ho jo adi k bauaht kareeb hai!
Or ye complicated situation tum usse bauhat hi easy way main samjha sakte ho!
Hariah:itna trust hai mjh pe?
Avan:bauhat zayada(with big smile)
Adi's room
Adi was in his thoughts
He dosen't know what decision he should take?
Should he accept her n forget her past?
Or he should just reject her
Just then harish came n saw him
Harish:adi!
Adi:yes dad
Harish: main pankhuri k baare main sab jaanta hun
Adi just looked at him
Harish: main jaanata hun is waqt tu koi solution nahi nikaal paa rha hai!
Dekh is dunya main insan ko har tarike k situation ka saamna kerna perta hai!
Kisi ko choti musibat ya bauaht hi bari
Bus isi musibat ne us k zindagi kharab ker k rakh di!
Us main tou uski koi galti nahi
bus jis raah main zindagi ne usse chalya wo chalti rahi!
Main bus yahi kehna chata hun k tu jo bhi faisla kare pehle apne aapko us k jaga rakh k dekh or soch!
Tera jo bhi faisla hoga hum wahi kerenge
Adi:thankx dad agar aap nahi hota tou i don't know k mera kya hota?
H:tu paisa hi nahi hota:p

Pankhu's house
Ambika:aapne aisa kyuon kya?
Apne tou apni beti k zindagi khud hi kharab kerdi?
Diwakar:hame un ko ye batana zarori tha agar hum nahi batate tou unko kahin na kahin se ye baat pata chal hi jaati agar hamari beti k naseeb main te rishta hoga tou yahan han zaror ho jayegi
Ambika gets angry n leave from there
Next day
DM
Adi came 2 harshita's room
Adi:dad maine faisla ker lia hai
Both just looked at him
Adi:main is rishte k liye tayar hun
Harshita become happy
Avan:r u sure na?i mean
Adi:mom trust me i am ready
N i am lucky k wo meri zindagi main aa rahi hai mje us k past se koi problem nahi hai!
Sid uska past tha or main uska aaj or aane wala kal hun
Harish;I am proud of my son!
Main sab ko batata hun or diwakar bhai saab ko bhi phone ker k bata deta hun

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