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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5
Pankhu's house
Are sushma sab kuch mang waalia na !
Are maine wo samosa fry kerne k liye rakhe the jalna gaye hon!
Sushma:bhabhi maine wo dekh liye hain! Ap fiqarbmaf kijiye or jo meethai aapne boli thi wo bhi aa gai hai!
Ambika:chalo accha hai sab tayar hai! Abhi wo log aate hi honge!
Are neha! Zara idhar aana tou!
Neha:ji tayi ji?
Ambika:are beta zara dekhna tou pankhu tayar howi ya nahi howi?
Neha:ji main usse dekh k aati hun!
Ambika was thinking something
Sushma notice this
Sushma:bhabhi kya soch rahi hain aap?apne man main kuch galat baat na laye ! Dekhiye ga hamari pankhu ko wo log pasand kerenge!
Or jald hi us k hathon main haldi lagegi!
Ambika:bus baghwan kare sab acha ho!
Pushkar:are wo log agaye! Bhabhi!sushma!
A AND S:are chalo chalo!
On the entrence all were gathered

Dadaji:are namaste! Aaye aaye!
They all have a seat n started their talks!
Ambika asked sushma to call pankhuri down!

Pankhuri's room
Neha:dekhna larka tou tjhe dekh k bilkul hi latto hojaye ga!
Akhir tu hai hi itni pyaari!
Pankhu was little scared n was praying all things go happily!
Sushma came:are chalo neeche sab intezaar ker rahe hain!

Pankhu was comming downstairs
Adi was continously looking at her n this was noticed by ambika
Ambika in her heart bus ye rishta pakka hojaye!

Pankhu was sitting beside avantika!
All were silent
Harish broke the silence aap k beti tou bauhat hi khoobsurat hai bilkul pari k tarah bhai main tou isko butterfly bulaonga!:p
All laughed on this
Avantika asked her normal questions n panku answered them bravely n anantu was impresed
Nanajii:hame tou larki bauhat pasand hai!agar aap k ijazat ho tou kya adi or pankhuri beta aik doosre se alag baat kerlain?
Dadaji:kyuon nahi zaror!
Pankhuri beta aditya ji ko terrace pe le jao!
Pankhu:jii
They both went towards terrace!
Pankhu :bathiye!
Adi:Ji aap bhi baithye!
They both settled down
Pankhuri was thinking how 2 tell him about her past?what will be his reaction?

Scene shifts 2 elders
Diwakar was thinking that he should harish every thing as he don't want this relation to b started on false bases!
Diwakar hint 2 harish he wants 2 meet him alone ! Harish nodded!
Harish:main zara washroom se aaya! Diwakar bhai saab directions?
Jii aye main leejata hun!

On terrace
Pankhu:aap main or kuch nahi sochna chahti main inko sab bata doongi!
Adi was waiting for pankhu 2 say soneting but she was lost so he started!
Ummm!pankhuri ji?
Pankhu:ji?sorry wo main!
Adi:koi baat nahi ho jata hai! Shayad aap nervous feel ker rahi hain! Sach kahon tou main bhi!
Lekin baat tou kerni paregi!
Pankhu:jii! Woo! Apka naam?
Adi was shocked as she dosen't know his name!
Pankhu:sorry wo maa ne bataya tha per mere zehan se nikal gya(embaresed)
Adi:jii mera naa aditya hai! Aditya kumaar! (He tell her about averything about himself)after completing ,he asked her kya main aapse kuch pooch sakta hun?
Pankhi noded
Aap zayada bolti nahi kya?:p
Kab se main hi bole jaa raha hun per aap kuch bol hi nahi rahi!
Pankhu:nahi aisa kuch nahi hai!
Adi:agar aap ko kuch poochna hai tou aap pooch sakti hain mjhe koi problem nahi hai!
Pankhu:(after gathering strenght)
Main aapko kuch batana chahti hun apne baare main!or is k baad shayad aap is rishte se mana kerden!
Adi was shocked what he had just heared but he didn't showed it n asked her 2 proceed!

Guyz plz hit like button n do tell me how is it?
If its not good enough then i will not write more

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
nice update!!
u r really a great writer!!
eager to know panku's past!!
thnks 4 long update!!

Edited by coolhi1988 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice update!!
u r really a great writer!!
eager to know panku's past!!
thnks 4 long update!!


thanku sooo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey wen wil u update next part??
eagerly waiting for story to be continued...
& pankhu's past secret!!
Edited by coolhi1988 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hv read all ur updates..all of them are awesome..waiting to know what happen in pankhu's past...plz continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its good going, pls continue the next part . dont leave after building the excitement about Pankhuri's past. I think she must be molested or raped. lets continue soon, waiting eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

hey wen wil u update next part??
eagerly waiting for story to be continued...
& pankhu's past secret!!

thanku soo much i was litle bit busy thats why cannot upadate
But i will update today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aieshaa

I hv read all ur updates..all of them are awesome..waiting to know what happen in pankhu's past...plz continue..

thanku soo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GloryBeckons

its good going, pls continue the next part . dont leave after building the excitement about Pankhuri's past. I think she must be molested or raped. lets continue soon, waiting eagerly

thanku
No there is something else store for u:p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Scene starts from adi and pankhu conversation
Adi asked her to proceed
Pankhu gather her strengh n told him:
Main apne colege k final year main thi sab bauhat accha chal rha tha!
Or sab farewell k tayari main occipied the mere saare friends or main bhi is saal ko yaad gaar banane k koshish ker rahe the!
Mera aik BOYFRIEND bhi tha sid I love him like anything!
Wo mere samane itna innocent rehta tha per uski asliyat kuch or hi thi jisko samjhne main mjhe bauhat time lga! College k last day usne mjhe poori college k saamne purpose kya n maine haan kerdi ! Tab main tou ye jaanti hi nhi thi k meri kismat main kya likha hai!
Sab kuch accha chal rha tha maa or papa bhi raazi the!
Per !!!
Sid ka maqsad kych or ho tha!
Wo mjh se nahi balke meri money se pyar kerta tha!
Uski family main koi nahi tha!
Wo usually mere ghar aata or sab k dil main apne liye aik jaga bana li!
Wo hamari hi company main job kerne lga! Pappa ka jaise tou wo right hand tha!
Papa ne usse apna beta bana liya tha per najane maa usse itna pasand nahi kerti theen
Koi bhi project aata tou papa usse se mashwara lete n usse new projects k head bhi bana dete per us insaan ne is baat ka faida uthaya!
Us indaan k waja se hamare company ko bauaht nuqsaan ho rha tha
chachu ne pappa ko samjhaya per pappa us sid khilaf kuch sunna hi nahi chahte the! Jis k waja se pappa n chachu main darar bhi aagai! Or main chachu se nafrat kerne lagi
Lekin maine apne pyaar k ilawa ur kuch bhi nahi dekha!
Dekhte dekhte humne shaadi kerne ka bhi failsa ker lia!
Sab ne tayarian bhi shuru ker deen theen per maa ko kahin na kahi bhanak per gai thi k kuch garbar hai!unhone shadi rokne k bhi koshish k per maine or papa ne is baaat per itna gor na kiya!
Phir hamari shadi k functions shru ho gaye !
Shaadi ka din tha !
Sid ghar per hi nahi aaya sab uski raah dekh rahe the
dekhte dekhte mahurat bhi nikal gya main dulhan k jaode main khari uska intezar kerti rahi !
Per woo aya hi nahi!
Sab bauaht tension main aagye the mjhe aisa lga k kahin wo kisi musibat main na ho!
Papa n chachu k sath main usse dhoondne gai!
Hum uske ghar gaye or wahan ja k jo maine dekha wo main soch bhi nahi sakti tha!

Guyz i will contine 2nigh or tomorrow
Thanku for readind
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