Abhiya ff: PAINFUL LOVE * chapter-7 updated* 16/10

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

It is interesting story

but sad one

the only difficulty for me that most of the dialogues are in hindi and I can't understand it

So if you please can write it in english

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Amazing concept..

Fab start..

Cont. Soon..

Loved it !

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Supervampire

@Supervampire

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Amazing update

very curious to know about their past

lets see what happened in past

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

oh god really painful update 😭
abhay killed himself coz pia didn't trust him🥺
all that happened coz of that bitch panchi 😡
nisha did the right thing she showed that bitch panchi & her mom truth 👏
I feel bad for pia but somewhere she is also responsible for what happened
now pia's mom call jai & pia also start smiling
for sure now pia's mom will convince her to marry jai which I don't want to happen 😒
but I don't know if im right or not feeling that nisha took abhay with her far from everyone so they wont hurt him 😕
hope im right & abhiya will meet
continue plz

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Pkyekdiehardfab

@Pkyekdiehardfab

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: janumkrk
super update dear, hope jai is a positive character... i have many guess but nothing is connecting perfectly..

piya pov is good, now pia is turning little ok with jai's presence.

what is in the box.. Raichand family shifting... i smell something fishy..

yup Jai's positive here😉

Thanks for reading😛

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Pkyekdiehardfab

@Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: soniakhanna01
Part4 ,
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Nothing to say

Thanks 😳

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Pkyekdiehardfab

@Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm
Oh I loved chapter 4
Thnx for the pm dear

m glad u loved it!!

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Pkyekdiehardfab

@Pkyekdiehardfab

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai
It is interesting story
but sad one

the only difficulty for me that most of the dialogues are in hindi and I can't understand it
So if you please can write it in english

oh!! actually chapters are written before n now I really don't have time to edit them..but whenever I'll be writing the new chaps...I'll keep it in mind!!

Thanks for reading😊