Paya ff nayi zindagi part10 updated

In this story there is everyone,nanu is alive,sheila n her children are positive,avantika n harish are also living 2gether in diwaan masion!


Mom mjhe shaadi nahi kerni main is waqt shaadi k liye ready nahi hun
Avan:adi! Tumhe kabhi na kabhi tou shadi kerni hi hogi na ! Tou ab kyuon nahi? Tumhari umar shadi k umar ho shuki hai!
(After thinking a bit) kahin aisa tou nahi k tumhe kisi or se pyaar hai?
Adi:Nooo (embaresed)
Mom (lovingly) main nahi jaanta us larki ko or bina jaane main kisi se kaise shaadi ker sakta hun? Main na hi us ke baare main kuch jaanta hun ,na hi maine usse pehle kabhi dekha hai!
Or na hi wo mjhe janti hai! Tou ap bataen mjhe aise kaise main kisi se?
Avantu: tou tum ko kya lagta hai main tumhaari shaadi kisi se bhi kera doongi! Main tumhe abhi shadi kerne k liye nahi bol rahi hun bus itna chahti hun k tum larkian dekho or jo tumhe acchi lage hum ussi se tumhaari baat chalaenge!
Is main bhi tou time lage ga na!
Adi: but mom main filhaal shadi nahi kerna chahta bus!(angrily)
Avantu: theek hai jo kerna hai kero akhir main hoti kaun hun?main sirf tumhari zindagi main happines lana chahti hun bus!
(She get upset n leave the room)


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This was beautifully written! Short and sweet. Reminds me of the old PKDH days.

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This was beautifully written! Short and sweet. Reminds me of the old PKDH days.

thanku sooo much

Its great!!!!! Do continue!!! I'll love to read!!!!

Adi's room
Adi was in deep thoughts when nanu enter
Nanu:adi bete zara mera mob dekhna tou is main kuch..
(He look up n saw adi )
Adi, adi?
Adi;han! Are nanu aap?
Aap yahan? Kuch kaam tha? Kuch chahiye?
Nanu:kyuon? Ab main tumhare room main aa nahi sakta?
Adi:nahi nanu mere kehne ka wo matlab nahi tha!
Nanu:kya baat hai tum itne sad kyuon ho? Any problem?
Adi:nahii nahi aisa kuch nahi hai!
Nanu:tum kis se jhoot bol rahe ho? Mjhe se?main tumhari shakal dekh k bata sakta hun ! Tum meri aatma ho or aatma se kuch chupta nahi!
Adi hugs nanu
Adi: nanu i luv u
Wo ajj ...
(He told him about avantika n his conversation )
Nanu: bus?itni si baat!
Is mamle main tum bilkul mjh jaise ho!;p
Adi:matlab?
Nanu:jab meri maa ne mjhe ya sab kha tab mera bhi yahi reaction yha:p
Per jab main tumhari nani se mila mjhe aisa lga k mjhe dunya k sab se pyari or anookhi cheze mili hai!
Han insaan pehle in sab baton se derta hai per bharosa rakho tumhari zindagi ko ujala dene waali insaan ko tumhari zindagi main laane ka waqt aa chuka hai!
Insaan shadi k liye kabhi tayar nahi hota per usko apne aap per poora vishwaas hona chahiye!
Or dekhna tumhari zindagi kaise badal jayegi!
Bus is baare main zayada naa socho!
Harish enters n he has listen the whole conversation
Han zayad na soch werna tjhe bhi teri maa jaisi hitler biwi milegi
Adi:DAD
harish:kya aapni maa k tarah look de rha hai baap hun tera!:p
Adi:really? Mjhe tou lga ap mere best friend ho?:p
Harish:are wo bhi hun na pagle!
Waise(in serious tone)
Teri maa saih hai abhi apni life k baare main tu soch or trust main romeio is rishte ka ehsaas bauhat hi khoobsuart hota hai!
Adi:acha acha theek hai! Abhi aap mat shuru ho jao! Subauh se mom phir nanu or abhi aap!
Harish:acha saih hai
Bus apni maa ko mana le wo bauhat udaas hai n main usse aise udaas nahi dekh sekta"
Adi:wowwee kya pyaar hai udaas koi or per asar kisi or ko?
Harish:abee apne baap k tang khechta hai! Ye mat bhool baap hun main tera!:p
Adi:n main apne baap ka beta:p
(They both burst into laughter n hug each other)
Nanu was smiling seeing them
Nanu in his heart:mere barkhudaar ko uski zindagi main saari khushiyan mile or jis k sath uski jodi bani hai wo jaldi se uske jiwan main aajai




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Adi enters avantika's room she was sittingvon the bad n looking a bit upset.adi goes to her n hug her!
Adi:sorry mom(holding his ear)
Avan:its okay(still she was upset)
Adi;still holding his ear started 2 do up and down n continously saying sorry
Anavtika was smiling seeing this n took him in a hug
Avan:bus kero maine tumhe maaf kerdia
Adi:pakka na!
Avan:han pakka ! Bus mera aik kaam kerdo!
Adi:konsa kaam mom?
Avan:kal hamare sath larki dekhne chalo
Adi:mom aap phir se shuru ho gaen?
Avan:maine band kab kya tha?
Adi:but mom...
Avan:main tumse wapis naraz ho jaonngi:(
Adi:nooo!
Acha saih main aaonga !
Happpy?
Avan:bauhat zayada
Accha chalo dinner kerne werna tumhare dad k pait main chooge dorne lag jayenge:p
Adi n avantu started 2 laugh

At dining table
Everybody was there
Avan: dad hum kal jaenge! (Happily)
Nanu:sachii! Barkhudaar maan gya?
Adii??
Adi:nanu khali dekhne jaa rahe hain rishta daalne nahi
Kaira n rubel:waah reee hamari bhi aayegi bhabhi!
Rubel:waise adi tjhe larkion main itna intrest kaise hogya?
Kaira:sab tumhari tara nahi hote rubel k pehle se gf bana li n ghar waalon ko bata diya:p
Rubel:kaira tu aaj kal zayad bolne nahi lagi hai?
Kaira:main tou bolongi:p
N started 2 run n rubel was behind her
Everyone was enjoyin this scene
Adi stands up n went 2 kaira n catch her before rubel
Adi:oyyye rubel khabardar meri bhen ko kuch bola to!
Rubel:arre maine kya kya?
Kaira:liar!!!
Adi:(looking at kaira)umm
Tune kuch nahi kya per hum tou kersakte hain! He winked n both adi n kaira started 2 fight wid rubel:p

Avan: bus abhi! Now behave like elder aise bachon waali harkaten band kero! Dinner kero thanda ho rha hai!


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nice update..but short..
liked adi-kaira-rubel masti...
continue soon...
& plz next time try to give long updates

its lovely

Part4
Next morning
A girl was cuddling wid her pillow suddenly she was disturbed by the sun rays n she was trying 2 cover her eyes but she wasn't able to do so
PANKHURII jaldi uth jaa beta
Pankhurii!!
A women enter the room n started 2 arrange things pankhurii
Ab uth jaa
tjhe pata haina aaj tjhe dekhne aane waale hain!
After hearing this girl(pankhuri) woke up n was shocked AAAJ??
Lekin aapne tou bola tha k abhi nahi kuch dino baad!
Ambika:han lekin kal raat ko hi unka phone aaya tha k wo aan hi aa rahe hain!(she was very haapy)
After hearing this pankhu was feeling little awkard n she don't know what 2 do
When Ambika look at her she smiled n went near the bed n sit.
Kya howa?
Pankhu:kuch kuch bhi tou nahi
Ambika:main jaanti hun tu bachpan se yahi sapna dekh rahi thi k tjhe handsom sa husband mile,uski eyes coloured hon,n wo tjhe white ghore per laine aaye n peeche koi romantic song baj raha ho lekin beta asal zindagi main aisa nahi hota hame practical hona perta hai!
Pankhu:nahi maa main ab ye sab main nahi sochti! Kyuon k zindagi ne mjhe pehle hi bauhat kuch sikha diya hai(her eyes got tearful)
Ambika:pankhurii kyuon poorani baaton ko kured rahi hai?jo hota hai acche k liye hi hota hai!apne ateeet k baare main baar baar soch k apne aane waale kal ko mat bigaar!
Pankhu:maa apne un logon ko sab bata diya haina?
Ambika:nodding her head
Pankhu:maa aap log aisa kaise ker sakta hain? Apko un logon ko sab kuch bata dena chaiye tha! Ma apne aisa kyuon kiyA?
Ambika: bus! Jo mjhe saih lga maine wahi kya pehle hi tu bauhat kuch apni marzi se ker chuki hai per ab or nahi ab tjhe ab wahi kerna hoga jo main bolongi (angrily n she left the room)
Pankhu:maa suno tou .
N she started to cry
After few minutes pankhus dad came n said Pankhu !!
Pankhu:papppa! Aap ye!
Diwakar:main sab jaanta hun!jaisa tu chahe gi waisa hi hoga !bus tu tension na le!
Pankhu:pappa i love u
N they both hug each other!


Diwaan mansion
Avantu:sab theek se tou rakh diya na !kuch reh tou nahi gya!bhabhi wo
Sheila:are chinta mat kero bus sab rakh diya hai maine tum jao or jaldi se tayar ho jao!
Avantu:are per aadi
Sheila:are tum jaake ready ho jao main dekhti hun usse!


Adi's room
Knock knock
Come in!
Sheila enters
Adi:are mami aap?
Sheila:are ye kya tum abhi tak tayar nahi howe?
Adi:woo main mjhe!
Sheila:samjh nahj aa rha k kya pehnu?hmmm? Hahahah
Are aao main help kerti hun!


Nahiii main kerongi (preeti enters)
Aap jaye saying 2 sheila
Sheila:are main kyuon jaon main pehle aai thi n main adi k help ker rahi hun
Preeti:main kerdoongi!
Sheila:nahi main keroongi!
N theee argument started n adi was caughr between them:p
Adi:aree bus keroo ! Kya ker rahe ho aap dono? Just cool down!aik kaam kero dono sath hi choose kerlo!
S n P:are waah !
N they both choose clothes for him n gave it 2 adi
Adi: i luv u my ladies
S n P:we luv u 2

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nice update!!
so panku has some past!!😔
continue soon...