Abhiya ff: PAINFUL LOVE * chapter-7 updated* 16/10

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Hrits

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Ye ho Kya Raha hai yaha??

Pehle hospital aur ab he's dead! 😭 And Piya is also trying to commit suicide! 😭

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Supervampire
abhay is no more...how it is possible?
pia is trying to kill herself
painful update
waiting to know the truth

Thanks for reading

Yup painful I know😭

I'll try to update soon

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: janumkrk
O GOD I DONT KNOW WHY ALL GIRLS ARE BEHIND MY ABHAY RK OR HARMAN ALWAYS HURTING HIM OR KILLING HIM... WHY???

THAT TOO MY ABHAY COMMITTED SUICIDE????

ABHAY IS NO MORE YOU MUST BE KIDDING... OR IT IS DRAMA CREATED BY ABHAY'S DAD AND NISHA TO TAKE HIM TO SOMEOTHER PLACE.

NOW PIYA IS ALSO TRYING TO GIVEUP HER LIFE..

UPDATE SOON WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE

Hehe..

Well for knowing its a drama or not!! ..you'll have to wait!!

I'll try to make it fast dear..

Thanks for reading😊

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm
I just read the chapter 1
It's awesome

Thanks for reading dear😊

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm
Read chapter 2
Loved it
Thnx for the pm

no need to thanks dear😛

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: hriti713
Ye ho Kya Raha hai yaha??
Pehle hospital aur ab he's dead! 😭 And Piya is also trying to commit suicide! 😭

I know updates are emotional, but what to do as it's a painful story😭.

Thanks for reading😛

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

CHAPTER-3

She close her eyes

"I ...love..you ...Abhay' Piya whispered as she tightly hold the knife.

Suddenly someone rudely pushed her hand away n slapped hard on her face.

Piya opened her eyes and found her mom glaring at her..

" what the hell u were trying to do" Sugandha shouted.

"Wo...main.." Piya stammered looking down.

Sugandha hugged Piya tightly

" plz beta ..never ever try to do this again..u know na tumhare bine is duniya me mera koi nahi hai"

"I...m..I'm.. sorry..mom...but mom main kya karu...mera Abhay mujhe chor kar chala gya wo bhi mere foolishness ki wajah se...main nahi ji sakte uske bina...mom main kya karu ...tell me mom" Piya sobbed

Sugandha made her sit on bed n tried to console her .

...

Piya was standing in a dark forest n screaming.

" ABHAYYY...ABHAYYY...WHERE ARE U ABHAY"

Then someone tapped on her shoulder!

She turned around her head,and there he was HER ABHAY

Piya immediately hugged him n sobbed" kaha chle gye the tum Abhay...plz dubara kbhi mujhe chor kar maat Jana ...I can't live without you..."

After not getting any response Piya break the hug n looked at Abhay sadly.

On seeing tears in Abhay's eyes her heart ached

She hesitantly caressed his face n was about to wiped his tears

When Abhay stopped her n gently pushed her hand back.

Piya confusingly looked at him

Abhay started to leave..

Piya tried to stop him " Abhay ...stop..plz don't leave me...Abhay.stop plz..."

But Abhay didn't listened n kept walking away from Piya..

Piya opened her eyes n shouted

"ABHAYYY..."

After hearing Piya's scream Sugandha rush towards piya's room n found her sweating badly.

It was horrible for Sugandha to see Piya like this .

It has been 1 month since Abhay died

But still Piya not able to move on.

Its really hard for a mother to see her daughter accusing herself for someone's death, crying herself to sleep n waking up panting n sweating.

Feeling her mom's presence Piya clam herself n went to washroom as she don't wanted to stress her mother

Lil' bit she knew that her mother was already worried for her.

As Piya clossed the washroom door Sugandha thought that she needed to do something coz she can't see her daughter like this...

Next day...

Piya was sitting in her room lost, when someone cover her eyes from back.

Piya came back to reality with a jerk.

She touch the hand n whispered..

"Jai..."

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So guyz this the 3rd chap. I know u guyz would be angry on me for not revealing the past, but I promise after few chaps it will be revealed .

I know I'm not a good writer so thanks for bearing me ...

Plz plz plz keep voting n commenting coz they means a lot to me..

I'll try to update the next chap asap

Till then

Bye n TC🤗

Edited by Pkyekdiehardfab - 7 years ago

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sonia khanna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Too painful.asa ni hona chaiye.what's the matter.why it happens

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Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: soniakhanna01
Too painful.asa ni hona chaiye.what's the matter.why it happens

I'll reveal it soon dear!!

Thanks for reading😛

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yuvashree

@janumkrk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

jai???want is happening here??

reveal mystery soon... but my abhay... pia is in guilt,

waiting for next update and dear you are really a good writer.. am loving your style of writing..

but am against someone troubling my abhay so please don't give him to much pain