~*~P&S FF on PaYa~*~ / lover boy(update pg.6) - Page 5

Originally posted by: sudipta1988

hey payel ,,,,,,its truly amazinggg,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

my heart z also beating fast after reading dis ,,,

sweet story yaar ,,,,

vry nice gift for monday morning,,,:-)

Originally posted by: Dhara.ciara

PAYAL -only one thing i wana say...you too good writting it...

truly awsummm👏👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: payalibm

thats what i wanted

heart beat loosing...

thats the lovliest complimet i got... 🤗

awww

so sweet of oyu saying such sweet words.. 😳

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P

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OMG! Simply beautiful!

I wass screaming and jumping when adi lifted her ! haayee

I swear you made me go more crazy with all this romance ! when i write real romance what you gona do pandit..break your roof top darling..i hope not..coz i will shure gona make you cry for more... i promise 😈

When i read inside bedroom .. i got some crazy ideas ! 🤣 well there was some crazy scene...it was..i swear...say all thnxxx to my editor puche(sup) she dint let me...she said for 3rd part... it was quit sizzling for this session that was her remarks and said to end here only so no choice..so now utaro juta and do soem throwing at her...

awww then he kissed her on forehead ! *jaw drops* im going to read this part again and again! welll if this is the case then she was right...not to post that part and keep it for 3rd part...hahaaha..pandit..i serzly am not thinking what will happen when i will give some real romance and sizzling hot scene

LOVE IT ! to be on serzz note pandit...i am speachless at your warm compliment and i dotn know what to say...i am all mouth shut...only smiling like an idiot and reading your compliment again and again and again...

payal, i have no words for you! it was so perfect ! i could just imagine paYa while reading!

Thank you for such amazing os ! i serzlyyy dint knew you would love it this much...if knew would have writen it long ago... serzlyyy i am spechless and smiling like an idiot and loking so stupid..but i cant help it...thnxx swetuu for so much warm compliment and heartly replyyy

Keep writing, waiting eagerly for the next part! there is a catch..sup said i cant post before sat night or sunday... i ahve 3 rd,part all ready...but she is like said you to keep quit..so keep quit..and you know she will have my head offf and yet will play football with it and yet she wann kill me..if i posted 3rd part... 😭 😭

love youu! i too love you buuddyyy ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Amazing PagaL 😊

How u manage 2 write dis beautiful...

Originally posted by: EkSapnoKiPari

wooow!!! kuchi fab wrk jaan!
u did an amazing job! all thanxx to you sup...

i loved the romantic scenes they were jst gr8!! well described i cud see the scene infront of my eyes i know bby...

they walking together in such lovely weather n pankhu in his arms haye haye! just love it!!!! dont tell me..dont remind me...or i will start mising it terribllyyy 😡 then dont say its you whooo paid the priceee 😆

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ love u swettuuu wifeee

n hehehehe latika ko chord ke adi aagaya tht was jst fab even i loved ittt