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Sharna

@sharna2k6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

haha, me and suddenly fall out of love with Nakuul? That'll happen.when pigs start flying ; P and thanks again meri behna. I just hope I can love up to your expectation! :)

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Sharna

@sharna2k6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Thanks Prateek, glad you enjoyed it! :)

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PrateeK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sharna2k6
Thanks Prateek, glad you enjoyed it! :)

Welcome dear..😊

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Oh wow ... It's really very-2 Sweet dear ... Gud Luck for the exam... Take care

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Sharna

@sharna2k6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: NSohi13
Oh wow ... It's really very-2 Sweet dear ... Gud Luck for the exam... Take care

Aww, thank you. And yes, my exam went well also! :)

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

Aww, thank you. And yes, my exam went well also! :)

Oh that's great that you done gud in exam... Plz PM me the next part of this Story.. I really liked it... Plz continue it as soon as possible

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Sharna

@sharna2k6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: NSohi13
Oh that's great that you done gud in exam... Plz PM me the next part of this Story.. I really liked it... Plz continue it as soon as possible

There isn't another part to this, but I AM working on another OS currently ;) if you would like I can pm you with I post it :) thanks again for the enthusiasm :))

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

There isn't another part to this, but I AM working on another OS currently ;) if you would like I can pm you with I post it :) thanks again for the enthusiasm :))

Aww really no next part... But no worries can send me other one... I don't mind if I m getting nice thing to read... Your most welcome Sweety

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Fatima dureshahwar

@Ohmyjerryworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Omg sharna 🤗awsome

ur too good in write ups 👏😉

i luv this os alot plz make more luv reading it ❤️

i am not good LIKE U in words

seriously i luv it soomuch i luv u describe all the pankhuri feelings

ur amazing writer

Luv it soomuch

my fav line 4rm ur OS is

Aaj se, yeh tera kamra bhe hain. Hum pehle dost tha, aur aub humara dosti aur bhe ghera ho gaye hain. Chinta maath karna Pankuri. Meh vaada karthe hoon, mein hamesha tera saath dongi. Dosti ka promise.

Tu taak gaye honge. Change kar ke sou jaa. Wait. You don't have any of your clothes with you. No problem. For tonight you wear something of mine and tomorrow we'll take you shopping. No don't say no now. What's yours is mine, and whats mine is yours now!

i luv this whats ur is and whats mine is yours ❤️

Dosti ka promise 😳

wow ur too gud in describe paya imagination scenes when i was reading i felt wish i can see that scene in cuming episodes omg its too perfect 😉

right now just dreaming ❤️

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Sharna

@sharna2k6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Awww thank you so much Fatima for your sweet words. I'm so glad you liked it! Haha, when I was writing the parts, I felt like I could see Adi when he consoles Panku, his expressions.. The sweet way he would try to console her, take care of her.. PaYa are just incredible..

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