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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shesherkobita
Oh it's very sweet...nice post... love it.
Hmmm she conveniently didn't bring extra clothes...heheheh...

You have a gift Sharna...keep writing...

Sorry I must go..past my daughter's bedtime

Her parents are angry with her yaar, she couldnt pack! Hence, needing to wear Adi's clothes for the night 😆😉 Thank you for your sweet words, glad you enjoyed it.. 😳

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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH
Nice OS, loved it and especially loved the latter part where Adi was removing the jeweleries.
Well done Sharna, 👏 👏do keep writing and gifting us wonderful OS

Thanks Sai! Glad you enjoyed it 😳 Yeaah, that was also my favorite part, felt like it was something Adi would do 😃

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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: MaanGeet_GurTi
OMG Sharna, that was AWESOME..!!!! i loved it ❤️

u portrayed Pankhuri's feelings exactly, anyone must be speechless in this situation, i was actually imagining the car scene.. i think we will have something similar in the show

Aditya being her best friend, i could feel the tension and nervousness that was going through him, and i liked the fact that he didnt bombared Pankhuri with questions and stuff i the car, i liked the quiet journey, and talking through the eyes (in Pankhuri's case her closed eyes) 😆

and surprisingly Avantika didnt say a word 😆

and i loved loved the room scene, his room... our room ☺️

he removed her dupatta and jewellery, bless him. such a great friend come hubby 😆

and i loved that last line, " you are all i have now" "hamesha Pankhuri hamesha" that was sooo sweeet ❤️

Well Done 👏

AWWW WAHI! Thank you so much! Your comment touched my heart 😳😳 I'm so glad you enjoyed it 😃

I felt like that's how Adi would react.. he would give her her space but also pay close attention to her. He is indeed such a good friend 😳 I'm waiting to see Disha in her shaadi jora, she tweeted saying it's heavy but she looks good in it 😆😉

Thank you again for your sweet words! Makes writing worth it when I read wonderful comments like yours 🤗

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Kashish Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

SHARNA! YOU WROTE ONCE AGAIN!!😃😃 Omg this is amazing like seriously your gift of writing is so evident! And damn this is so realistic of what would actually happen! It's actually the most sweetest yet intense OS I've read. &wow you do a pretty good job even with assignments on your mind😉 haha Loved this and hope to see more from you😃

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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sudipta1988
hey sharna well done dear

amazing os ,,,love it ,,,

good job ,,carry on dear

Aww Sudi, thank you so much deary! 😃 Glad you enjoyed it! 😳

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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: XoXKashishXoX
SHARNA! YOU WROTE ONCE AGAIN!!😃😃 Omg this is amazing like seriously your gift of writing is so evident! And damn this is so realistic of what would actually happen! It's actually the most sweetest yet intense OS I've read. &wow you do a pretty good job even with assignments on your mind😉 haha Loved this and hope to see more from you😃

What?! I wrote? Really? when??? 😉😉

My gift is imagining Adi uorf Nakuul in every senario possible and TRYING to write it down into coherent and G Rated words 😆😉 But you know how we get carried away.. especially you and I.. 😉 But nonetheless, I AM SOOO GLAD you liked it 😃 I was just about to PM you informing you of my new work assuming you cared 😆 But yet again, you beat me to it 😳 Yeah, this OS of mine is a little different than the rest, its from Pankuri's POT entirely and describing what she's going through.. The ending was just for you, but I had to censor it 😉 Ifff you know what I mean 😉😉

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Kashish Malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awww how shweet?!😳 Thanks for thinking of me while writing the ending😳😆 No but this is actually so good and haha I just saw two things: Your ID and "OS" and that's it. LOL I can imagine what a challenge it is to keep to decency😉 Although hats off to you for doing that because I struggle with that😆

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Sukhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wow!! sharu... bishon shundor post... loved every bit of it... 🤗🤗

i can easily sense it out how pankhu wud feel at that moment... n the worst part wl be wen none of her family member wl spoke to her... awww poor pankhu...😭😭

i loved the part wen adi says tu mera kapdra pehenle... it might happn i thnk so... kapdra pack karneka tym nahi milega shayad... 😆

btw m realy wondering how wud be Avantu's reaction... she might hav a heartattack 😆😆😆

and the latter part ws soo sooo romantic... awww!!! just loved it... kash CV's show it... 😃😃😃

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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: XoXKashishXoX
Awww how shweet?!😳 Thanks for thinking of me while writing the ending😳😆 No but this is actually so good and haha I just saw two things: Your ID and "OS" and that's it. LOL I can imagine what a challenge it is to keep to decency😉 Although hats off to you for doing that because I struggle with that😆

HAHAHA, AWW You are too cute! Thanks for being so biased towards your behna 😆😉 But no seriously, so glad you liked it 😃

Ehh.. sometimes uncensored things are more fun, but we'll leave that to the PMs between us 😆 I was actually wanting to write something on their suhag raat haha, since I heard the PaYa wedding, and then I was in the shower last night and I was in a melancholy mood for some reason, and then this just came to me.. I was like I gottta write it haha and wrote it really qquickly, and added the last bit for youu

🤗 I knew you'd enjoy it 😉

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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sukhi...
wow!! sharu... bishon shundor post... loved every bit of it... 🤗🤗
i can easily sense it out how pankhu wud feel at that moment... n the worst part wl be wen none of her family member wl spoke to her... awww poor pankhu...😭😭

i loved the part wen adi says tu mera kapdra pehenle... it might happn i thnk so... kapdra pack karneka tym nahi milega shayad... 😆

btw m realy wondering how wud be Avantu's reaction... she might hav a heartattack 😆😆😆

and the latter part ws soo sooo romantic... awww!!! just loved it... kash CV's show it... 😃😃😃

AWW Sukhi 🤗 Thank you SO SO much for your sweet words! I am so glad you liked it 😳 Hahaha, I just had to add that part about Panku wearing Adi's clothes.. I thought it would be cute 😆😳

I think Avantika will be too speechless with shock at first then erupt like a dangerous and violent volcanoe 😆😕

I too hope CVs show us something like this, or something very good! We have way too high expectations for them 😆