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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: .rumki.
awesome update
loved it
reading Abhiya os after a long time

Thank you😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

After a million years I logged in here only for you

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first of all, omg feels like after a million years later im commenting here specially I read something on abhiya after so long. when did you learn to write such hot stuff? 😲 😆

after all these years they are still bickering together and whats better their keeping their hots like this after many years of marriage. they cant even control themselves in public and they are married for years. nothing sounds better than that.

Edited by .SmokeySilence. - 7 years ago

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

I loved it. Thank you thank you. That Abhay struggling with his tie was cuteee I loved the os. So won't kill you today. let's see maybe next time.

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Mandy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Will these two stop torturing each other? 🤣 Nice jugalbandi btw 😆 And corridor of all places? 😆 And during a reunion? Interesting choice of a place 😛 Really did miss ur writing Shreya 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
I loved it. Thank you thank you. That Abhay struggling with his tie was cuteee I loved the os. So won't kill you today. let's see maybe next time.

Ayyeee dhamkiii😆

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon
Will these two stop torturing each other? 🤣 Nice jugalbandi btw 😆 And corridor of all places? 😆 And during a reunion? Interesting choice of a place 😛 Really did miss ur writing Shreya 😊

I think they'd torture each other till they're old and grey😆

Yeah I think that situation hasn't ever been done before so .. 🤣

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cuteariya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

im so glad to see ur writing again on abhiya 🤗
thank so much for such a amazing OS dear 🤗
wow so hot hot abhiya 😳
loll pia was in mission to torture abhay for forget their anniversary 😉
but her plan backfired with abhay single touch 😉
misha knew something happed between abhiya 😊
oops alina found abhiya making out but thank god she didn't see them naked 😉
when alina brought misha they found abhiya cute fighting 😆
look like abhiya love to tease each other 😉 ❤️
hope u will continue on abhiya

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: cuteariya
im so glad to see ur writing again on abhiya 🤗
thank so much for such a amazing OS dear 🤗
wow so hot hot abhiya 😳
loll pia was in mission to torture abhay for forget their anniversary 😉
but her plan backfired with abhay single touch 😉
Unfortunately yes hahaha
misha knew something happed between abhiya 😊
oops alina found abhiya making out but thank god she didn't see them naked 😉
when alina brought misha they found abhiya cute fighting 😆
look like abhiya love to tease each other 😉 ❤️
hope u will continue on abhiya

Thank you so much for liking and commenting. Means a lot. It's a one-shot so I can't continue, it ends here...😆

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kirti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Finally read it! Mamta's trailer had raised my anticipation ;)

Ok so backdrop is Piya in her sexy vixen mode to "punish" Abhay cz he forgot their anniversary!☺️ Well I would be angry too and punish him in another way with a danda😡 The way Piya was dressing was like a volcano was all bubbling up and about to erupt *literally*🤣 Poor Abhay clueless as usual 🤣

Misha-Kabir's small interaction made me smile :)

WTH is wrong with Shamta? Still having hopes? and Ruhi LOL Piya complaining about Ruhi being enthu around Abhay was kinda cute lol

Coming to the volcano part-1☺️ ☺️ that is all I can say & for part-2 too ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ & suggestive words from Piya were well, very...ah suggestive 😉

Overall a wonderful piece Shreya, as usual I must add 👏

Gave me feels of this song "All Of Me" by John Legend.

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
Finally read it! Mamta's trailer had raised my anticipation ;)
Ok so backdrop is Piya in her sexy vixen mode to "punish" Abhay cz he forgot their anniversary!☺️Well I would be angry too and punish him in another way with a danda😡The way Piya was dressing was like a volcano was all bubbling up and about to erupt *literally*🤣Poor Abhay clueless as usual🤣

Misha-Kabir's small interaction made me smile :)
WTH is wrong with Shamta? Still having hopes? and Ruhi LOL Piya complaining about Ruhi being enthu around Abhay was kinda cute lol

Coming to the volcano part-1☺️☺️ that is all I can say & for part-2 too & suggestive words from Piya were well, very...ah suggestive😉

Overall a wonderful piece Shreya, as usual I must add👏
Gave me feels of this song "All Of Me" by John Legend.

Hahahahahaha. Yeah Piya was - as usual - angry at him for something he doesnt even know about.
Shamta grew up and became one of the gossip wali aunties. Sweet sa happy ending mein maza nahi aaya. 😛
suggestive mein Abhay bhi toh tha, wo nahi dekha? 😉
I haven't heard the song, will check it out.

Thank you for the comment Kirti, means a lot :D