Abhiya ff: PAINFUL LOVE * chapter-7 updated* 16/10 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: janumkrk

jai???want is happening here??

reveal mystery soon... but my abhay... pia is in guilt,

waiting for next update and dear you are really a good writer.. am loving your style of writing..


but am against someone troubling my abhay so please don't give him to much pain

Thanks
m glad u loved this ff.
hehe...m sorry n promise I won't trouble Abhay anymore.
thanks for reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: soniakhanna01

😭 so much painful😭

yea 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHAPTER - 4


Piya whispered. 'Jai...'



Jai- 'Jai O God Piya tumne mujhe aaj bhi hra diya.

Piya- ' kyu ki aise stupid harkate sirf tum hi kar sakte ho'

Piya said rolling her eyes.

Jai- ' what !! STUPID are Piya correction STUPID nahi SMART.

Piya- ' O really!!'

Jai- 'Aur nahi to kya, waise Piya hum pure do saal bad mil rahe hai aur ...'

Jai observed her from top to bottom n said

Jai-' aur tum kafi moti ho gaye ho'

Jai immediately ran out of the room after saying this.

Piya -' U MORON ...main chorungi nahi tumhe'

Piya shouted n ran behind him

In few minutes the whole house turn into a play ground.

Piya was throwing whatever came in front of her at jai

While Jai was running to save his life n shouting ' AUNTY BACHAO'

Piya gave a devil smile n said ' Tumhe aaj koi nahi bachane wala Jai Khurana'

Sugandha who was listening to all this from downstairs was very happy.

She appreciated herself for calling Jai here .

She can see the result was very pleasant.
Suddenly she heard a THUD!! n looked in that direction

And there was her favorite flower vase on the flour broken into million pieces.

Well the result was not so pleasant but she wud never mind sacrificing a flower vase for her daughter's happiness.


Next day...

Sugandha was very to see her daughter smiling after such a long time.

After breakfast

Sugandha : Piya actually mujhe shopping karne jana ..kya tum dono mere sath chaloge .

Piya: mom shopping...

But Sugandha interrupted her

Sugandha: plz beta its important..mujhe ek friend ke liye birthday gift kharidna hai.

Pita: okay mom.

Sugandh was happy coz Piya had closed herself in this house since Abhay died.

Piya created a shell around her which is slowly breaking now.

Sugandha also asked Jai to join them and he politely refused them by saying that he had to complete some important works.

But deep down her heart Sugandha knew that Jai wanted her to spend some time with Piya alone.

After mother daughter left

jai got busy in completing his file until he got interrupted by door bell.

Jai opened the door n found a man standing there with a box in his hand.

Jai: Yes.

Man: Sir I came from Raichand Mansion.

The name Raichand took Jai attention he knew that Piya's in-laws are Raichand n he was hell angry on them coz they were accusing Piya for Abhay's death.

Though he had no idea about their past but how cud someone be so low that they didn't allowed Piya to meet her husband for the last time.

He came out of his trace when that man called him.

Man: excuse me sir!

Jai: umm...yes how can I help you.

Man: sir actually Raichands are shifting today, so Dadi asked me to give this box to Piya mam.

Jai: okay I'll give it to, anything else.

Man: no sir and thank u.

After taking the box Jai closed the door.

He was hell curious to know what's inside.

But he tried to make his subconscious mind understand not to snoop into any bodies personal things

Suddenly he bummed into something before he fall he quickly hold himself but two dairies fell out of the box.

He kept the box on table n picked both the dairies.

By inspecting it he found that one dairy belongs to Piya n other one to Abhay.

Yes its not good to sneak into someone's dairy but he wanted to know about Piya's , coz he knew that neither Sugandha aunty nor Piya will tell him the past.
And without knowing the past it was impossible to ease Piya's pain for him. Yes he wanted Piya to move on in her life by forgetting all her bitter past.

So he quickly kept that box in Piya's room n moved towards to the guest room where he is staying know.
Jai open the dairies n started reading.
-----------------------------------------------------------guys m going to reveal the past trough this dairies Piya's part from her dairy wud be like Piya's POV n Abhay's part as Abhay's POV
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Piya's POV .

My life takes 180 turn when I came back from London after completing my studies n found my Misha my best friend lying lifelessly on hospital bed.


Misha dobriyal

She has been in coma since one year n nobody tried to inform me .

She was an orphan .We met when I came to Delhi for completing my graduation.

After completing my graduation I reluctantly returned to London coz mom's health was not good at that time,n we lose all contact then.

Now I'm feeling so helpless for not being by her side when she needed me the most.

I silently sobbed holding her hand

Piya: I'm so sorry Mishu...kash main tumhari koi help kar patai..

I got interrupted by a unknown voice

Voice: Tum uski help kar sakti ho Piya

I looked in the direction of voice n found miss Mary she was the wardon of Misha's Orphanage n a very kind hearted lady.

Piya: How aunty

Miss Mary: culprit to saja dilake.

Piya : main kuch samjhe nahi aunty.

Miss Mary: Raichand are responsible for Misha's condition dear. Raichand ki car ne hi takkar mari thi Misha ko...I think Raichand's ka beta tha uswak car me...but un Raichands ne kharid liye police department ko ...aur hum kuch nahi kar paye...

By this she started sobbing .

While my blood was boiling l knew about Raichands I had heard it from mom n even mom hated Raichands but I never asked the reason.

Raichands were very powerful family but now no power can stop me from take my revenge.. revenge for my friend's condition.

Piya: I will take the revenge aunty.

I said in a determinant voice.

I'm coming Raichands to take my revenge from your son...

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Hope u guys will like this chap
Keep voting n commenting...

Edited by Pkyekdiehardfab - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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do it soon
happy to read another abhiya love story
Vampire nd human love story all time favourite..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

do it soon

happy to read another abhiya love story
Vampire nd human love story all time favourite..

I'll dear
BTW I updated chapter 4 just now..plz check it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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super update dear, hope jai is a positive character... i have many guess but nothing is connecting perfectly..


piya pov is good, now pia is turning little ok with jai's presence.

what is in the box.. Raichand family shifting... i smell something fishy..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part4 ,
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Nothing to say
Edited by soniakhanna01 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh I loved chapter 4
Thnx for the pm dear

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